Chaos Theory - Organization XIII (Album)

[Solace]

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I'm sure I have more but I don't know which others I haven't used.

After many complications with recording equipment, issues with recording time, laziness, and stalling, Chaos Theory proudly presents to you our 2nd EP, titled Organization XIII.




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Tracklisting

1. Organization XIII (Produced by Anno Domini Beats)
2. Ghost (Produced by Life And Death Productions)
3. Fall Asleep (Produced by 2Deep)
4. Attainment (Bridge) (Produced by Anno Domini Beats)
5. Endorphin (Produced by Anno Domini Beats)

Lyrics
*Lyrics are also included in the descriptions on Youtube
1. Organization XIII
2. Ghost
3. Fall Asleep
4. Attainment (Bridge)
5. Endorphin

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[SG.]

DLing now, I'll post feed in a bit.

[Trimss]

I'm listening, I'll edit this post.

Organization XIII - Yep this is actually my favorite track. The beat is just awesome and so are your flows and deliveries.
The lyrics are deep, and the rhymes are good. I liked your verse more though even if Frost is becoming really good. (His first 4 bars were great, and it's cool that he didn't do all the text that way) so thumbs up for him.
MC Anonymous had a great delivery, but I can already see some not liking his voice.

Awesome.

Ghost - 'Never would I ever think that I ever could've meet Death'
I love how this is flown and said. Great storytelling right here from both of you, damn you can really chose beats Solace.
The lyrics are dope.. You're good at making dark-vibed songs. I don't really know what else to say actually. This is my second favorite track.
Frost killed it too.


Attainment - Good bridge, good skit. There ain't a lot to say about it though.

Endorphin - The Back and Forth thing was well done, even though it seems like sometimes Frost's voice is underwhelmed because of the beat. Maybe the volume is too low, I don't know, but it felt like that. To me at least, I could be wrong.

The chorus is good too.

My least favorite track on the EP. But it's not bad by any means.


I think I fed Fell Asleep in the thread, if not, i'll come back here and feed it too.
I'm not the best at giving feedbacks but I can't say a lot of things about your tracks, since it feels like you took all the advices you got in consideration and used them.

I like this EP a lot dude. Also, you're really really good at doing intros/choruses. So keep doing them.

Good job bro!

[Eedee]

Time to review! I'll edit as I listen to them!

Organization XIII:
- Beat: 10/10. Awesome. As is starts I'm just like "aw shit, here we goooo".
- Lyrics: 8/10. You still have some pauses in it that felt awkward, but your multis were great as always. My favorite from you: "There are too many souls for a God to save/ But I am one of them so what the fuck I've got to say?" The way you said it was powerful, and the former line was really thoughtful. I'm an atheist so I struggled with a bunch of questions like that myself. Good shit. The other two were great as well, so if they're reading this, good job!!
- Delivery: 9/10. Same ole' Solace delivery Nothing bad about it, maybe the pauses, but the echos you used "Rhymes that I've kept, kept" were okay, seems like filler material because you couldn't think of rhymes to fill that void. But what do I know about your creative process? MC Anonymous sounds like he's about to cry - really got to me. Shit... that was a great verse.
- Chorus: 10/10. Holy fuck. This goes extra sexy hard. Freakin' LOVE it.
- Overall: 9/10. Good opening track. Onto the next!

Ghost:
- Beat: 9/10. Dark. Spooky. Got me in the mood to feel some goddamn shivers down my spine. Then...
- Lyrics: 10/10. Your verse starts. Fits the beat perfectly. Great storytelling abilities. Multis were smooth and felt great on the ears. Love to hear multis just flow so smoothly.
- Delivery: 8/10. Again, same flow you use for every song. Punch ins were fantastic though, so for that!
- Chorus: 10/10. You have a gift for choruses, Solace. Keep it up!
- Overall: 9/10. Great 2nd track, can't wait to start the next one!
- Misc: Frost had some great lines in there. I think both your deliveries were good on this one. His "kill kill kill" devil voice punch-in was unexpected and really made his verse pop out on this one.

Fall Asleep:
- Beat: 10/10. Made me drowsy - in a good way. The whole aura of this EP is dark and spooky and I fucking love it.
- Lyrics: 9/10: Can't believe I didn't feed this when you dropped it earlier. My bad man. Again, very solid with the lyrics. Can't fault anything on it. For some reason I just loved your rhyme "middle finger raise high / since I was in grade nine". Just sounded so... perfect. Sorry I can't explain it further but it was awesome haha.
- Delivery: 9/10. You seem to slur a few words on here like "Innocence is draining out". I heard it though, just seemed to slur just a tiny bit, but nothing to really worry about. Just giving you a heads up.
- Chorus: 10/10. Fucking awesome chorus AS ALWAYS! Loved the little outro with the panning/echoes. Good shit.
- Overall: 9.5/10. Over halfway through the EP, loving every second of it.
- Misc: Frost is extremely good with only a few months of rap under his belt, no doubt you're his Yoda, or whatever.

