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AhdduB Featuring Adele - We Could Have Had It All

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 15th, '12, 23:05

POF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=143007

yo i found a beat w an adele sample, its so fucking dope i hope i did the beat justice. tell me what yall think


http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/we-could-o ... t-all-feat


Could of Had It All


Whatup world – I’m sharing a story
Of insatiable lust and terrible glory
A tragic story – of matrimony
That’s Gone wrong – the swan song
Of every Don Juan – that’s been caught off
Guard by a really hot broad
Swear it - She was bottle blond girl
Yup - A straight up model bond girl/
The type that inspired scores of movies
and then flip the script - before a proofread
common sense - Told me a compliment
wouldn’t go over – I’d get cold shouldered
so I told her I had a cold heart
and that her sports bra – matched my sports car
and that so far – she was on par
to having it all – and what did she say?/



apparently she had a broken heart
that life itself - tore apart
that aint a problem – lets just say the outcome
was more along the lines of playing possum
trust issues –major ones
wondering where she caught them vapors from
so life is a bitch - okay
and Lesbian sex was her forte/
that cocaine – was her foreplay
Reincarnation ran a soul train
she stayed around - till life ate her out
put her on her back and played her out
since then – she holds her tongue
cuz since then – she knows whatsup
she never gonna take love for granted
I’m just wondering what life is coming back with
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Re: AhdduB Featuring Adele - We Could Have Had It All

Postby M-Pyre » Feb 17th, '12, 21:31

a nice and unique flow! tho it did seem that this part "Swear it - She was bottle blond girl
Yup - A straight up model bond girl" was a bit off beat. but anyways, the beat it's self is a bit lackluster if you ask me, but you did it justice by my part. lyrics were good, nothing special but cool non the less.

my advice, try finding a beat that suits "your" style more then doing the opposite. maybe, it's me but, I think some westcoast beat would suit you a bit more, like some oldschool dre shit know what I'm saying?

anyways, hope I've helped!
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Re: AhdduB Featuring Adele - We Could Have Had It All

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 17th, '12, 22:47

yo thanks a milli i def appreciate the feedback
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Re: AhdduB Featuring Adele - We Could Have Had It All

Postby Nefarious » Feb 18th, '12, 00:21

I like this beat alot, sounds sexy, love how you started the song off, Whatup World!, and the little things you said during the chorus sounded good aswell, i can tell you trust in your own creativity and sometimes just go for it with alot of what you say, your topics are crazy but i guess that might just be for me, because im stuck in a little box of the same old stuff all the time, i have a few like this, but not enough, i think this is the kind of song you can listen to everyday and not get bored of, nicely done.
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Re: AhdduB Featuring Adele - We Could Have Had It All

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 18th, '12, 00:54

yo thanks broski i appreciate the love. i aint knocking your topic selection, its always about how your the best which is cool and you can get alot out of that especially the way you rhyme, but if your looking for ways to diversify your topics, what i do is i write what i want to say out in a simple paragraph and then cut it up and fill out the rhyme structure, if you get what i mean. a complicated sentence cut twice will turn into four bars easily. its like working backwards i guess and its def harder to get a flow out of it but it works wonders for the actual content. im really glad you liked it cuz i worked my ass off for this song lol
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