Mat Demaz- Time To Die

[mdemaz]

Well, fuck.
That's all I'm gonna say.
Don't worry, I'm not filling the whole album with this..I'm actually starting to lean towards calmer and darker sounds now and even bangers.

Please excuse the experimental mixing with the dual layering, I'm still pretty new to that.
I probably won't do it anymore.


Lyrics:

Satan:
Demaz
it's time to die
Mat Demaz:
noooooo
Satan:
hahahahaha
Mat Demaz:
waaaaaaaaaaaah

hahahaha
I told these fools not to piss me off
now I'm really fucken pissed
demaz team 2011
yo yeah
what uh
yeah yo
uh what
songs without a message are just words
(random maniacal laughter)

why the fuck am I even here (uh) or even rapping (yeah)
things have gotten soo bad (uh) now I'm randomly snapping (rah!)
fuck multies and fucken punches man I'm still dope without 'em (what)
at the point where I'm fucken done with life all I got is a pen (fuck it)
death in these damn eyes nothing fazes my damn mind (fuck it)
I'm nuts beyond conprehension it's time to die (fuck it)
how did things end up like this man why am I soo emo
I'm a dumbass really it's all my fault for trusting these hoes
now I think the woman I love wants nothing to do with me
I swear everyone just wants to fucken screw with me
human beings are soo pathetic I can never ever forget the shit
this rhetoric I spit is wicked but I try to let it rip
I'm back to the old me cussing people out
instead of crying over woman over feeble doubt
how can I seriously move on now that my one source of hope is gone
you know what fuck girls I'mma just keep fucken making this song

(Chorus)
oh it's time to die (pestilence)
oh it's time to die (war)
oh it's time to die (famine)
oh it's time to die (death) 4x

people hate me and neglect me so I hate all them
everyone treats me like shit I so rape people then
everyone wants to push me the fuck away so why should I try to care
go live shitty lives you dogs shut up now and go and cry now bleh
I got a dream to be rich but nobody wants part of it
I'll solo bitch I don't need you cunts to start shit
even my best friends I've known since day one are pushing me far away
I'm just a broke-ass rapper from the suburbs looking for some pay
that won't make it anywhere but I got the talent
I'm at a dead end can't do shit it's nothing valiant
can't drive a car or get a job gotta fucken look after me mum
people don't know this and rather fucken judge me and be dumb
nice guys finish last I guess no rest for the wicked
I don't even wanna beef with you guys throwing down my fists shit
I probably should of taken my life (what) fuck it I won't even cry man (what)
all this shit is mounting up (what) I'm gonna snap anytime bam (what)

(Chorus) 4x

I'm no longer able to cope with society no more
I'm a whole different person behind closed doors
I've finally come to the conclusion that I am screwed
coming to terms with that is hard but you still learn to try to move
I told these bitches that I'd come back with a vengeance
I was serious when I said I'd take this message and send it
sometimes you gotta accept the fact that you're not an average joe
not conform with society and scum and be like the savage folk
I just be a slob it's the only way I cope
there's too much negativity in me to get a job or traces of hope
people can keep making me mad and keep the fire hot and burning
I love it the feeling of hate makes me never tire for the yearning
to stop myself going nuts I only defeat what's in front of me
take one day at a time it's the way life has come to be
the rest of my problems can wait right now I'm fighting myself
might as well try and yell let's spite the hell not cry and dwell

(Chorus) 4x

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[Scrubz]

improving man! Your mixing is getting pretty nice. But like he said^^, gotta keep working on the delivery. I dont have to tell you this because u will do it regardless, but keep at it!

[mdemaz]

I think the layering ruined the song and was making words seem slurred..
Then again, it sounds a lot more professional then just the vocals by themselves..
I better keep that for reference.

I didn't really notice anything bad because it sounded dope at first..
Oh well...
Thanks guys.

[Eedee]

Hmmm, this seems to be a step back from (sorry if I remembering wrong) your Freestyle 17 (or was it 19?) "My Realization". <--- THAT was fantastic in every way. This had some of that, but the delivery on this was a step down from My Realization. It was still audibly legible, but not so great on the ears, if you know what I mean.

