XFactor's Astro Got Em’s Permission to Alter Lose Yourself

[iain08]

I'm lost in the moment
I look around expecting to see a few friends, but i only see opponents
my job, I'm on it
they don't think i really want it, (huh)
what about the fact that a few years ago i was homeless
but this ain't a pity factor, so I don't show emotions
I just get on stage hopin they feel it when I'm flowin
fifteen, living the dream, with grown men waitin
for me to fail, like the results got everybody waitin
snap back to reality, (huh) i dress casually
black sweaters, they mad at me
but im winning happily
from bk new york, it's something like the jungle man
you make it outta there its kinda hard to be a humble man;
plans to go ahead and make this money
cause only thing free was the host of BET

I got classics that ya'll ain't even hear yet
I made it this far and I ain't shed a tear yet
boo hoo, enough with the sad stories
i can't depend on my pancreas to make insulin for me
but I ain't trippin, I aint speaking about it in interviews
give me space like the interlude, got an igloo
full of cavemen thoughts, and imma let em out
biography with the lyrics ,they show you what I'm about
last year i was unknown, but now Im major
and knockin em out with the flow like a boxer, rest in peace Joe Frazier;
if this is my one shot, trust i won't blow it
and imma give my all like i owe it

durr.

I'm fifteen. And I can write multi's..

and your multis are not hard to write. you can have the greatest multis in the world and still sound like total shit. harder to have a good flow, good voice, and be catchy while sounding bad.
im feelin myself and not afraid to show it
if you put me on stage imma own it

[Brannian]

I don't get it. A novelty thing, I guess?

Tell the kid to learn how to write multis before rapping over the Lose Yourself instrumental.

He's fifteen.

I'm fifteen. And I can write multi's..

Age isn't an excuse. It's all about skill, clearly this kid isn't showing his talent, IF he has any.

Just because he knows rap, and listens to fucking artists like Big-L doesn't mean shit.

Would you guys still appreciate Eminem if he wasn't lyrical? If he just used one syllable rhymes?

Rhyming is a central part of hip-hop, not "putting your heart into your song" nor "emotions".

If eminem had the same lyrical content but sounded like waka flocka no one would like him. This kid is an AMAZING performer and he has MEANINGFUL lyrics. His lyrical skill will only get better. Stop hating because he's more talented than you ever will be.

[Sam.]

@ people reacting over diabetes as if it's a serious disease like cancer. Talent speaks nothing else, some of the legends had the worst diseases and we still like them, why? because of their work & come on he is just a kid with a dream, everyone has one, right?

[TommiTMX]

I thought I'd add the extra rhymes I'm guessing you missed them on purpose though, this just gives a full picture.

I enjoyed this though he can definitely improve though he's miles better than me , admittedly that's not hard!

I'm lost in the moment
I look around expecting to see a few friends, but i only see opponents
my job, I'm on it
they don't think i really want it, (huh)
what about the fact that a few years ago i was homeless
but this ain't a pity factor, so I don't show emotions
I just get on stage hopin they feel it when I'm flowin
fifteen, living the dream, with grown men hatin
for me to fail, like the results got everybody waitin
snap back to reality, (huh) i dress casually
black sweaters, they mad at me
but im winning happily
from bk new york, it's something like the jungle man
you make it outta there its kinda hard to be a humble man;
plans to go ahead and make this money
cause only thing free was the host of BET

I got classics that ya'll ain't even hear yet
I made it this far and I ain't shed a tear yet
boo hoo, enough with the sad stories
i can't depend on my pancreas to make insulin for me
but I ain't trippin, I aint speaking about it in interviews
give me space like the interlude, got an igloo
full of cavemen thoughts, and imma let em out
biography with the lyrics ,they show you what I'm about
last year i was unknown, but now Im major
and knockin em out with the flow like a boxer, rest in peace Joe Frazier;
if this is my one shot, trust i won't blow it
and imma give my all like i owe it

[iain08]

^ I was just highlighting the multis because emineninsider thinks that without them, a song is nothing. so now he probably thinks it's good.

[ThomasJ]

Rhyming is a central part of hip-hop, not "putting your heart into your song" nor "emotions".

This is the dumbest comment I have read in a very long time, and a million facepalms wouldn't do it justice.

[Sam.]

Rhyming is a central part of hip-hop, not "putting your heart into your song" nor "emotions".

This is the dumbest comment I have read in a very long time, and a million facepalms wouldn't do it justice.

Quote's in agreement, he's dumb.

[momentsgolden]

Rhyming is a central part of hip-hop, not "putting your heart into your song" nor "emotions".

This is the dumbest comment I have read in a very long time, and a million facepalms wouldn't do it justice.

[Illmatic_]

It was good for his age but ruined it by saying swag at the end.

[iain08]

yeah fuck putting emotion and feeling into it when you can rhyme a bunch of bullshit words that make shit all sense.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Rhyming is a central part of hip-hop, not "putting your heart into your song" nor "emotions".

[EminemInsider]

^ I was just highlighting the multis because emineninsider thinks that without them, a song is nothing. so now he probably thinks it's good.

Those aren't multis you idiot.

The verses suck. There are thousands upon thousands of internet rappers who put that kid to shame, and there are MILLIONS who could write a verse like that. Correction: There are millions who DO write verses like that, and it makes me uncomfortable to hear them because these people don't really "get it" yet.

[iain08]

Those aren't multis you idiot.

The verses suck. There are thousands upon thousands of internet rappers who put that kid to shame, and there are MILLIONS who could write a verse like that. Correction: There are millions who DO write verses like that, and it makes me uncomfortable to hear them because these people don't really "get it" yet.

What the fuck are you talking about? you're the same guy who throws a fit about aligning syllables perfectly while pretending to be an expert on rhymes, right?

Not multis? mad at me/casually. homeless, (e)motions, moment.

If eminem said those you would be highlighting the fuck out of them.

snap back to reality, oh theres goes gravity

he was following the same rhyme scheme as that ^ and you're saying it's not a multi?

http://www.loseyourselflyrics.blogspot.com

weird how that's highlighted in there as a rhyme.

[Blu]

Rhyming is a central part of hip-hop, not "putting your heart into your song" nor "emotions".

This is the dumbest comment I have read in a very long time, and a million facepalms wouldn't do it justice.

So..

You take emotion over rhyming in hip-hop?

Wow. Dumbest person I've met in a loooooong time.

[Blu]

yeah fuck putting emotion and feeling into it when you can rhyme a bunch of bullshit words that make shit all sense.

What the fuck are you on about..?

Have you heard Eminem's Relapse album?
Have you heard EVERY track or do you just constantly bump Beautiful & Deja Vu?

Do you think Eminem actually went out and killed a bunch of sluts, just to CAPTURE THE EMOTION for that album?

Smart-ass.