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Grim - Fragment (Shrapnel Instrumental)

Postby Willy » Dec 7th, '11, 06:25

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jHMeB8Y_m-E

Let me know what you guys think!

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Re: Grim - Fragment (Shrapnel Instrumental)

Postby Willy » Dec 9th, '11, 03:47

Was really hoping I could get some feed.. always trying to improve. Help a brotha out guys :y:
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Re: Grim - Fragment (Shrapnel Instrumental)

Postby Solace » Dec 10th, '11, 18:24

Never heard the original, but you did really well. I don't have much to critique upon, you seem to be doing great. This is like your 2nd song and you're at my level? Fucker haha. Dope chorus by Slug, obviously. Gonna have to listen to the original sometime. Both verses were really good, I liked the adlibs, you clearly grasped multies and flows. The start convulsing part was hilarious. :laughing: But yeah, you definitely are becoming one of my favourite Audio heads on the forum. Mixing was good too.
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