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[mdemaz]

Single material man.

Hook is the only bad thing..You killed the verses.

[Atone]

Single material man.

Hook is the only bad thing..You killed the verses.

really wish i could make a music video lol

[mdemaz]

Single material man.

Hook is the only bad thing..You killed the verses.

really wish i could make a music video lol

[Trimss]

Man you need some serious help on your mixing I think, Solace has a computer microphone I think and he manages to have great quality. I think you and I have the same problem.. Staying on beat.

You have some good rhymes and with some mixing help it could be like 10000 times better.

[mdemaz]

Man you need some serious help on your mixing I think, Solace has a computer microphone I think and he manages to have great quality. I think you and I have the same problem.. Staying on beat.

You have some good rhymes and with some mixing help it could be like 10000 times better.

I still dunno how the fuck Solace pulls that off, it's phenomenal.

[Atone]

it's amazing how everyday more and more ppl are gettin into my music, ppl are really spreadin the word on Twitter,

[Cobo Black]

I would have to agree with a guy a few comments above me. Your problems are mixing and staying on beat. Common problem around here it seems, people here have great lyrics, but still working on riding the beat...which is fine because that part is fixable.

Keep practicing man and keep pumping out songs.

[Almostlity]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.

[Atone]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.

jealousy is a bitch man

[Almostlity]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.

jealousy is a bitch man

I'm jealous? mkay.. Jealous of what? Poor lyrics,horrible hook, horrible mixing, god awful quality?

cmon son.

[SajN]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.

If you are going to post here, then give proper feed.

[Almostlity]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.

If you are going to post here, then give proper feed.

That was proper feed. I expressed my feelings about the song.. and it was umm, Laughable.

[SajN]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.

If you are going to post here, then give proper feed.

That was proper feed. I expressed my feelings about the song.. and it was umm, Laughable.

Stop kidding yourself.

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[Nefarious]

It sounded off beat, but it was so off that it was on, i could hear what beat you were on, and what you did was something i could probably never do in a million years, even the chorus was weird because it was on beat but off beat at the same time, this whole song just tripped me the fuck out lol, but in a good way, i could hear sick lyrics through the whole thing, it mightve not been the best beat to rap fast on, but if that would be true, you just chose a different approach at it and it worked, if there was a contest of who can rap the best like this, people would be afraid of you haha.