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Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby Scrubz » Feb 17th, '12, 06:24

New Single off the upcoming mix tape "The Come Up". I Produced, Preformed, Mixed and Mastered it, lemme know what you guys think!




LOF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=143007&p=1856938#p1856938

LYRICS:

lyrically you know i kill it, hatters even feel it,
feedin you a message, so raw u gotta grill it
aim to be the realist, im takin out the fakers
what kobe did to shaq when he kicked off the lakers
im flippin all the breakers, just to get my foot in
im aimin for the platinum but record now is wooden
you tell me that i couldn't, I tell you that I gotta
I've givin almost everything just to be a part a
I do it for my fatha, I do it for the critics
who think I am gimmick till they listen to my lyrics
my flow is always rhythmic, my beat is so organic
rappers better panic im upgrading to gigantic no titanic
when its all said, and when its all done
im pick up the phone when the record label call comes
then its all hugs, hand shakes and fist taps
dreamin till i woke up and now im gonna get that

[HOOK]

cuz when its all said and when its all done
and when my sound spread they gonna all come
I know they say some for-got where they came from
Imma say umm, bottom of the game son
cuz when its all said and when its all done
and when my sound spread they gonna all come
I know they say some for-got where they came from
Im gonna say were you think i got the name from?


pretty soon im gonna blow up, more than just a show up
you thinkin any different it is time for you to grow up
cuz i can only go up, progression at its finest
u claim to be the king, im the ace of spade ur hiness
you tell me that i biased, i tell you that im honest
the passion i posses will define me as an artist
when i say i go the hardest, its no exaggeration
7 days a week never loosin concentration
the younger generation, mix me the classic
a little eric clapton with the records in the attic
i catch a bit of static, no worries cuz they jealous
my devotion to the game u think im over overzealous
listen fellas
when its all said, and when its all done
im pick up the phone when the record label call comes
then its all hugs, hand shakes and fist taps
dreamin till i woke up and now im gonna get that

[HOOK]

cuz when its all said and when its all done
and when my sound spread they gonna all come
I know they say some for-got where they came from
Imma say umm, bottom of the game son
cuz when its all said and when its all done
and when my sound spread they gonna all come
I know they say some for-got where they came from
Im gonna say were you think i got the name from?
never givin up a chance, no that i wont do
never switch up my stance, get use to my views
and im lookin to advance, these cats are old news
snap backs and tattoos , the fuck u gone do
and im goin I finna win i leave the pit im livin in
the hole you in is gettin deeper as I count my dividends
im never givin in, im livid spinnin like a cotton gin
my feet r both a peddling i know i get it from within
if you question what exact-ly i am here for,
the prepare ur self- to get get an ear full
no need to prove my worth to get in these doors
you block the front great we commin in backwards
and after that im climbin reachin geekin for the top spot and i wont stop until i sit a top of hip hop
and i dont gotta wish or pray or get it in a gift shop
so give it all i got, why the fuck not?

[HOOK]

cuz when its all said and when its all done
and when my sound spread they gonna all come
I know they say some for-got where they came from
Imma say umm, bottom of the game son
cuz when its all said and when its all done
and when my sound spread they gonna all come
I know they say some for-got where they came from
Im gonna say were you think i got the name from?
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 17th, '12, 16:57

hey this is a pretty good song to promote your mixtape. very impressive that you produced the whole thing, the beat is tight, flow and delivery are def on point no complaints there. some constructive criticism though, some of the lyrics were a lil weak compared to the overall song, like the gift shop line in the third verse, but other than that it was some fire man foreal. good stuff.
would you mind returnign the favor? no one else has commented yet, i'm sure you know that feeling

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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby M-Pyre » Feb 17th, '12, 21:40

the beat is nice. cool melody, the synths en drums sit well together and it suits your style very good! which brings me to your best virtue. your flow, love it, very fluid like haha. lyrics do need some work tho, they seem a bit amateur. no real multies, nor punchlines that stood out, but this is something on which you can improve easily.

the overall mix of your voice and beat could be a bit better. right now, the beat seems to lack punch and volume but thats easily fixed if you would go back and adjust a few things. maybe send it out to a mastering company.

hope I've been of use. good luck on producing and rapping, keep it up
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby Scrubz » Feb 17th, '12, 22:43

Good looks to both of you, appreciate the listen and feedback. Ticalrecords, il get you back dont worry.
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby Nefarious » Feb 18th, '12, 00:40

You are a very good rapper like myself.
But the person i picture from hearing you, seem's quite different from me.
Some of the things you say, i would never say.
But i guess its just what your into.
I would say lyrically the way you write, is very much like my own.
And our confidence levels are probably alot higher than most.
But our content is much different, i can still tell your on a whole nother level.
Compared to most people i hear, you basically made the 1% of good rappers ive heard bump up to 2% lol.
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby Tash8 » Feb 18th, '12, 19:25

i like this song..flow switches up a lot which is something I definitely listen for
"u claim to be the king, im the ace of spade ur hiness " i like that line and the switch ups here:
never givin up a chance, no that i wont do
never switch up my stance, get use to my views
and im lookin to advance, these cats are old news
snap backs and tattoos , the fuck u gone do
and im goin I finna win i leave the pit im livin in
the hole you in is gettin deeper as I count my dividends

beat is cool, I dont think it's great but it gets the job done man
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby B.A.D. » Feb 19th, '12, 05:05

I listened to this the other day but had an emergency so I couldn't comment lol.

man, you have gotten fucking better man, this is wonderful,
top quality, flawless flow, actually flawless everything, this might be the best song I've heard from you
the beat is sick aswell, I like the bass synth, only the clap could've had some harder reverb or slow feedback echoes, but man its great.

awsome hook.

nothing I can critique on here man, keep doing it like that, congratulations my friend
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 20th, '12, 21:37

this beat is....fucking piffery!...let me hop on a remix lol

flow is pretty solid and your delivery is starting to get better...lyrics are ok but i heard you come better...least imo....but good shit...seriously...a remix......
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby mdemaz » Feb 20th, '12, 21:47

Haha, man, you got this shit nailed.

Loved the range of tones you used throughout each verse, you had some clever and ingenious lyrical methods here.

I'm hoping you continue to come this strong on future productions too.
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby Willy » Feb 21st, '12, 00:37

This is nice, sick flow. Chorus is tight. I like it a lot. You are talented man keep at it.
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby JBM » Feb 21st, '12, 02:38

Dam, you keep getting better. Great song man.
Everyone should give this a listen.
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby Scrubz » Feb 21st, '12, 04:24

Good looks all of you! I really appreciate it and glad my hard work is starting to pay off. I put a lot into this tape trying to improve on all my strengths AND weakness'. It's feedback like this which lets me know im on the right path and just gotta keep growing.

Chambers, of course hommie pm me with some details.

Again that you all.

EDIT: And I will feed all of you as soon as I can, I got a real busy week but I will get to yall.
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby TJMarrs » Feb 21st, '12, 23:38

I like it a lot. Kinda got hooked from the very beginning. Loving the flow and lyrics. :y:
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby Scrubz » Feb 29th, '12, 22:11

Good looks bro! I Fed all of you.
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Re: Scrubz - Said and Done[SINGLE]

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 2nd, '12, 15:25

Can't remember if I gave feed on this on Facebook or not, but yeah this is a banging track, I've been playing this on my iPod for the past week, really chill to listen to. Lyrics are good, flow is live, delivery is fresh. Standard banging track, keeps the head bumping!
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