rhyme schemes @ hellbound and lose yourself

[Innovation]

Is anyone else bugged by the mediocre ending to Lose Yourself rhyme-wise? after all that effort he kinds got lazy.

I disagree. The last 4 or so bars have plenty of multi's and internals.

[SliK]

Is anyone else bugged by the mediocre ending to Lose Yourself rhyme-wise? after all that effort he kinds got lazy.

I disagree. The last 4 or so bars have plenty of multi's and internals.

I disagree too, he keeps the same 3 syllable rhyme scheme going for like 8 bars or something.

Or do you mean the very last line, where he only rhymes "got"?

[Emadyville]

I'd say the second verse of LY with the common sound of the "O" he uses:

It only grows harder, only grows hotter
He blows us all over these hoes is all on him
Coast to coast shows, he's known as the globetrotter
Lonely roads, God only knows
He's grown farther from home, he's no father
He goes home and barely knows his own daughter
But hold your nose 'cause here goes the cold water
His hoes don't want him no more, he's cold product
They moved on to the next schmoe who flows
He nose dove and sold nada
So the soap opera is told and unfolds
I suppose it's old partner but the beat goes on
Da da dum da dum da da

[fite_h8]

Why has nobody brought up this?! It would be perfect, I think.

Stimulate

My lyrical content is constantly under fire
No wonder why I constantly bomb back
To combat attacks with constant concepts
When lyrics are constantly took outta context
Failure to communicate with congress has
Been a problem for the longest, I guess
But maybe one day we can make some progress
Food for thought - see how long it takes to digest
Feeling good when I should be ashamed
Sh*t, I really should've fell but I stood
See I came like a flame in the night
Like a ghost in the dark; there's a ray, there's a light
There's a hope, there's a spark
But when planets collide they'll never see eye to eye
Until they decide to set their differences aside
And this is why only one of us will survive
So children follow my lead and feel the vibe

[RKOunion]

Now you wanna prance around and gloat?
Let's see how well you dance around when I got my hands around your throat
It's just a matter of time 'till I get my blows in and it won't be long
You shouldn't go walkin around and stickin your nose in where it don't belong
For every time you chuckled when you were stretchin the truth
There's gonna be one more flyin knuckle you're gonna catch in the tooth

[SajN]

Keep in mind guys, if he's doing this for school, songs like "Buffalo Bill" or "Stay Wide Awake" might not be welcomed by his teacher. But then again, who the fuck knows. I've always wanted a project where I could write about the rhyme schemes of people like Em, Nas, Tech and Jay (those 4 specifically). I'd go to fuckin town on it.

In Norway, it's not that strict when it comes to small cursing, or having, let's say "dirty" topics.
I once had a presentation about Eminem, and I played the song Cleaning Out My Closet for them. Not dirty, but you know... the content.

[StanBase]

Now you wanna prance around and gloat?
Let's see how well you dance around when I got my hands around your throat
It's just a matter of time 'till I get my blows in and it won't be long
You shouldn't go walkin around and stickin your nose in where it don't belong
For every time you chuckled when you were stretchin the truth
There's gonna be one more flyin knuckle you're gonna catch in the tooth

i'm sure this is not em, where is it from?

And everybody: if someone would highlight the rhymes in hellbound, stimulate, TIC, or whatever you please, that would be kickass

[RKOunion]

Now you wanna prance around and gloat?
Let's see how well you dance around when I got my hands around your throat
It's just a matter of time 'till I get my blows in and it won't be long
You shouldn't go walkin around and stickin your nose in where it don't belong
For every time you chuckled when you were stretchin the truth
There's gonna be one more flyin knuckle you're gonna catch in the tooth

i'm sure this is not em, where is it from?

Fuckin' backstabber

[StanBase]

Now you wanna prance around and gloat?
Let's see how well you dance around when I got my hands around your throat
It's just a matter of time 'till I get my blows in and it won't be long
You shouldn't go walkin around and stickin your nose in where it don't belong
For every time you chuckled when you were stretchin the truth
There's gonna be one more flyin knuckle you're gonna catch in the tooth

i'm sure this is not em, where is it from?

Fuckin' backstabber

Oh, aight! except for the song infinite i've heard next to nothing pre-97 by em

[RKOunion]

Desporados verse is good.

Chauvinist pig, drove in this Big Lincoln
Till it went over the bridge
Jumped out and dove in the ditch
Broke in a mobile home and stole a stove and fridge
Kidnapped the parents and left the ransom note for the kids
I'ma go for your mids
Here's a body blow for your ribs
While you're clutching your stomach and bleeding all over your bitch
I know where you live, your girl showed me your crib
Unless she told me a fib
Then I'ma have both of ya dead
Burning incense, facing a murder sentence
Under intense, for investigation for killing infants
While I sit in padded rooms doing shrooms
Having visions of dead pregnant women wit' brooms jammed in they wounds
Slit your carpet and rugs, and fucked your apartment up
Sticking up all the drugs, and jumping in garbage trucks
I'm from the shitty slums that look like the city dumps
Give you a kidney punch, and mug you to get me lunch
See me every summer, layin' up against the dumpster
With a one hundred dollar jumper, smothered in southern comfort
Got my Slim Shady sticker on your mother's bumper
She came home screamin', a bunch of motherfuckers jumped her

Pretty sure I missed couple.

[StanBase]

okay, I'm going to resurrect this thread now.
the assignment is a little changed now, I'm going to talk through how Em changed for every album.

I'm still going to talk about the rhymes in a couple songs (2)

definitely going to do a verse off lose yourself, I just don't know which.
WHAT VERSE HAVE THE MOST IMPRESSIVE RHYMES?

I've listed the songs I'm thinking about, do anyone have the highlighted rhyme schemes of any of those songs?
-Renegade
-Hellbound
-Music box
-Infinite
-Stay wide awake
-Stimulate
-Desperados

the reason I don't do it myself is because i'm talentless and stupid

[Innovation]

^ Music Box in sig.

[StanBase]

^ Music Box in sig.

aight
but what do you think? which verse?

also I'd really like to see the rhyme scheme of renegade!