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Re: Chaos Theory - Organization XIII (Album)

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 7th, '12, 02:17

here we go

Organization 13
there's a couple of volume issues, like Frost sounding too low. But man the song itself is amazing, I love the eerie feeling its got, the hook is amazing aswell. very soundtrack sound-ish haha. Your first verse was amazing, all nailed, Frost aswell, he sound way too much like you hahaha, but he also ripped his verse, too low volume tho, and Anonymous was a bit weird, sounded like he had too much saliva on his mouth lol, idk, couln't enjoy it as much ( :y: )

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Man, this track is also amazing. there's not much I can say, I enjoyed it, gave u a like on YT. the flows, the mixing (although again volumes a bit too low), the hook, both your verses, amazing. The lyrics are brilliant. ( :y: :y: :y: )

Fall Asleep
Hmm, I'm not sure if you want me to feed this track again :unsure: lol
yeah, its amazing as-well, dope stuff ( :y: :y: )

Attainment
Hey!!! I made a beat with that same sample sometime ago, good good haha :b:
this was kinda cool, nice little skit ( :y: :y: )

Endorphin
Man, your vocals volume is too low and you need to add layovers haha, I loved the back and forward, the similarity in your voice makes it a bit hard to differenciate tho', but it also makes u very complementary to each other, so its kind of a unique union haha. I love the message on this song. very strong and kind at the same time, this was amazing man. there's a couple things that maybe can be fixed cuz there are a couple flow slips and the volume issue, but man, this was a beautiful song, props on that man. hopefully you can fix it, cuz I'd like to download this on a higher quality you know?, dope man, dope dope. ( :y: :y: :y: )

Overall:
Hmm, more of a group tape, I this this is more of a duo tape cuz anon just had one verse and wasn't his best tbqh, however it turned out great man, even if the overall emotion of the tape was dark, you could still managed to throw in different concepts which is good, you have a good creative eye, since the first song I fed from you I told you that, youre creative and thats exactly the guide you have to follow on this journey man, it will get you far, beacuse everbody just does the same shit, you know?, so keep it up man, practice a little more on the pre-mastering side, play more with your mixing, you have it nailed and clean, but there's a lot that can help you as-well if you explore a bit more :y:
also your flows, you guys have great flow but its very constant, need to do some style switch ups every now and then.

anyway, thats all I could think off, I enjoyed this tape a lot man, very clever, dope rhyming all along, all nice, so keep it up man :y: :y:
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Re: Chaos Theory - Organization XIII (Album)

Postby Tranquil » Jan 22nd, '12, 05:05

I didn't want to feed this after one listen, so I've been bumping this for awhile and man... I can't give feed on this, other than that its good! Love the entire feel of this! It would've been cool if MC Anon had more involvement in the songs, but Frost held his own! Also love that cover! :worship:

Great little Ep!
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Re: Chaos Theory - Organization XIII (Album)

Postby Solace » Jan 30th, '12, 04:39

B.A.D. wrote:here we go

Organization 13
there's a couple of volume issues, like Frost sounding too low. But man the song itself is amazing, I love the eerie feeling its got, the hook is amazing aswell. very soundtrack sound-ish haha. Your first verse was amazing, all nailed, Frost aswell, he sound way too much like you hahaha, but he also ripped his verse, too low volume tho, and Anonymous was a bit weird, sounded like he had too much saliva on his mouth lol, idk, couln't enjoy it as much ( :y: )

I feel his volume was absolutely fine, I'm listening to it now on headphones and it seems the same as my vocals, but you know more about levels than I do sooo.

B.A.D. wrote:Ghost
Man, this track is also amazing. there's not much I can say, I enjoyed it, gave u a like on YT. the flows, the mixing (although again volumes a bit too low), the hook, both your verses, amazing. The lyrics are brilliant. ( :y: :y: :y: )

Haha now it's like the opposite of Sugarland in regards to my vocal volumes :shifty:

B.A.D. wrote:Fall Asleep
Hmm, I'm not sure if you want me to feed this track again :unsure: lol
yeah, its amazing as-well, dope stuff ( :y: :y: )

Thanks!

B.A.D. wrote:Attainment
Hey!!! I made a beat with that same sample sometime ago, good good haha :b:
this was kinda cool, nice little skit ( :y: :y: )

Thanks bra. It was originally going to be 3 verses but no one could get their verses in time.

B.A.D. wrote:Endorphin
Man, your vocals volume is too low and you need to add layovers haha, I loved the back and forward, the similarity in your voice makes it a bit hard to differenciate tho', but it also makes u very complementary to each other, so its kind of a unique union haha. I love the message on this song. very strong and kind at the same time, this was amazing man. there's a couple things that maybe can be fixed cuz there are a couple flow slips and the volume issue, but man, this was a beautiful song, props on that man. hopefully you can fix it, cuz I'd like to download this on a higher quality you know?, dope man, dope dope. ( :y: :y: :y: )

Again, I feel like the volume is fine. We don't feel that our voices are the same (aside from the chorus) so while we record we can't really realize that about our song, yadamean? And there are layovers! Seems clear to me. My 2nd favourite track on this EP, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

B.A.D. wrote:Overall:
Hmm, more of a group tape, I this this is more of a duo tape cuz anon just had one verse and wasn't his best tbqh, however it turned out great man, even if the overall emotion of the tape was dark, you could still managed to throw in different concepts which is good, you have a good creative eye, since the first song I fed from you I told you that, youre creative and thats exactly the guide you have to follow on this journey man, it will get you far, beacuse everbody just does the same shit, you know?, so keep it up man, practice a little more on the pre-mastering side, play more with your mixing, you have it nailed and clean, but there's a lot that can help you as-well if you explore a bit more :y:
also your flows, you guys have great flow but its very constant, need to do some style switch ups every now and then.

anyway, thats all I could think off, I enjoyed this tape a lot man, very clever, dope rhyming all along, all nice, so keep it up man :y: :y:

Definitely, I understand what you mean about duo tape. At the time of recording, MC Anonymous was planning to quit rapping. Frost was his replacement in Chaos Theory, but after some stuff MC Anonymous came back. He could only get one verse in, but I suppose it's good for people to focus on Frost more since these are his first verses ever. I know, I appreciate that you've been following my progress since the beginning. Switch ups in the flow is one of the main things I've been getting, so I'm always noting that one down haha. It's a shame Frost isn't recording anymore, it seems like this will be the last we hear of him.

:worship: Thanks for it all Ax-D!

Tranquil wrote:I didn't want to feed this after one listen, so I've been bumping this for awhile and man... I can't give feed on this, other than that its good! Love the entire feel of this! It would've been cool if MC Anon had more involvement in the songs, but Frost held his own! Also love that cover! :worship:

Great little Ep!

Oh no problem, I'm pumped that you enjoy this shit bro. Yeah, definitely the next Chaos Theory work will be a balanced act. Thanks for listening, appreciate it. :worship:
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Re: Chaos Theory - Organization XIII (Album)

Postby Solace » Feb 4th, '12, 18:12

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