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Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby KingDavid » Mar 9th, '12, 18:13

Well I've said he was king and there's been threads about his complex rhyme schemes, but this thread is to analyze his same syllable cyphers, which I believe is his strongest skill. Plus no ones been posting anything overly interesting in a second.

Let me get the ball rolling.

UNTITLED:
You can count every muh'fucking chicken fore' it hatches
Cuz, you can bet your ass that we gone get it crackin'
Like a Kraken and Titans when they're clashin'
Get your brains bashed in so bad
You gone have Kurt Kobain askin
To autograph a bloodstained napkin

Superb flow on the same syllable!

HELLO:
My equilibrium is off, must me the Lithium I don't need to buy any drugs, man people give me 'em It just becomes everyday extracurriculum No reason in particular, it was strictly fun
A fifth of rum and two bottles of 151 51 people asleep in my damn living room
Scuse me hun? But what is your name, (Vivian?) (I woke up) next to ya naked and uh, did we umm?..

(He continues to ryme the same sylable for the remainder of the verse, while telling a krazy tale! as he does the same for this verse off stay wide awake:

Escapin' me no dice ya see I might just be Ted Bundy
Or Satan gee what a site to see I'm dancing in my red panties
I'm crazy but it's alright with me man life can be so empty
Stay away from cuz I'm dancing to quite a different drum beat

My first single:

I'll get away with murder
I'm like o.j . he's like my cochran today
We keep them mark freman tapes
In a safe, locked them away
Better watch what you say
Just when you thought you were safe
Them fuckers got you on tape
You swear to god you was playin
Whether or not you was little Joshua
Gosh I wish I coulda told you to not do the same
Cause one day it could cost you your name

Post examples and discuss - and remember EMINEM IS KING!
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby M-Pyre » Mar 9th, '12, 19:48

imho, the first and the last one are such bad examples
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby Elision » Mar 9th, '12, 19:51

this is what you're looking for

http://youtu.be/2clsl88WoBU?t=1m19s
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bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
every wicked bit of strange to mainstream
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby TheGentlePlayer » Mar 9th, '12, 19:52

What is syllable ryming? Sorry, im new to this
I wanted an album so rugged nobody could touch it.
Spent a million a track and went over my budget.
Now how in the fuck am I supposed to get out of debt?
I can't rap anymore, I just murdered the alphabet.
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby Elision » Mar 9th, '12, 19:52

TheGentlePlayer wrote:What is syllable ryming? Sorry, im new to this
Do you know what a syllable is?
i'm comin in, drivin my short bus
with this nose i don't need a torch up
bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
every wicked bit of strange to mainstream
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby Elision » Mar 9th, '12, 19:58

I'm sorry, I misunderstood. I thought he wanted single-syllable rhyming. You're just looking for a long ass chained multi man.

Fortunately, I'm super obsessed with these. Which means I've collected hundreds of these verses over the years. Check this out, this is the longest multi that exists as far as I know

i'm comin in, drivin my short bus
with this nose i don't need a torch up
bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
every wicked bit of strange to mainstream
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby IcedSlim Shady » Mar 9th, '12, 20:12

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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby Elision » Mar 9th, '12, 20:14

Menzo wrote:Thank God this is Eminem's thread.
whatever menz, was just trying to help the dude
i'm comin in, drivin my short bus
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comin after who didn't support us...
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every wicked bit of strange to mainstream
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby M-Pyre » Mar 9th, '12, 20:49

just check infinite out

edit: at the moment I'm loving this multi line

you guys are so sensitive
Slim it's a touchy subject, try and just don't mention it
Mind with no sense in it, fried, gets so frantic
'Cause eyes get so squinted, I'm blind from smoke in 'em
With my windows tinted, with nine limos rented
Doin' lines of coke in 'em, with a bunch of guys hoppin' out
All high and dosin' it
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby Trimss » Mar 9th, '12, 23:09

Elision wrote:this is what you're looking for

http://youtu.be/2clsl88WoBU?t=1m19s


Step yo game up son. :flutter:
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby CrashBand » Mar 9th, '12, 23:56

Pretty much his whole first verse on renegade is a great example

Cause, see, they call me a menace, and if the shoe fits I'll wear it
But if it don't, then y'all'll swallow the truth, grin and bear it
Now who's the king of these rude, ludicrous, lucrative lyrics?
Who could inherit the title, put the youth in hysterics?
Using his music to steer it, sharing his views and his merits
But there's a huge interference: they're saying you shouldn't hear it
Maybe it's hatred I spew, maybe it's food for the spirit
Maybe it's beautiful music I made for you to just cherish
But I'm debated, disputed, hated and viewed in America
As a motherfuckin' drug addict - like you didn't experiment?
Now now, that's when you start to stare at who's in the mirror
And see yourself as a kid again, and you get embarrassed
And I got nothing to do but make you look stupid as parents
You fuckin' do-gooders, too bad you couldn't do good at marriage


TheGentlePlayer wrote:What is syllable ryming? Sorry, im new to this

and its kind of a misleading title as I made the same mistake Ellison did. Where I thought he meant try and rhyme one syllable as many times. eg. Help me remain sane no dame games came from bane To a changed man No cane thang Refrain from gang bang"

But what he was referring to is keeping the same rhyme scheme throughout an entire verse or for as long as possible. Renegade, Keepin it Raw, Stay Wide Awake (second verse) and Hello (first half of first verse) are all great examples
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby SliK » Mar 10th, '12, 00:36

It should read 'single multi' rather than 'single syllable'.
The last verse of Lose Yoursel uses the 'Salem's Lot' rhyme a lot right up to the end.
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby LEminemOP » Mar 10th, '12, 03:32

Him trying to use "living room" in his rhyme on Hello was a bit of a stretch. He kinda made it work, but it didn't really fit. He forced it to fit, but still...
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby 2PointOBoy » Mar 10th, '12, 03:38

Menzo wrote:He keeps the same rhyme throughout his entire verse on the D12 song "Fame". The same "what's new" scheme is evident through the whole thing.
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Re: Eminem's Same syllable Ryming

Postby KingDavid » Mar 10th, '12, 04:54

Yeah same sylable multi same thing. Great examples guys! and yeah, tech n9ne is ill man but this is TRshady haha.

renegade and loose yourself are excellent examples!
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