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Re: Verse/ Faith

Postby HAYZI » Sep 4th, '05, 19:52

Faith99 wrote:I suck up emotions, hatred pain liek a fuckin magnet,
I have relied on my instincts, to long to repel from my life thats unset
That's unbread, and held in less oxygen then you need to be dead
Set up point and forward "yea whatever he said"
Whatever I said, fuck that plagerism shit, Be Your own saint
Don't give up your ideas, way to faint, Just take the time to repaint,
This image that represents you, and your true colours, Yea tha's what id do,
Try to reset yourself,Try to be what your not,Try everything give it all that you got,
Nothings gonna change by the snap of your fingers, Maybe the snap of my finger
Go figure, But i'm bigger, and i am proud, that i live my life, half it anyways in a cloud,
Tryin to find out who is or is not, on my side in this world, is it all just set up,
My mind mangled and twirled, Being beaten and stabbed, "Oh my god what a thrill"
It's not a thrill to me, it just sends all these chills down my back, Wow get the fuck off that,
Crack get high whats worth To be stabbed, It's worse then your one of a kind asshole of a dad,
Who wants to make your life a living hell and is glad,
Well ill be glad But lemme state that i'm not mad,
I've just Had,
The fuckin ultimate end of this bullshit, it's sad,

You be the judge if it should go in 5this aight, I'm actually not feelin it today, but check it

"Faith"




thats good shit faith i dont kno whether it will fit with the tone of the song tho what dya think v-dog
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 19:53

it doesnt fit with what the song is about, but its a really hot verse
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 19:55

Where Do You Get Those Avatars???????????
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Postby Vettori » Sep 4th, '05, 20:08

WOW, eh my bad, It sux lolz, it's aight to admit it,
i didnt really no what the topic was about,
So tell me what it's about, and ill make one up now

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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 20:09

its juss like... a verse where u battlin sum 1 ight? im out imma be back on later on, ight ~1~
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Postby 4D » Sep 4th, '05, 20:59

V-DogDaMenace wrote:Where Do You Get Those Avatars???????????


Hayzi stole them off me :D
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 4th, '05, 22:11

FORDIE wrote:
V-DogDaMenace wrote:Where Do You Get Those Avatars???????????


Hayzi stole them off me :D


how did i steal them off you theyre off rap central
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 5th, '05, 14:53

Title: The Arrival
Artist: T12


-Intro-

(Verse 1 : V-Dog)
-Im DROPPIN-HITS-TO-WIN-THIS-SHIT cuz i could "Air my keys" like i "MAKE-THIS-TYPE-IN-THE-WIND", your the "OPPOSITE-OF-A-KILLER",last I heard, you "ATE-DICK"-LIKE-ITS-A-"SIN"
-Me I BREAK-YA-FUNCTION cuz u "suck the boards" when I WRECK-WIT-FULL-"BLOWZ-DROPPIN-KEYS", If RANK-IS-NUTTIN please tell me why you're only in TEKNICAL-FLOWZ-PRODIGY
-Kid your GIGS-ARE-GAY, I "drop like prison heads flowin" as I "DIVE-IN-CELL-WAVES",you betta DIG-YA-GRAVE cuz like "2pac" said, you can "live" now, but after this duel you'll "DIE-IN-L.A."
-Imma SERVE-THIS-HOT cuz like "poopin on half court" my "SHIT-KEEPS-BOARDS-IN-CENTER",Your "VERSES-DROP like virgin sex wit bent dicks", only accidental "SHIFTS-BEFORE-YOU-ENTER" /
-im "MOLDIN-THIS-SHIT with punches" like "swinging FISTS-IN-PLAYDOH", im SCOLDIN-THIS-BITCH cuz syndicat's "no pro-teen"(protein) only has "flows concealed in tabs" like "TWISTED-FAYGO"
-***** I HOIST-CREWS-I-BLAST cuz this kidz like "stupid gangstas" hes only "PROUD-TO-CRIP-WALK" my skripts knock ya "VOICE-THROUGH-YA-ASS" cuz u only know HOW-TO-"SHIT-TALK"
-my punches RIP-HOLES-THROUGH the screen with a keyboard placin a "X through ya name" and a "CROSS-IN-YA-SOUL", Im sorry sindicate but after i DISPOSE-YOU it'll be your 8th LOSS-IN-A-ROW
-Yo "mobil lips are fractured" im "MOVIN-MOUTHS-OVER" cuz this boys "weights' recycled"cuz he SPITS-"POUNDS-OF-JUNK", you winnin this is like "POOPIN-OUT-CLOVERS", ya "SHIT-OUTTA-LUCK"


