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Newww shitttttttttt againnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 19:32

ayo my SOUNDS~ABSURD it'll POUND~YA~VERSE and make ya crews PUSSYS~DISPERSE/ leave u DROWNED~IN~HURT, beat me? stop bein cocky ill bury you UNDERGROUND~IN~DIRT just ta make you more 'DOWN~TA~EARTH'/
I hope ya not RHYMIN~TA~ME cuz I don't LIKE~WHAT~I~SEE like the near~sighted TRYIN~TA~READ/ I leave you BLIND~AND~DECIEVED cuz if you battle me your sure ta be left FINDIN~YA~FEAT/ (feet-de'feat)/
LOSER~BEWARE ima leave ya CREW~IN~DESPAIR/ SPEW~SHIT~I~DARE but WHO~REALLY~CARES cuz u couldn?t ?rock tracks? if I GLUED~IN~YA~HAIR/
I'm bout ta RAMPAGE ya FANBASE 'til they MANDATE that i AM~GREAT/ when i JAB~JAKES im so accurate i even LAND~FAKES/ im bout ta BLAST~PAPE' cuz my crew got more 22's (GUNS) than the muthafuckin BALLET/
Im RAPIN~THIS~WACK~FIGURE, throwin away some PAPERS~AND~STACKS~LITTER/ You need ta TAKE~OFF~THAT~GAY~PICTURE cuz you couldnt 'fire a bullet' if you LAID~OFF~A~PAST~WIZARD/
For this WACK~N~GAY~CAT ima SMACK~YA~WAY~BACK just for BATT'LIN~XZYLE/ Im just PASSIN-STRAIGHT~FACTS you a rider, you "chase more Dick' that CAPTAIN~AHAB/
Im SPITTIN~FACTS~NOW these BITCHES~ACT~FOUL once they hear a RIPPIN~GAT~ROUND/ these EXPLICIT~RAP~SOUNDS will leave ya 'ass up' in a casket cuz you DIDNT~'BACK~DOWN'/



dis rap was againts sum guy i battled
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Postby Vettori » Sep 4th, '05, 20:09

Thats pro, lolz
Nice workman
i give that one a 9

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Postby eminemcaparica » Sep 4th, '05, 20:31

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Postby Wendy » Sep 4th, '05, 20:33

Hey caparica, why don't you like Limp Bizkit?
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Postby eminemcaparica » Sep 4th, '05, 20:37

Wendy wrote:Hey caparica, why don't you like Limp Bizkit?


first i don't like their music, and second they had beef with Eminem
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 23:08

thanks alyssa
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Postby Wendy » Sep 4th, '05, 23:10

You don't like Jadakiss either? And who's Fat Bich?
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 23:12

Wendy wrote:You don't like Jadakiss either? And who's Fat Bich?


who are you talking to?
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Postby Wendy » Sep 4th, '05, 23:14

caparica.
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 4th, '05, 23:15

Wendy wrote:You don't like Jadakiss either? And who's Fat Bich?


fat joe i think
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Postby eminemcaparica » Sep 4th, '05, 23:34

no i don't like fat joe and jadakiss. why?
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 23:35

do ya want me to spit sum more shit?????????!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Sep 4th, '05, 23:48

ight check dis out....


Put you in a box, and let you LIVE IN THE DARKNESS, this KID IS LATHARGIC, and you won't Clap Back like 'Ja', yeah I FIGURED YOU'RE HEARTLESS, so I'll 'Assault'-this-bitch, no box office-flick, but i'll make "Pre Sink" like the motion PICTURE HE STARRED IN!!!(Assault on Precinct 13)
With scriptures in target, i'll FINISH THIS STAN SEE, you beating me's like a DENTIST WITH CANDY, this WRITTEN'S UNCANNY, but you could flow with Andretti, and you're still not SPITTIN IT GRAND PRE!!!(Grand Prix)
V-Dog isn't a fan, please, Larry the Cable Guy's the only time this FAG GITS R DONE, and challenge tough niggas, please, i've HAD BIGGER ONES, this TASK'S MINIMUM, 'Un signed?' Only on my BAD INTERIMS!!!
Bastard the fact is I won, 'Screw with this kid?' not if you MOLESTED A BUNCH OF YOUNG, take the breath from ya CHEST AND YA FUCKIN' LUNGS, while you givin' head to REZZ, BRUH YA SUCKIN' NUTS, so step and your DEATH WILL ABRUPTLY COME, you nice on 'tracks?' of course homie, yep, ya anCESTORS CONSTRUCTED UM!!!
Test V? This chump is dumb, cuz niggas couldn't spit ill in a HOSPITAL CYPHER, You wouldn't 'have a shot' with a GLOK OR A RIFLE, so i'll son him and watch him get 'laughed off the site' like a COMICAL SNIPER!!!
The wound's getting deep like a nautical diver, but It's CURTAINS WHEN THIS MAN'S RAPPIN, you're worthless to your clan and it's CERTAIN THAT YA CAN'T HACK IT, so i'm 'leaving niggas prepaired with a loss,' like a MURDER IN YA FAM FAGGOT!!!
No purpose since ya spam wackness, I don't need SUCH FIRE TO BEAT YA, sittin with soy sauce as you STUFF RICE IN YA CHEEKS, BRUH, Let go of ya chop-sticks, it's-basic, i'm "droppin-this-asian" like RUFF RYDER PROCEDURES!!!

BRUH - BRO but i wrote BRUH to rhyme wit it
I dump viles of ether, but DESPITE HIS CONVERGEANCE, his RHYMIN' IS WORTHLESS, KuN's a TITAN OF WORDSMITHS, but he drops the weakest-of-scripts and he's not 'seeing-the-kid,' so he'll never 'capitalize' like the "i's" IN HIS VERSES!!!(seeing/eyes...yeah)
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 4th, '05, 23:53

you nice on 'tracks?' of course homie, yep, ya anCESTORS CONSTRUCTED UM!!!


^^ this aimed at me dog after our pms earlier and the discussion we jus had???
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