Underground Choppers (Featuring SupaNov

[Trimss]

^ Well there are some beats well it's harder to notice where the snare hits, in the beggining I didn't even know rappers were on beat at first lmao. Then I came on this forum and had to learn what that means.

[Blu]

I'm gonna be honest, the second you started rapping, I started cracking up!

Dude. Start with a slower flow first. Matter fact, go cover some original rap songs. That'll help you get the "essence" of how you rap and keep up with the beat.

Go Stanley, your time has come to cover "Lose Yourself" and record it. GO!!!!

[Tranquil]

I've listened to your songs when you have dropped them but never bothered to post because I was going to say what everyone else was saying.

I was where you are now when I first started, but I applied every little bit of feedback that I got from here and my music has improved Heaps! First off what you need to do is buy a better mic, shit I have a $40 mic and the quality is good. Also you need to learn some mixing techniques, thoroughly search through Youtube or get some tips off other people.

Delivery is also a problem. You sound really bored, un-enthusiastic and it really sounds like your softly rapping into the mic, trying not to be heard or something like that. If you want people to enjoy your songs you have to snap out of that. Pump yourself if before going in and recording, give it your all. It takes awhile but in the end it the delivery will just come natural and it will sound good.

Flow. Off beat. Construct your lyrics so each end rhyme hits on a snare or a kick drum. Practice on your flow so its almost perfect, because when its off beat its really un enjoyable to listen. I still fuck up with my flow sometimes, so it all comes with practice but your flow on this song is pretty much un-listanable. Show your songs to some people before you release, some people that no what their talking about so they can give you feedback, then you go and apply that feedback then release the track.

Pretty much just listen and apply on what people are saying here, and just practice heaps. Never rush a song, take your time with it and it will pay off. I wish you the best and I hope to hear some quality music out of you soon. Keep it up man.

[Fleka]

I know shit about making songs, but, when you hear the beat, don`t you just like, know how to rap on it?

[Eedee]

Pretty much what everyone else has said...

You need flow dude. Make your rhymes hit the snares, or if there's no snares make sure your bars go with the melody or something. It seems like you're just rapping w/o the beat and just laying it on top of the beat hoping it'll work. Plus, you need better quality. Go to Walmart or Amazon, buy a $20 mic or something - it'll make it tremendously better, for real.

But the lyrics I did hear had nice rhymes to them, so keep that up I guess...

Just take our advice.

[Chet Starr]

Horrible man

You can't learn how to run before you can walk. Practice ending those lines on the snare, that will help stay on beat. Then get comfortable with that and switch it up, start ending your lines on the actually music, don't just focus on the snare

right now your just ignoring the beat completely

[Atone]

I want to thank you all for the feed, and yes i have taking your advice a lil bit, in fact, i hope i impress you guys on this next vid,

[Joel Venom]

mad off beat, i think that made the whole track hard to listen to. keep it up tho.

[Atone]

lol....if online was real life id be scared of you.."mayne"


can you post a pic of yourself, im curious how white you are

wtf lol

[Mahmoud48]

i want a collab!!!

[Solace]

i want a collab!!!

Shit's going down

[Atone]

lol, i'm done with rap yall can have it back

[Eedee]

lol, i'm done with rap yall can have it back

Okay Kanye...

[4NorthTL]

The first verse was awful, the last verse was tight.

You can't make the vocals and have someone make a beat to it because you're all over the place and it would be nearly impossible to make it work. I had a friend who had a great voice but could never stay on the beat, he still can't stay on the beat (he was a rock singer) and it was and still is frustrating.