I wrote this when i was 17, and when i recorded it, it was deleted, so i never recorded it again until now, im 21 haha, its still pretty damn good for being that old maybe just the chorus lacks a bit energy.
i just got to listen to it now in headphones, and i noticed we forgot to take out some of my breath's lol, like a HUGE one i heard, usually i dont breathe that much but i did it all fast and didnt mind minor errors, we recorded + mixed in about a half hour, we already recorded a bunch before so we were in a rush to get back to my place, so the quality may also lack in some areas.
http://hulkshare.com/srowi00d2mw0
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