Tranquil (Explicit) - Random 20

[Tranquil]

Aight. I haven't posted a song in fucking ages, due to me not having a mic. Well I just brought one and wrote this quick 20 bar verse. Its not the best due to me being a little rusty for not recording in ages, but its still good oh and Tranquil is my new and FINAL rap name from now on. So take a listen, and post your thoughts!

Link:
http://limelinx.com/files/43c3a52192faa ... 71a932d2e5

LoF:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=132271&p=1792779#p1792779

[Ticalrecords]

i liked it man, your flow is real nice. sometimes it was hard to understand what you were saying but thts cuz i aint used to the accent (we Americans are elitists like that). the lyrics were cool, i heard some shit that stood out to me. its some nice work

i got another song that needs some feedback, if you are interested: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=132634

[BumShiv]

goodshit brah and Holyshit where you get that beat?

[Tranquil]

Thank you both for dropping bye
@Ticalrecords, thanks man! I'll check that track later tonight, got some stuff to do
@RecoveryEminem I don't actually remember where I got the beat, Ive had it for ages though and I found it the day I got my mic and just recorded this, lol

[BumShiv]

word lmao sick beat thoo. Great song too

Whenever you have time mind feeding this
viewtopic.php?f=69&t=133105

[Nefarious]

I heard you on kind of a papoose flow lol, i dont ever listen to him but i heard that alphabetical slaughter song he did and this really reminded me of it, beat was sick so were lyrics, sick lil track.

[Tranquil]

I heard you on kind of a papoose flow lol, i dont ever listen to him but i heard that alphabetical slaughter song he did and this really reminded me of it, beat was sick so were lyrics, sick lil track.

Ive never listened to any of Papoose's songs, might check that one that you mentioned out though!
Thanks, expect some more shit soon!

[mdemaz]

Good start, flow is consistent, content is ok, love the accent, sick-ass punches and jokes.

I've never actually heard any of your stuff, and this is making me extremely interested.

[Tranquil]

Good start, flow is consistent, content is ok, love the accent, sick-ass punches and jokes.

I've never actually heard any of your stuff, and this is making me extremely interested.

Thanks man!
And I'm pretty sure you have heard some of my stuff, I think I remember you feeding one of my tracks months and months ago when I use to go rap under the name 'Explicit'

[mdemaz]

Good start, flow is consistent, content is ok, love the accent, sick-ass punches and jokes.

I've never actually heard any of your stuff, and this is making me extremely interested.

Thanks man!
And I'm pretty sure you have heard some of my stuff, I think I remember you feeding one of my tracks months and months ago when I use to go rap under the name 'Explicit'

Damn...I'm getting senile in my old age..
I remember now, I was still a dumb fucking idiot PMing people for collabs thinking I was the shit..
Good times..

A forum can change you like hell..

[Trimss]

That beat is great man, and I like what you did with it.
smother myself in chloroform (Shady Cypher? )

Sick track man. You have a good delivery even though it feels like you're holding your voice or something, nah?

Good start, flow is consistent, content is ok, love the accent, sick-ass punches and jokes.

I've never actually heard any of your stuff, and this is making me extremely interested.

Thanks man!
And I'm pretty sure you have heard some of my stuff, I think I remember you feeding one of my tracks months and months ago when I use to go rap under the name 'Explicit'

Damn...I'm getting senile in my old age..
I remember now, I was still a dumb fucking idiot PMing people for collabs thinking I was the shit..
Good times..

A forum can change you like hell..

Hell yeah. But look, you improved a lot. It didn't change you in a bad way. And if you're still making collabs, we should do it again. The last one was made too fast, I feel like we could do better than that.

[Tranquil]

That beat is great man, and I like what you did with it.
smother myself in chloroform (Shady Cypher? )

Sick track man. You have a good delivery even though it feels like you're holding your voice or something, nah?

Was that line used in the Cypher? I might have to re-check the cypher haha, anyway thanks man, I just listened to it again and yeah my delivery does sound kinda mono-tone I guess, but awell

[Block]

Your delivery needs to sound more natural. You sound... I don't know how to place it... Like you're trying too hard. Your flow us real choppy. Just work on those.

[Tranquil]

Your delivery needs to sound more natural. You sound... I don't know how to place it... Like you're trying too hard. Your flow us real choppy. Just work on those.

Yeah I agree with you, but as I said I'm a bit rusty at the moment, but shit is coming out great on some tracks I recorded this week!