Block wrote:Reminds me of a lot of grind time stuff I hear (the pella style shit). Not bad at all. I'd like to hear you on a beat, though. I don't think I ever have.
Raw link (for lyrics and such): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s4LRIGL9Sxc
Block wrote:Reminds me of a lot of grind time stuff I hear (the pella style shit). Not bad at all. I'd like to hear you on a beat, though. I don't think I ever have.
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Master Chief wrote: I swear if I get perm. banned for giving out REAL feedback...
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Hey man, if that's how you feel, it's all good dudeMaster Chief wrote:Good job at biting Tech N9ne's growling sound brah.
Honestly, this was aimless as fuck. Besides the fact that I didn't understand what the fuck you were saying, the multies were forced beyond human comprehension, this is clearly a worse case than Geno's. This is as good lyricism as Crooked I, that's definitely not a compliment. Matter of fact, it's almost like a carbon copy of his BET cypher on that beat, I wouldn't be surprised if these were the lyrics to the original version of his verse on that cypher and you managed to get a hold of 'em. If this is the direction you're going with this "Hip Hop shit that you're not fucking around with and taking serious", then you're not gonna make it anywhere nor is this music anyone would willingly listen to and enjoy.
Your flow and breath control were literally the only above average traits exhibited on this track. Your delivery, personally, annoys me but then again most white, suburban kids weren't born with voices for rap.
Maybe I'm annoyed with the amount of shitty netcees attempting to rap that don't know how to make real music and instead go with the 7,000 multis per millisecond route but this is the truth and is in no way shape or form hating. This is the exact same feedback should be gives to 60% of people trying to rap. I COULD say all of this the nice way but that would be no fun, now would it?
Lol @ all the ass-kissing/fakeness in this thread. Truly repugnant. I swear if I get perm. banned for giving out REAL feedback...
Nollie wrote:Hey man, if that's how you feel, it's all good dude
But please understand that I'm not really "trying" to do anything. It's just good times
As for all of the multi's and shit? that's just how I enjoy writing dude I have plenty of straight-forward, laid back shit, but it's just not as fun to me. I like the puzzle part of writing more than anything. Figuring out how many things I can have rhyme with how many syllables, then minimizing the amount of filler words while still painting a picture. It's really a passion of mine. This is part of the reason why I was doing the tech growl. I was emphasizing my rhyming abilities (I have other reasons, which I explained in the comments).
Now, you say that you can't understand anything I'm saying. Yet I know I have near perfect enunciation (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KpMInHqwlcc). What is it that you think I'm doing wrong in that regard?
But as for your theory that I got my hands on Crooked I's rough draft(s) of his BET verse? And then copied him? just fuckin god damnit
You are a very angry person ಠ_ಠ
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