Spy & Sam - 3 Minutes Til Death

[Spyder]

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Sam
I lip lock these loaded guns and open fire,
Holiest priests defamed as reckoned liars,
Use cycloptic vision to hold undivided attention,
Voluntarily draft for death defying missions,
Angels with dismembered wings go down without a fight,
Negate the second coming of the immortal Christ,
Devil's son born with infinite lives,
Heavens tremble in my presence like nuclear testing sights,
Turn a deaf ear when death comes calling,
Crash the last supper and kill the left one's starving,
Weed your thoughts and corrupt your moral high ground,
Undergo strange transformation and imitate wolf night howls,
Planting detonating device to fill this hole in my mind,
Hold breath and crescent moment stay forever frozen in time,
With live bombs strapped to my chest I embrace the pain,
Commit grave mistake of human gluttony I crave insane,
Book a date with dead ends in pursuit of happiness,
Dismiss almighty god excellence and worship all Satanists,
Devising time machines to escape from the demons of the past,
Lead the way that even strongest of the god's divert their path,
Release my shadow causing an eclipse blinding the sun,
Meaning of life explained in last words of the dying Jason,
Harvest death on grounds of humanity,
Voice escapes into the space bound for infinity,
Look for life source inside of a morgue,
In deep sleeps my body possessed souls often talk,
Put my foot down in parletic stroke,
Get to the core of things with magnetic force,
Live in the well making every death wish come true,
Circle the Sahara in heavy armour with gum boots,
Close mind and open eyes,
Head and torso go their separate ways having broken ties,
Contract diseases on corporate level,
Pen my shortcut to success with carpal tunnels.

Spyder
Labeled as an abomination, bombin nations at astonishin rates
Pools of tar pitch steamin, carcass eatin as bugs crawl from my face.
Immortal, leavin you doomed sink my teeth in the wound
As a baby I saw every mother fucker as I peeked from the womb,
Grabbed every strand of semen, was snappin it
Let one live just so I could have someone to battle with.
We were then made reality, first him then she had me
My identical twin killed himself knowing he’d never match me. (haha)
Leave you in a gruesome trench, bleedin bruised and red
Demon crude and dead, even my headstone is Medusa’s head.
Iller than cystic fibrosis puttin kids into instant psychosis,
Convincing the suicidal to fly with my verbal hypnosis.
Poison lips potent, kiss of death’ll leave you long gone
I don’t leave opponents jaws dropped, I give em lockjaw.
Im carryin the worlds weight on my shoulders, mistook for Atlas
Food for thought so hot, you cant match it by ingestin books of matches.
Killin soldiers all along streets, sorrow ya fleet
So paranoid I strangled my shadow for followin me.
Chronologically imitate every serial killer movin along,
Smile at my work and say to myself “they were doin it wrong.”
Lone wolf stormin, leave you dormant in a crimson sea
Last man on the planet standin, so im just spittin soliloquies
Infrared vision increase, along with lunar activity
Lycanthrope slicin throats, scream at the moon for what it did to me.
Champion I hold the torch, explosive force from Mojolnir sword
Rip their throats and form instruments made from their vocal cords.
Open sores, siphoning life through opponents pores n’ bomb squads
If your Jesus I’m Moses… ill split whatever you walk on.
Then use my Hercules arms, pull terrain and leave you astound
shift the earth back so my opponents defeated on even grounds.
Leave em in a state of silent praise, watch em maimed
Dismember bodies, chalk outline resembles hopscotch games.
Wheel of misfortune spins, I buy the dictionary for rappin text,
Brain cavity pulses, I spit obituaries that havent happened yet!

[Sam.]

Both of us nailed it, people don't sleep on this one.
Please.

[Spyder]

if this gets slept on we have a sad section.


Sam feed everyone of you guys, virtually everyone of your pieces.
thats a lot of feed with people like me geno nutz zabe and jp
dropping so often.

he rarely drops verses, so to not return the favor. is pretty pathetic

[Mr.DGAF]

Will feed this properly later tonight, just wanted to reserve the spot so you guys know I'm not sleeping on this.

[Spyder]

[J.R.]

Will feed this properly later tonight, just wanted to reserve the spot so you guys know I'm not sleeping on this.

Sam..
Your Eminem's lost child I swear to god. That bitch adopted 2, but you're biological. This was the best work I've ever read from you.

Spy, You usually go hard and shit, no real critique usually for you. And that's the case here...I don't know what y'all want me to say.

Mad respect.

[Man1x]

Will feed this properly later tonight, just wanted to reserve the spot so you guys know I'm not sleeping on this.

