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AhdduB - Why So Serious?

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AhdduB - Why So Serious?

Postby Ticalrecords » Oct 18th, '11, 16:03

proof of feedback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=132163


jumped on a reeeally really old French Montana Beat. tell me if i did it justice


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Re: AhdduB - Why So Serious?

Postby Eedee » Oct 19th, '11, 01:39

Samples used were awesome. Good choice. :y:

Lyrics were okay, funny at times. Your voice was too low, needed to be a bit more volume up in that bitch... Faded out at times and couldn't hear what you were saying. Beat was meh, nothing too fancy or memorable. That sounded too quiet as well. Better mastering of the overall sound and it could be a song worth giving more than two listens to. I like your writing style, though. Intriguing. :)

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Re: AhdduB - Why So Serious?

Postby Ticalrecords » Oct 20th, '11, 21:35

bump like a mofo
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Re: AhdduB - Why So Serious?

Postby Nefarious » Oct 21st, '11, 01:05

This was enjoyable to listen to, im not sure what verse i liked more, it stayed pretty sick, i liked that i could hear you better than, How I Feel, your delivery is pretty solid in ur songs, it sounds like you know what ur doing when your rapping your lyrics cuz you put alot of different emotions and expression into ur voice through ur verses, and the chorus was cool to, kinda reminded me of nirvana or sumthing.. i dunno but i liked the feeling of this.
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Re: AhdduB - Why So Serious?

Postby Ticalrecords » Oct 23rd, '11, 20:54

thanks guys for the feedback, much appreciated
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Re: AhdduB - Why So Serious?

Postby Tranquil » Nov 4th, '11, 08:56

Aight, sorry this took a while but here we go.
The quality isn't really all that, and the vocals are WAY too low so it was really hard to figure what you were saying. You had a nice flow though, if you got a better mic and some better mixing this woulda been great. Keep it up man! :y:
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