Lyrics are fine, no faults there, you have those down, just work on delivery/mixing (less layering I think, it distorts your main rapping) and you'll be fine.

Keep working dude. I'll be here to feed everytime

[Solace]

It took almost a minute to get the actual track going. Your screaming is really awkward in the beginning, you don't sound like you're in pain or scared. It's not realistic, you sound embarrassing trying to act it when you can't. Practice that kind of stuff to make something sound really realistic. You've tried to do this whole hype up thing before, it doesn't work for you. Your voice is nerdy when you do it, just not making it work. By that I mean these kind of parts:

hahahaha
I told these fools not to piss me off
now I'm really fucken pissed
demaz team 2011
yo yeah
what uh
yeah yo
uh what
songs without a message are just words
(random maniacal laughter)

I think the mixing was fine on this track. Your flow has improved a lot, you just have to be a lot more consitent with it. Like it was going really well in the first verse for example, then it hit these lines which you rushed.

human beings are soo pathetic I can never ever forget the shit
this rhetoric I spit is wicked but I try to let it rip

The chorus is definitely cool, you've got the right idea but what matters about hooks is the technique. Make sure your layers for the "Ohh it's time to die" singing part match up perfectly, it sounded a little sloppy here and there since it wasn't perfectly together. I commend you for writing and recording a full 3 verse track, I'm lazy when it comes to that stuff. You've clearly improving, and hopefully you keep it up. Good luck Mat Demaz.

[mdemaz]

It took almost a minute to get the actual track going. Your screaming is really awkward in the beginning, you don't sound like you're in pain or scared. It's not realistic, you sound embarrassing trying to act it when you can't. Practice that kind of stuff to make something sound really realistic. You've tried to do this whole hype up thing before, it doesn't work for you. Your voice is nerdy when you do it, just not making it work. By that I mean these kind of parts:

hahahaha
I told these fools not to piss me off
now I'm really fucken pissed
demaz team 2011
yo yeah
what uh
yeah yo
uh what
songs without a message are just words
(random maniacal laughter)

I think the mixing was fine on this track. Your flow has improved a lot, you just have to be a lot more consitent with it. Like it was going really well in the first verse for example, then it hit these lines which you rushed.

human beings are soo pathetic I can never ever forget the shit
this rhetoric I spit is wicked but I try to let it rip

The chorus is definitely cool, you've got the right idea but what matters about hooks is the technique. Make sure your layers for the "Ohh it's time to die" singing part match up perfectly, it sounded a little sloppy here and there since it wasn't perfectly together. I commend you for writing and recording a full 3 verse track, I'm lazy when it comes to that stuff. You've clearly improving, and hopefully you keep it up. Good luck Mat Demaz.

I couldn't of improved without everyone's help really, this forum is the best thing that's happened to me..

I came here getting bad feed from dumbasses that made me feel like I was the shit when I sucked hard, now I feel like I've quadrupled my skill in just a few months..
It's fucking amazing.

About that whole hype thing...I sorta felt like an idiot doing that, I should of just cut straight to the point..I had to fill though, because the beat introed for a long while..

Anyway, I'll put deep thought into this album really, I got like 8 other tracks tracked out, it's like putting toppings on a pizza really.
Audio is amazing, it's soo challenging to make yourself sound better and better.

I think all I need to work on is breath control/delivery/accent manipulation and punching in..It would save me a lot of drama.
I know a bit about punching actually, but not enough to do it with ease, I usually sit there for hours repeating blocks...

Like, when I multitrack, I got like 4 sets of 4 bar tracks..Then just mix them to the master..I usually sit there until I get each one done perfectly, then just add the same effects to each..
Saves me worrying about the punching becoming noticeable, it just slides in like a hot knife through butter.

Anyway, enough of my nerdy ranting, thanks a lot for supporting me, even though you probably thought I was a complete ignorant ass at the beginning.

Hopefully this shit bears fruit.

[BigBoss]

sounded liek you were out of breath alot

[mdemaz]

Yeah..I don't really have the best lungs...
I actually thought of going into classes or just diving into water holding my breath to get some capacity and shit.