Mat Demaz- My Realization (Freestyle 14)

[mdemaz]

This will be the last track I post here for a long while, as I'm pretty much attracting unwanted ridicule for the test songs.
I'm gonna spend the next month or two creating Lyrical Death.
A 20 track 75 minute LP with a 10 track bonus disc with high quality tracks, professional punch ins/outs, high treble vocals, better doubling, stereo panning and recycled lyrics from past shit fests of albums.

This will be my true debut album.
This track was taken during the Lyrical Death sessions last night, this is the template for the complex songs.

Please give constructive feedback..I'm sick of the UH UH UH DERP ENUNCIATION EH EH EH OFF BEAT..
Give me ways to improve, or I won't improve.
I'll remain a shitty rapper and if by some miracle I get famous you will all hate me, and I need the strength of the underground more than ever, if I lose that, I'm fucked.
And I know none of your guys wanna collab with me because I "suck" you don't have to say it.
I thought it was all about the music though..Now I just feel dumb that I ruined epic beats with my bullshit.



Lyrics:

Nah
fuck this man
no more no
fuck this no shut up
death kill pain lyrical death agony suffering aahhhh

I'm about to explode at the top of my lungs
everyone tells me to step it up well here you go cunts
I'm sick of this pain I'm fucking letting it out
I've taken this shit long enough you're all getting fucked now
I realized I suck now I'mma raise the pinnacle
my time is now man the demon's face is visible
I'm gonna diss and fuck people up I've had it
I'm coming for you faggots so go on get mad bitch
yeah threaten my life see if I care there's hell to pay
I don't give a fuck I'll probably kill myself anyway
rip out your spine ass-fuck you with your severed head
drug you with shit so I can rape you and you're never dead
I'm vile I only see death in these brown eyes
I've completely lost sanity I'm defiantly gonna see you die
when you see the whites in these eyes you know you're done for
should of thought twice before fucking with me dumb whore

(Chorus)
death in these eyes all I see is agony
go on hate me I don't care verbal me tragically
I'm too old to be sad too old to be happy
too fucked up to care my realization is looking at me 2x

LOF:
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Now come on guys, this is definitely an improvement.

[Eedee]

YEAH BOY! THIS IS THE SHIT WE ALL WANT!

The vocals are GREAT! The lyrics are ON BEAT AND ON POINT! The enunciation is fucking fantastic. The emotion is there (without the growling and inchorentness)!!! You fucking MURDERED THIS BEAT!

Btw - where the hell do you get all these sick beats from? It's like you just pull them outta your ass, man.

But I'm dead serious. If this is the quality of Lyrical Death (and by all means you're only going to get better as you continue making tracks for it), then HOLY SHIT... LD LP is going to be just murder my man.

You have a fan, dude haha.

Keep THIS shit up!

[mdemaz]

YEAH BOY! THIS IS THE SHIT WE ALL WANT!

The vocals are GREAT! The lyrics are ON BEAT AND ON POINT! The enunciation is fucking fantastic. The emotion is there (without the growling and inchorentness)!!! You fucking MURDERED THIS BEAT!

Btw - where the hell do you get all these sick beats from? It's like you just pull them outta your ass, man.

But I'm dead serious. If this is the quality of Lyrical Death (and by all means you're only going to get better as you continue making tracks for it), then HOLY SHIT... LD LP is going to be just murder my man.

You have a fan, dude haha.

Keep THIS shit up!

Now now, I don't like yes men dude..
It's one of the reasons why I sucked for soo long, nawmsayin'?
But thanks for the kind words man, I have this in the bag.
The LP is going to be brutal as fuck with some disgusting and ridiculous lyrics and I'm gonna be going at people and dissing them.
Should be fun.

I basically stayed up all night testing the vocals and then it hit me...high treble, high warmness and low cut off..That's the perfect tone.
I could use that tone on any beat.

BTW, I'm gonna use all these beats again in full on the LP.

[Eedee]

YEAH BOY! THIS IS THE SHIT WE ALL WANT!

