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AhdduB - Look In The Mirror

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AhdduB - Look In The Mirror

Postby Ticalrecords » Mar 12th, '12, 01:30

POF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=143664&p=1867045#p1867045

tell me what yall think


http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/look-in-the-mirror-prod-by


Tripping on some delysum – sniffin on a felt pen
My friends going bonkers – I’m way too numb to help him
Thinking he’s van helson - and now he’s fucking hell bent
On ridding the world of zombies by arming himself with,
A foam baseball bat - and a loaded pellet gun
Waving it around with an arm looking like its made of gelatin,
Woah that was trippy – and hella dangerous
I gotta make sure this idiot doesn’t try and aim at us/
robotripping on robotussin
purp what I’m smoking up with
Tryna cure my smoker’s cough
I guess its ironic stoner talk
Fuck it man go with the flow
I like my weed creeping slow
Like drive bys – within eyesight
Of the target – if ya didn’t know
I mean neither do I – im basically white
So if you got beef – let the reefer suffice
As an explanation – for my disregard
For everything holy to a crip or blood
This whole written – I ripped it up
And started over like I give a fuck
Ya know what man – fuck you
This is exactly what drugs do/



Swear it - This pill costs a fucking arm and a leg
In the sense you go numb in ya arms and ya legs
You essentially become an amputee
for those who wanna go N U Ts
some great stuff – no rape drug
all those stories were completely made up
if they were true it wouldn’t phase us
evidence is what we found no trace of/
found everything else in her blood
but they couldn’t find what was in her cup?
That’s a shame – actually
I don’t give a fuck whats happening
As long as I don’t fucking black out
and say the n word in a black crowd
or have sex with a fat bitch
and be the motherfucker you laugh at/
karma gonna come back to me
But I consider the day a wrap if we
Split an ice breaker between us
A lil bit of coke and some lenience
For the left field – this is how we get real
We on a roll – tryna reinvent wheels/
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Re: AhdduB - Look In The Mirror

Postby Instant Legend » Mar 13th, '12, 00:30

very interesting delivery - kind of all over the place in terms of schemes, a couple nice lines in here, but I'm not too sure how i feel about your voice. Although...you do remind me of one of the Kottonmouth Kings

not a bad cut here homie, just not sure if its for me

keep it movin

return the favor please

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Re: AhdduB - Look In The Mirror

Postby Ticalrecords » Mar 14th, '12, 18:30

thanks for the feedback
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Re: AhdduB - Look In The Mirror

Postby Eedee » Mar 17th, '12, 08:10

Interesting. As always, your sarcastic voice never fails to disappoint haha. Always makes listening to your tracks a pleasure. :) Lyrics were okay, had some good multis in there, as always. Switched up your flow (or length of rhymes) a lot of times, made your voice stretch to fit the beat, etc. Didn't sound too bad though, listenable on that aspect of it. The beat was intriguing was well, as a side note...

Keep droppin', man!
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