Nefarious- Evil & Cold

[Nefarious]

Tell me what you think.

http://hulkshare.com/5bi8hfw7m1u4

Lyrics

Verse 1

I wanna break the silence, awake your eye lids.
I give what i make and i take what i get.
You shouldnt be there when a place is private.
So be sure that you were following the basic five steps.
Why let all, slip fall, when its so clear.
Wandering around it appears there is no where.
That your gonna fit in, you could never change that.
Run away and noone would care if you ever came back.
I could be funny and embarrassing in the same rap.
I can wear whatever i want but im wearing plain black.
With a rain hat, i got nobody to aim at.
Showing you, what they lack, i could never name half.
You dont want battle me im harder than a train crash.
Got an upper hand cause i started in the game fast.
Mentally retarded but im smarter than your lame ass.
Saving you for later your the one im gonna slay last.

Chorus

You dont even know.
What it would take to be as evil and cold.
As i am.
And there are so many people who cant.
Go to a place in a zone, into space a dimension.
I didnt want to mention, incase i would have to.
Erase the past and come back to attack you.
Allow you to see the future.

Verse 2

You've gotta life but you choose to obsess with mine.
You wanna fight for the clue's that i left behind.
Your on a quest to find the true strength of mine.
How i death defy, cuz ive yet to die.
An interesting guy, im into wrestling im.
A little less than impressed by the best alive.
But there is one fact i can live love laugh.
Cuz you gave me so much to give some back.
And its just polite for me to touch the mic.
Stand up and let me get it all adjusted right.
So i can run to the goal line, once i was told why.
Im the only one who's having fun for the whole time.
Give a response, or ill consider you odd.
For your pitiful cause, you would never get an applause.
Unforgettable bars, stuck inside my head and my memory.
Im slowly becoming everything i said i would never be.

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[Scrubz]

This one was pretty dope! Hook is a better attempt at singing. 2nd favorite of the bunch. Good shit man hit me up.

[Nefarious]

Bump!!!

[Ticalrecords]

nice man i'm very jealous that you found this beat before me its knocks like a mofo! your flow is as crazy as usual i was def feeling this one. loved the hook, and the mixing was well done. i swear theres never a whole lot to say about your music except a job well done man. plus your output is very good too, what is it like every other day a new song? its very impressive

[Solace]

As usual the writing doesn't cease to impress. Really good written dude. Very laid back choice of production, I can dig that. Ticalrecords has a point about not having much else to say that it was enjoyable. You know what you're doing. Chorus is dope too. I like how it switches up in the middle.

[Nefarious]

Well thanks as always, i wont get to record for a long time, so i'll be writting alot of songs and getting ready to record a whole bunch eventually, i probably wont be around for a while, but when i come back i should be ready with another 20 songs atleast.

[Eedee]

Not gonna fucking lie. That was dope. Your flow was perfect, something I need to master that I haven't yet. The chorus wasn't bad at all, it was actually very smooth (great layering btw!). Multies were on point and abundant - sounded exceptional over such a laid back and awesome beat. Nothing else to say other than great job. Keep dropping!

[Spyder]

shit was dope man

beat was nice, had a light rock vibe to it which was cool.
you rode it great man flow was smooth and seemless, nothing to complain about there.
delivery was nice.
lyrics were good, nice use of inners and delivery on those to make em stick out,
really helped the lines and flow for those.

hook was ok for me, was nice but something about it just didnt settle idk.
not bad though for a singy hook type vibe. i do like the mixing on the hook
with the higher pitched overlay.
good mixing all around deff.

good track man

[B.A.D.]

awsome flow and vibe, this is nice to listen too. the flow is superb.
I also love the hook, everything about it is awsome, except "you don't even know", I think thats a bit off key, but the rest is nice. great choice of beat too. Your vocals sounded a little bit low compared to the beat and also the EQ seems a bit too boosted on the high frequencies, but its really clean, almost top quality.

keep at it

[Nefarious]

I thank you all very much, and now im gonna write something

[Nick. Y]

cool ! sounded breezy as fuck

[Instant Legend]

dopest cut ive heard on the site thus far today. likin the delivery on this one homie, the hook came in and for a second i wasnt sure how i felt about it, then i decided i dug the shit out of it lmao - kinda reminds me of an alternative hook fused into a hip hop song, and thats workin well for me

i like this shit, and that beats fuckin fresh

solid

return the favor please

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