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Nefarious- Destiny

Postby Nefarious » Jan 11th, '12, 22:43

Tell Me What You Think.

http://hulkshare.com/2u6pjvt3hpkr

1st Verse

Im supposed to be awful, and this is a must.
I can break out of anything, wrists in the cuffs.
Then i flip you the fuck off bitch your a cunt.
Soft, prick, little slut, pause, stick in the mud.
So im not going fast enough, i wanna smash and crush.
Whoever's acting up, another rapid punch.
Until your yap is shut, you'll never rap with us.
Your whole crew put together isnt half as tough.
As one man that i have on my side.
Divine pride, shines when you open your eyes wide.
A mile high, list of things that ive done.
So while i spit the script become one.
With this, and tongue twist it, wicked.
And such risky, trickery, some misery.
Prisoners come visit me, enemy's run.
Quick, there's nobody none sicker.
To kill em with just a mic without pulling a gun trigger.

Chorus

You do what's best for you while you were next to me.
I could always see you were my enemy.
Alsong as i still have the breath in me to breathe.
I wont let you take away my destiny.

2nd Verse

Dont be, the one to approach me.
Hopefully, i throw some fists that you wont see.
Ghostly, flip it and i proceed, sippin on my oe.
Sicker than a dope beat, written that i wrote creep.
Slow when im kicking in your door and your front teeth.
Bomb you because im gettin bored of your country.
With more that ive stored in my lungs that i'll unleash.
A horde or a swarm i'll be comming out in one piece.
Im another kind of rhymer im kinda blind.
And my lines provide the right vibe.
To pry and unwind your mind cause sometimes
I'd find that i was always reminded of lies.
Im climbing up high, to see where i am.
And im only gonna try to be what i can.
Aslong as im alive i'll breathe and i'll stand.
And there isnt any way to believe that i cant.

3rd Verse

Obliterate, incinerate, eliminate, and then some.
Anyone come if you wanna get your head spun.
I'll be alive and your gonna be the dead one.
Left in the middle of the desert with a bread crumb.
I said none of you are worthy enough.
When it hurts to get up and the journey is rough.
I prefer you to hush you will learn that i lust.
To be pure as a love, when i burn you to dust.
With the breathe of the phoenix, i am immortal.
You could never win with the mind of a mortal.
Fly through a portal, snap and i break.
Your, desire to be more, it was half a mistake.
I admired your before you where last in the race.
I surpass with a wrath and i have what it takes.
You imagine a place that i had to erase.
I will pass you atlast and i'll laugh in your face.

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Re: Nefarious- Destiny

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 12th, '12, 03:26

Hey man, Its good that you are active, but I think it would've been more convenient to put your three new songs on the same thread, its easier for people to access them all. And I guess it looks cleaner :y:

anyways, I listened to this song

really great man, I actually loved the feeling of the song. nice way of writting it as-well, the flow is perfect, the only thing I could recomend is to work a bit on the mixdown, cuz I think the beat sounded a bit overpowering of your vocals.

I liked the hook as well. pretti good song, in my opinion the best you've released on this site :y:
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Re: Nefarious- Destiny

Postby Scrubz » Jan 12th, '12, 14:27

Intro vocals a lil low. Flows great man, really dope. Deff very em like with the inners. Mixing is pretty clean as well. This was really dope, liked it a lot. 9/10. If u ever wanna get down on a track let me know bro!
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Re: Nefarious- Destiny

Postby Nefarious » Jan 20th, '12, 16:55

Thanks for listening. :y:
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Re: Nefarious- Destiny

Postby Atone » Jan 21st, '12, 11:43

Beat sounds good, in the beginning i kinda thought about vietnam movies for some reason

your voice = dope

the flow is real good, i like the lyrics to, do you have an album?

i would like to put your music on my music collection cuz you sound pretty good, even if i couldn't stand your ego in the past
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Re: Nefarious- Destiny

Postby Tranquil » Jan 21st, '12, 14:19

I musta missed this.. really glad I clicked on this! Its good to have another person that sounds like they know what there doing in making quality music!

First off, I just have to show my love the hook! Its dope, catchy and I love the flow on it.

Flow and lyrics are insane on this, I was gonna add that you should probably put some ad-libs in but then I listened again and this song dosent need them.

Really liking this song man! Keep it up! :b:
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Re: Nefarious- Destiny

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 21st, '12, 15:36

think the saying is diamond in the rough. Hadn't checked TR audio stage in a while wasn't expecting to be this impress by a guy i hadn't heard of before.

sick track man, you know what your doing and just need to keep it up man. Rhyming was insane!
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Re: Nefarious- Destiny

Postby Ticalrecords » Jan 21st, '12, 18:30

like usual, very good track my man the only complaint i have is the hook isn't as catchy as some of your other work but it still bumps, so i guess thats all that matters. rhyming was tight, flow was sick as fuck, really couldn't ask for more in a song. good stuff.

i have a new remix to ASAP rocky's Peso, tell me what you think:

http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/easy-money-peso-remix
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Re: Nefarious- Destiny

Postby Nefarious » Jan 22nd, '12, 00:16

Thanks everyone, i didnt expect to wake up to so many wonderfull comments, made my morning :D
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