Attainment (Bridge):
- Beat: 10/10. Lol dude. This is exactly like the NBA commercials "Where amazing happens." Here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aLOFLoMfhfY Except the piano is sped up in this beat haha. Awesome, I love the NBA, so you guys get a gold star in my book for this haha.
- Lyrics: 10/10 : Short and sweet. Awesome. You killed it.
- Delivery: 10/10. This had the best delivery of them all. Just straight up spitting here. Excellent.
- Overall: 10/10. Good little break from the tracks, with a solid Solace verse.

Endorphin:
- Beat 10/10: Definitely had the best beat of whole EP saved for last. The piano on here is just mesmerizing and I love it. Major props to Anno Domini Beats.
- Lyrics 9/10: Straight away the catchiness is there. The four bar back and forth is awesome and you guys gel really well together.
- Delivery: 10/10. One of the best deliveries on this EP from both of you. I loved it. Nothing really else to say about that.
- Chorus: 15/10: This. Chorus.... Jesus H. Christ you two. Fucking brilliant. Catchy as hell, awesome as fuck and just plain epic. Terrific shit here.
- Overall: 10/10: My favorite track on this EP, bar none.

Conclusion: I WANT ANOTHER ONE! This was awesome. Just an excellent masterpiece of lyricism, flow and amazing beats. The only thing I would've liked to see different was MC Anonymous on a few more verses. But other than that, good shit, and keep dropping you three! I really enjoyed this.

[B.A.D.]

I'll check this out tonight

[Solace]

DLing now, I'll post feed in a bit.

Thanks bro.

@Trimss, I appreciate the listen. Really, Ghost's your second fave haha? I HATED my verse on that song. Frost killed it doe!1!one! He did really well on a storytelling track especially it being his first one ever and he is still a novice writer. Yeah, I find hooks to be my stronghold in rap too. Track by track feed, thank you for that. Hopefully my future work will continue to impress you, or whatever it's done for you so far lol.

@Eedee, thanks for the indepth feed. About my pauses and then using the echos, it's never been for the reason that I don't know what else to rhyme. I just enjoy how it sounds lol. Yeah I caught that slur on "innocence is draining out", it's a bit difficult since "cence is" has all the "s" sounds. Hopefully I'll improve my enunciation next time around, yadamean? Woah, the NBA thing. Maybe now my friend is right haha, he's into basketball and he was like "Why is this beat familiar?" and I had no idea. Dope find. But yeah, it was supposed to be a full track but Frost and MC Anonymous couldn't get their verses in on time. About MC Anonymous not being on the tape much, he was supposed to be on it just as much as Frost and I were but the track he did do was cut because his verse was the only good one, and then he didn't get his other verses in 'cause he's a lazy fucker. You like the Endorphin chorus? Well since people have commended me on my choruses I'll note that Frost was the one who wrote the Endorphin chorus, so all credit to him.

@Big Ax-D, much thanks bro.

[Solace]

Thank you

[mdemaz]

Impressive as always, great chemistry throughout the album.
Can't be fucked giving complex feed as I feel the way most of the guys above feel.
Keep it up boys.

[Solace]

Appreciated MatDemaz, hopefully our next release will be a much larger improvement (especially considering we're taking a break from this trio to improve on our own for half a year or so).

[Rollimeo]

good shit you guys, I like the last tape better but this one is good too

[Solace]

Thanks for checking it man, as long as you're enjoying something lol; maybe you enjoy the chemistry between Anonymous and I on the first tape rather than Frost and I on this one. Still, I'm glad you took time to listen to it.

[gutawafang]

I can only say it's fucking good man. Really fucking good. Always looking forward to more music from you guys man. My favourite one is Ghost. Nice lyrics.

[Solace]

Thank you Guta, I appreciate the listen

[SG.]

Alright, I really liked this. You're taking a more serious approach with this EP and I like it. However, I couldn't help but feel that Solace was a bit overbearing. I felt like I barely heard Anon or Frost.

Still, I love this EP, but I miss tracks like "Hate Myself".

[Solace]

Alright, I really liked this. You're taking a more serious approach with this EP and I like it. However, I couldn't help but feel that Solace was a bit overbearing. I felt like I barely heard Anon or Frost.

Yeah, I took over the majority of this album with 5 verses, Frost 4 and Anon 1 so I can see what you mean by that. Anon would have done more but he had a lot of complications and I was not going to let this short tape drag on into 2012 and we released what we could. It was also more so an attempt for Frost to get into the swing of writing and recording for a project.

Still, I love this EP, but I miss tracks like "Hate Myself".

True, there was a concept to this album so we couldn't really fit in the random comedy and stuff like that but our next project whenever that'll be will probably have an assortment of things. Thanks a lot for listening Zabe.