Word to this, dinner with the family, gonna work with JP, then I will return the feed. Not sleeping on your piece.

I don't write any more but I'ma still be feeding, I promise by Sunday this will be fed

[Sam.]

This thread is full of promises like the government policies.

[SG.]

Shit, this is how a collab is done!

Sam: I still can't believe you're quitting. After that verse, I am in shock. The vocabulary was great, the punchlines were great, errthang was great. I'm still mad at you for quitting when you owe me a verse, but this was the best apology you could ever give. Shame to lose you.

Spyder: Buy a mic. Buy a mic and turn up at Eminem's door and do this song. Seriously, I don't think I've ever read something so good. There is literally no criticism for this. None whatsoever. Keep killing that shit.

The chemistry between you two is amazing, and if Sam wasn't quitting, I would've suggested you make a duo.

[Spyder]

well Sam this shit is gonna get feed tomorrow i guess

[Sam.]

well Sam this shit is gonna get feed tomorrow i guess

lol

[JamaicanPattlez]

Okay, you guys went HAM on this!

Sam: You've really improved a lot, and holy crap at your large vocabulary! It flowed exceedingly well, and I was hung onto every bar you wrote, keep it up. I definitely think you should be dropping more, because stuff like this is a great example of a written verse. I'm curious to hear you spit it though, it'd be intense, no doubt. Great job.


Spyder: Alright first off, are you recording at all in any way? Your verse was out of this world, this is fuckin' crazy. Flowed really well, and I honestly can't criticise it, man. Sorry about that. Both of you killed it. Makes me want to get my ass in gear! Haha. Great job, you guys.

[Spyder]

haha thanks JP, ya my man Sam be slayin em im gettin on his ass to write more.


and i actually am just getting serious about wanting to do audio.
i recorded a verse today and think it decent... until they make me cry
but concentrating on flow and delivery hinders my lyrics, so be prepared

[Sam.]

Okay, you guys went HAM on this!

Sam: You've really improved a lot, and holy crap at your large vocabulary! It flowed exceedingly well, and I was hung onto every bar you wrote, keep it up. I definitely think you should be dropping more, because stuff like this is a great example of a written verse. I'm curious to hear you spit it though, it'd be intense, no doubt. Great job.


Spyder: Alright first off, are you recording at all in any way? Your verse was out of this world, this is fuckin' crazy. Flowed really well, and I honestly can't criticise it, man. Sorry about that. Both of you killed it. Makes me want to get my ass in gear! Haha. Great job, you guys.

This piece is full of Punch lines, like I told you before.

@ Spyder: You murked me on this one, I guess.Your Punches were really crazy as compared to mine.
Did I fare well?

[Mr.DGAF]

In the words of Snoop, "oh shiznit." This was absolute fire man, I had a feeling when you guys were planning this that it would be hot. I wasn't wrong. I don't know where to start to be honest...

Sam, your freaking vocab man. That's incredible, because, as I'm sure you know, it takes a good balance of vocab to make a piece have that "it" factor. If you get too wordy, it looses it's punch. And it can disrupt the flow. To be honest, I didn't get that vibe at all man. I think I've said it before, but your verses, at least the ones I have read, are really poetic. Everytime I read your verse for this, it just vibes with a poetic feel. Lots of clever lines as well, I think that's why I thought this piece would be so good. You and Spyder are a lot alike in terms of the vibe I get from reading your verses. The second bar was my favorite, in particular, the volunteering for death defying missions part. This was a very good verse my man, the only real criticism I have, and in this case it's minimal, is that sometimes the rhyming is eh. At least for the end rhymes, words like satanists and happiness don't rhyme too well man. It depends on your accent, I guess.

Spyder, damn bruh. Yet another impressive verse man. Like this shit:

Killin soldiers all along streets, sorrow ya fleet
So paranoid I strangled my shadow for followin me.
Chronologically imitate every serial killer movin along,
Smile at my work and say to myself “they were doin it wrong.”

Damn dude. That's some really clever stuff, makes me wish I had thought of it. And the killing your identical twin line, dang. This verse was full of a bunch of really impressive lines that meshed surprisingly well. By all technical standards, this verse is amazing. And I was really feeling how you guys executed the topic, so I like it from that standpoint too. There's really not much I can criticize this verse for, the punches were tight as always, the flow was on, the multies were pretty damn slick. This is an impressive verse man, I'm almost tempted to say it's perhaps the best verse I've read from your new EP.

Hell of a collab from you guys, I was pretty impressed.