The vocals are GREAT! The lyrics are ON BEAT AND ON POINT! The enunciation is fucking fantastic. The emotion is there (without the growling and inchorentness)!!! You fucking MURDERED THIS BEAT!

Btw - where the hell do you get all these sick beats from? It's like you just pull them outta your ass, man.

But I'm dead serious. If this is the quality of Lyrical Death (and by all means you're only going to get better as you continue making tracks for it), then HOLY SHIT... LD LP is going to be just murder my man.

You have a fan, dude haha.

Keep THIS shit up!

Now now, I don't like yes men dude..
It's one of the reasons why I sucked for soo long, nawmsayin'?
But thanks for the kind words man, I have this in the bag.
The LP is gonig to be brutal as fuck with some disgusting and ridiculous lyrics and I'm gonna be going at people and dissing them.
Should be fun.

I basically stayed up all night testing the vocals and then it hit me...high treble, high warmness and low cut off..That's the perfect tone.
I could use that tone on any beat.

BTW, I'm gonna use all these beats again in full on the LP.

Wasn't trying to be a yes man. You've improved dramatically and it pumped me up to hear you spit so clean and shit. It's a nice work you put out there. Keep it up.

[mdemaz]

Just making sure..I'm getting tired of it man..People need to speak up and tell me what's wrong..
People need to realize I don't pay out the ass for my gear, so it's pretty amazing I even managed this quality..

[RainMan44]

This is definitely an improvement from other tracks I've heard from you.

The flow was....actually dope.

I LOVED the melody of the chorus. That shit was tight. The verse was dope as well.

I know you want constructive feedback, but I don't see what I can tell you. Because it seems you HAVE taken steps towards improving.


You're going to just keep improving from here on out.

Good stuff man, keep it up.

[mdemaz]

This is definitely an improvement from other tracks I've heard from you.

The flow was....actually dope.

I LOVED the melody of the chorus. That shit was tight. The verse was dope as well.

I know you want constructive feedback, but I don't see what I can tell you. Because it seems you HAVE taken steps towards improving.


You're going to just keep improving from here on out.

Good stuff man, keep it up.

No doubt..
It's all good now..

[Tranquil]

Okay. I've listened to some of your other songs but didn't bother feeding because you weren't really improving in them, this one however shows a bit of improvement. You were on beat, the flow was a little sketchy at points, but when you master the punch-ins you wont have that problem anymore. The delivery seemed a little too laid back for the content that the song was getting across. If you established a bit more anger then your delivery would've been on point, but that all comes with further practice. When you record kind of aggressive songs, its best to record them when your in a really aggressive mood, the delivery comes across great that way.

The lyrics were good, loved the content and pretty good rhyming, also liked the lyrics on the hook allot actually.

The only tips I could really give you is the delivery bit. You could also try to sing along with 2 or so tracks before you record to get your vocals warmed up, because the problem with most people, is they don't do that, so the first verse's delivery sounds a little dull compared to the 2nd or 3rd if thats the order that they record it in, so try that out and also drink a little bit of water before you record, it will make your vocals sound fresher.

Also try to memorize the lyrics, its always better to record off the top of your head then reading it off paper, that also helps the delivery sound better, there were a few points in the song where it kinda sounded like you were reading it off paper.

Thats really all the tips I could give you other then just continue to practice man. I did the opposite to you when I started out, I didn't release albums/mixtapes and such, just songs. But now I'm working on my first mixtape/album whatever you wanna call it, cause I'm confident with my work. So yeah, just really practice allot and such.

Good track, its a pretty big stepping stone compared to the other tracks Ive listened to of you.


Oh and could you drop by and give my little warm up track a listen? I would appreciate it.
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[mdemaz]

Okay. I've listened to some of your other songs but didn't bother feeding because you weren't really improving in them, this one however shows a bit of improvement. You were on beat, the flow was a little sketchy at points, but when you master the punch-ins you wont have that problem anymore. The delivery seemed a little too laid back for the content that the song was getting across. If you established a bit more anger then your delivery would've been on point, but that all comes with further practice. When you record kind of aggressive songs, its best to record them when your in a really aggressive mood, the delivery comes across great that way.

