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Nefarious - Tomorrow

Postby Nefarious » Oct 30th, '11, 02:51

Been working on this one for a while, fits in well with my dark songs lol.

http://hulkshare.com/m09yrtw92wh3

Lyrics

Verse 1

Change is strange, so i remain the same.
And im afraid to say that im in major pain.
I wanna save the flame but if it rained today.
Then i would wanna run away or would i pray to stay.
Cause im inside of a cave, and when i try to escape.
Then i can finally make up for when you lied to my face.
Im wide awake and i was always full of pride ive embraced it.
Came alive and ive taken control of all of my hatred.
Redirected so whatever i say i can be selective.
Elecretic im feeling energy enter me in a second.
An entity not an enemy you should become a friend of me.
And maybe you could learn about something that you pretend to be.
I wouldnt recommend, that you copy, its never necessary.
Even at your best your barely, even to what nef can carry.
Never worry theres a way to make it less embarrassing.
Thinking of what your cherishing taking a breath of air again.

Chorus

Sit and i wait for tomorrow because there is no today.
And i dont miss all the pain and the sorrow, im wishing it would go away.

And i dont know how much more i can take of this im breaking.
Everyday its getting harder to contain with every risk im taking.

Verse 2

Wake your eyes, you cant escape the lies.
Cuz im in the line so you know your gonna wait behind.
I want to take my time, with every basic rhyme.
So i can make you mine when i erase your mind.
Its not a crime, to be evil and violent in a song.
Or is it, im just saying that ive been all along.
And im another kind, the type to strike last.
So what will i be doing tonight, you might ask.
I sit on my white ass, and light the right grass.
I like to type fast, and snipe with sight, blast.
Your life out of your grasp, and put it in these hands.
You wouldnt agree with me cuz you couldnt and we can.
I shouldnt be saying, all of the pain is so sad.
Ashamed in every way that my day will go bad.
I say, i never fall, im praying for better off.
Cuz i dont want to be crazy i may be forever lost.

Verse 3

Why am i even focusing in, i mustve broke into twenty.
Pieces, and now i'm losing all of my friends.
I wanna cease this, feeling ive reached.
A new era to call it an end, never make an error.
Im a terrible horrible man, im out of orbit again.
Scared of nefarious when he carries a sword in his hand.
Im as important as being sane, forward and rearrange.
Out of order the freakin game unfortunately it changes.
More to me than my name, escorting you into flames.
Im making the same song and recording it everday.
So i'll never be afraid, you take my hand now.
And you follow me, and we can escape we cant drown.
The lake is not big enough, fate cant break us.
Wait for the momment and take it dont give it up.
Shake inside, your weak body and soul.
You cant make it alive and nobody will know.


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Re: Nefarious - Tomorrow

Postby Ticalrecords » Oct 30th, '11, 19:00

seriously man, there hasn't been a single chorus that hasn't been a head bopper, your hook writing is so on point its ridiculous! I liked this one better than Limited, not sure why, you had a line in your third verse about holding a sword that made me go eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! that was some nasty stuff man. other than that, i'd say this one is a keeper. do you have a mixtape in the works?

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Re: Nefarious - Tomorrow

Postby Nefarious » Oct 30th, '11, 20:08

Yeah pretty much alot of the songs on my Hulkshare are keepers theres 15 there, the only one i doubt the most is Limited, just because it was one of my neglected songs for so many years. tyvm
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Re: Nefarious - Tomorrow

Postby Ticalrecords » Oct 30th, '11, 21:35

foreal Limited sounds like it would fit along side your other stuff. i'd say full speed ahead you got a good body of work. are you doing shows over in Finland? (thats where your from right?)
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Re: Nefarious - Tomorrow

Postby Nefarious » Oct 30th, '11, 21:48

Lol, no im from Hamilton Ontario Canada, and ive never performed in my life.
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Re: Nefarious - Tomorrow

Postby Nefarious » Nov 4th, '11, 01:18

Bump
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Re: Nefarious - Tomorrow

Postby Tranquil » Nov 4th, '11, 09:00

I love dark songs! haha. The beat is fucking sick, really fits the theme. Your flow and lyrics are on point, and your delivery. 00:35 - 00:47 was SICK. I can't criticize this song because its pretty much perfect. I've got a dark song in the works, wanna collab on that shit? :worship:
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Re: Nefarious - Tomorrow

Postby Nefarious » Nov 6th, '11, 02:56

I wouldnt know how to do that, it would be more work for vettori id have to ask him and i dont want to bother him lol. :sweating:
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