(chorus)
This is the arrival,
archetypal rap disciple
now you betta start prayin and take out your bible
survival of the fittestand t12 the biggest,
because we cover the earth just admit it your finished
This is the arrival,
archetypal rap disciple
now you betta start prayin and take out your bible
survival of the fittestand t12 the biggest,
because we cover the earth just admit it your finished




(Verse 2 : HAYZI)
...ring the bell, let off the claxon
ting-a-ling-a-ling here i come ready for action
wanna go eye to eye, toe to toe
and high for high, low for low blow for blow,
im hittin you quick like a jet of lit propane
comin... straight for your brain like its cocaine
*****'s flappin their gums i attack 'em for fun
cos theyre thinkin theyre clever theyre as wack as they come
its my time to take my crown
i rock at the top and continue to break more ground
its intangible how i vandangle your brain
manhandle you simple and plain like van dam would do
we bringin the tracks to chill your spine
verbal attacks in time to heal your mind
i make mcs retract and backtrack to robbin
clear the vicinity lyrically like a carpet bombin


(chorus)
This is the arrival,
archetypal rap disciple
now you betta start prayin and take out your bible
survival of the fittestand t12 the biggest,
because we cover the earth just admit it your finished
This is the arrival,
archetypal rap disciple
now you betta start prayin and take out your bible
survival of the fittestand t12 the biggest,
because we cover the earth just admit it your finished

(chorus)
This is the arrival,
archetypal rap disciple
now you betta start prayin and take out your bible
survival of the fittestand t12 the biggest,
because we cover the earth just admit it your finished
This is the arrival,
archetypal rap disciple
now you betta start prayin and take out your bible
survival of the fittestand t12 the biggest,
because we cover the earth just admit it your finished


-Outro

Sick Track!



and it still aint too late faith
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Postby shadypelkey » Sep 5th, '05, 22:54

[chorus 2x]
so as we say it in our verses
ain't no out there can verse us
and if you really wanna try
make sure you ain't afraid to die
cause you just might just might die tonight
T12 ain't here to fight
were here to make your life go out of sight
pulling the plug lights out
Internet thugs just back out
taking you down serious without a doubt
tell me what you think of em' now

what u think of that?
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 5th, '05, 22:57

shadypelkey wrote:[chorus 2x]
so as we say it in our verses
ain't no out there can verse us
and if you really wanna try
make sure you ain't afraid to die
cause you just might just might die tonight
T12 ain't here to fight
were here to make your life go out of sight
pulling the plug lights out
Internet thugs just back out
taking you down serious without a doubt
tell me what you think of em' now

what u think of that?



dat was ight
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Postby shadypelkey » Sep 5th, '05, 23:03

ya nvm fuck that the one u got is better
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 5th, '05, 23:06

shadypelkey wrote:ya nvm fuck that the one u got is better




what?
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Postby eminemcaparica » Sep 5th, '05, 23:07

V-DogDaMenace wrote:
shadypelkey wrote:ya nvm fuck that the one u got is better




what?


he's saying that your rymes are better
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 5th, '05, 23:10

oh ok
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Postby shadypelkey » Sep 5th, '05, 23:37

no i'm sayin that other chorus is better
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