MahMooD - Caught up in Confusion

[Mahmoud48]

ya 2 tracks in one day yay...i just wanted to get this song outta the way
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http://soundcloud.com/mahmood-1/caught-up-in-confusion

[mdemaz]

Ok.
I'm going to be real now.

Your equipment is terrible, but I will overlook this and focus on your content.
You have the voice and delivery nailed, but sometimes you go off beat constantly and that's pretty annoying.

At around 1:34 you had a sick flow, but then it just collapsed..
You started going off beat and then it sounded horrible.

Don't get me wrong, I think you have serious potential, but you need a lot of work dude.
You got the heart, but you lack the lungs.

Peace doe, keep dropping.

[Mahmoud48]

Ok.
I'm going to be real now.

Your equipment is terrible, but I will overlook this and focus on your content.
You have the voice and delivery nailed, but sometimes you go off beat constantly and that's pretty annoying.

At around 1:34 you had a sick flow, but then it just collapsed..
You started going off beat and then it sounded horrible.

Don't get me wrong, I think you have serious potential, but you need a lot of work dude.
You got the heart, but you lack the lungs.

Peace doe, keep dropping.

thx...i honestly just wanted to get it out the way i know i went off beat it pissed me off
and i forgot to master it how i ussually do

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