dedicated to all my gutterslutz.. ohh fucks yeah

[DeAngelo Bailey]

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Dirty Fuckin Hoe

[Blu]

You might just be worse than Atone.

[Trimss]

That can't be him lol. That reminds me of the jokerr skit.

[DeAngelo Bailey]

how do i embed this tried doin the code thing 10 times? it looks like youtube embed format changed

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[DeAngelo Bailey]

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good shieet

[Solace]

Lol no way he's worse than Atone.

Listening through this, it was a freestyle right? Maybe pre-meditated? The flow was actually really consistent and well done, you didn't slack there. Rather straightforward, I do that too much, and something like that should be strayed away from if you want to improve in that aspect. Writing wise, I can't critique since I'm assuming it was a freestyle. A lot of stupid things said lol. The delivery was alright, I liked the energy. Some parts you reminded me of Yelawolf tbh...Just work on the clarity and pronunciation of everything. Hook is hilarious, you're a dirty fucking hoe. A simple verse, no overlays, no adlibs. Those sort of things would improve the quality, but for what it is it's not horrid. Keep at it.