Grim - Rack City Remix

[Willy]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EF88DRDWpmU

Check it out and tell me what you think!

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[mdemaz]

Yo man, you seem to have a very unique style of vocal structure, you make good use of humorous adlibs and effects during the song, I like they way it sounds.

You have grasp onto your style, I think it's great that you put soo much effort into this short track, it shows initiative.

[Trimss]

^ Exactly what Demaz said.

When I heard your voice in the beggining I was dead lmao. Great intro, great flow.

The adlibs really ad a lot.

[Ticalrecords]

your adlibs killed it for sure, i liked alot of the lyrics like brains off the chainsaw line of w/e. sometimes though your adlibs overpower the beat and its hard to hear what your saying especially when you do that demon voice, its cool and everything but its hard to follow. but this is a good track

[Scrubz]

hate this song and beat but any way. Your delivery is pretty good. Flow as well. The mixing was pretty good too man. It's good to hear some new talent around hear. You got shady's style for sure haha. All in all i dug it, keep it up.

[Steve Spag]

Hahaha I can't stand this beat but I've never heard someone remix it yet so that's cool. This is pretty enjoyable man, the flow is nice when you're rapping fast but when you slow down I feel like it slurs a little bit. Lyrics, delivery are cool but a bit Eminemish for me, but that doesn't mean it's a bad track. Nice for a short song, would like to hear more!

[Solace]

Agree with Spag about the lyrics and delivery thing. In all your...three verses lol you've just sounded like you're trying to be an SSLP Eminem clone. I'd like to see you progress stylistically, but on this I can't really hate much. I know you're a beginner but you handled this pretty great. Maybe work on a full solo track next time.