The lyrics were good, loved the content and pretty good rhyming, also liked the lyrics on the hook allot actually.

The only tips I could really give you is the delivery bit. You could also try to sing along with 2 or so tracks before you record to get your vocals warmed up, because the problem with most people, is they don't do that, so the first verse's delivery sounds a little dull compared to the 2nd or 3rd if thats the order that they record it in, so try that out and also drink a little bit of water before you record, it will make your vocals sound fresher.

Also try to memorize the lyrics, its always better to record off the top of your head then reading it off paper, that also helps the delivery sound better, there were a few points in the song where it kinda sounded like you were reading it off paper.

Thats really all the tips I could give you other then just continue to practice man. I did the opposite to you when I started out, I didn't release albums/mixtapes and such, just songs. But now I'm working on my first mixtape/album whatever you wanna call it, cause I'm confident with my work. So yeah, just really practice allot and such.

Good track, its a pretty big stepping stone compared to the other tracks Ive listened to of you.


Oh and could you drop by and give my little warm up track a listen? I would appreciate it.
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=133037

Dude, you got no idea how happy I am to hear this!
Much love fam'!
Stay hip-hop!
Feeding now!
viewtopic.php?f=76&t=133270&p=1796197#p1796197
EP leaked btw, go and download it for the lulz.

[Atone]

This will be the last track I post here for a long while, as I'm pretty much attracting unwanted ridicule for the test songs.
I'm gonna spend the next month or two creating Lyrical Death.
A 20 track 75 minute LP with a 10 track bonus disc with high quality tracks, professional punch ins/outs, high treble vocals, better doubling, stereo panning and recycled lyrics from past shit fests of albums.

This will be my true debut album.
This track was taken during the Lyrical Death sessions last night, this is the template for the complex songs.

Please give constructive feedback..I'm sick of the UH UH UH DERP ENUNCIATION EH EH EH OFF BEAT..
Give me ways to improve, or I won't improve.
I'll remain a shitty rapper and if by some miracle I get famous you will all hate me, and I need the strength of the underground more than ever, if I lose that, I'm fucked.
And I know none of your guys wanna collab with me because I "suck" you don't have to say it.
I thought it was all about the music though..Now I just feel dumb that I ruined epic beats with my bullshit.



Lyrics:

Nah
fuck this man
no more no
fuck this no shut up
death kill pain lyrical death agony suffering aahhhh

I'm about to explode at the top of my lungs
everyone tells me to step it up well here you go cunts
I'm sick of this pain I'm fucking letting it out
I've taken this shit long enough you're all getting fucked now
I realized I suck now I'mma raise the pinnacle
my time is now man the demon's face is visible
I'm gonna diss and fuck people up I've had it
I'm coming for you faggots so go on get mad bitch
yeah threaten my life see if I care there's hell to pay
I don't give a fuck I'll probably kill myself anyway
rip out your spine ass-fuck you with your severed head
drug you with shit so I can rape you and you're never dead
I'm vile I only see death in these brown eyes
I've completely lost sanity I'm defiantly gonna see you die
when you see the whites in these eyes you know you're done for
should of thought twice before fucking with me dumb whore

(Chorus)
death in these eyes all I see is agony
go on hate me I don't care verbal me tragically
I'm too old to be sad too old to be happy
too fucked up to care my realization is looking at me 2x

LOF:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=133231

Now come on guys, this is definitely an improvement.

just posted this on my twitter bro, this is one of your best

[mdemaz]

I was wondering why it was getting soo many views, lol..
Thanks man!!

[RainMan44]

i came back and listened to this again. so fucking dope. this is really a good track bro. add a second and third verse and make it full song!

[mdemaz]

i came back and listened to this again. so fucking dope. this is really a good track bro. add a second and third verse and make it full song!

I already had the whole thing wrote, this was just a 30 minute session tbh..

I gotta knuckle down and start doing 20 tracks of fucked up brutality.
Probably going from now to March next year..I gotta craft each song perfectly.

[Trimss]

The intro is cool lol, and the way you verse starts too.

This is one of your best work I think, go and listen to your old stuff and you'll clearly see how you improved.

Good job.