I Aint No Joke

by **Atone** » Nov 5th, '11, 13:23

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGoMAZBRGXc

the song that comes on after is just a promo version, it's produced by Bum Shiv, the full track will be available soon

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by **Trimss** » Nov 5th, '11, 20:41

Man. Go out and buy a cheap ass microphone in a Walmart or something, it costs like 15$ MAXIMUM. Buy a 9$ one, I'm sure there are a lot.

I don't know your financial situation but you have to improve that in order to let us "enjoy" your music.
That would be a big ass step.

Your lyrics aren't bad. But def' need a better quality, and try to construct your rhymes and to flow.

"drums drums drums snare"
"snare drums drums snare"

"I hate bitches and gays
Hey what do you say"

I'm not an expert at this shit, but try to place your ending line when the snare hits man. Anyone who wanna correct me, feel free!

:b:

by **mdemaz** » Nov 5th, '11, 23:43

What Trimss said sadly..
But if you feel that this is the way you wanna rap, and you got people liking your stuff on Twitter, then don't stop.

by **Atone** » Nov 6th, '11, 00:00

once i get a job and get the money i do plan on upgrading my stuff

by **4NorthTL** » Jan 6th, '12, 15:50

Same as before, way off beat, vocals way too loud, no emotion in your voice. It sounds like you're giving a book report.

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