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Postby Atone » Mar 23rd, '12, 06:55

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Last edited by Atone on Aug 12th, '12, 07:42, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby AbramIsaac » Mar 23rd, '12, 06:59

Your first song seems to be an improvement on the whole "rapping on beat" thing.

Your quality is still pretty bad, but picking up a cheap mic will improve that.

Most of the songs are still off-beat, but the first one is definitely closer.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby Atone » Mar 23rd, '12, 07:03

thanx man
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Postby BigBoss » Mar 23rd, '12, 07:04

I liked the beginning...your voice is really nasaled though. Like you have a stuffy nose
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 23rd, '12, 13:38

I think you might have a Lag problem on your recording or something, what program do you use???.. and why haven't you cleaned your sound yet, you've been doing this for a while, go on and search how to properly mix, its not making it enjoyable.

If you really want people to listen to it, then put more effort. Music is not all about the lyrics you know, its about the process as well. Be more careful when making songs.

It does actually seem like an improvement from everything I've heard from you before, but you still need to research more my man.

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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby AbramIsaac » Mar 23rd, '12, 17:01

Hey, there we go.

Atone, what do you use to record? What program, and what brand of microphone?
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby Atone » Mar 23rd, '12, 19:15

Audacity, and i use a microphone from the Rock Band game for ps2
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby AbramIsaac » Mar 23rd, '12, 19:46

Ok, now we're getting somewhere.

Audacity is all well and good, but I'd recommend downloading Reaper if you want a better DAW. They don't make you buy the license to use it, and it's a fully functioning program. It's a little more complicated at first, but anyone can figure it out without much trouble at all.

The microphone thing. I would highly recommend getting a different mic, any mic would work. I've literally seen cheap ass mics at The Dollar Tree that would probably fair better than what you got. I know money can be tight, but there has to be a way to make 10 bucks and pick up something from Radioshack or Walmart.

That's where I would start, and I bet your quality would benefit tremendously.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby SG. » Mar 23rd, '12, 19:48

Atone The Underdog wrote:Audacity, and i use a microphone from the Rock Band game for ps2

WTF? No. Just no. A cheap plastic mic is NEVER a good idea.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby BigBoss » Mar 23rd, '12, 22:40

Zabe wrote:
Atone The Underdog wrote:Audacity, and i use a microphone from the Rock Band game for ps2

WTF? No. Just no. A cheap plastic mic is NEVER a good idea.



If he's not joking then i got to do this:


I'm callibg major fucking bullshit, if you really do use such a shit mic, there is no fucking way you had a record label send you a letter (which I remember you making a thread talking anout something like that).

If you weren't lying, show us proof then. Show us proof from the letter, block out anything you don't want us to see, but give proof.

There is no way a company contacted you if you're using a fucking Rock Band 2 mic...From PS2.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Mar 23rd, '12, 22:49

Its alright I just think that you need a better mic so that first of all its easier to understand and second it sounds better so you can really get more of your point across.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby Atone » Mar 24th, '12, 05:24

SWEET_TOOTH wrote:
Zabe wrote:
Atone The Underdog wrote:Audacity, and i use a microphone from the Rock Band game for ps2

WTF? No. Just no. A cheap plastic mic is NEVER a good idea.



If he's not joking then i got to do this:


I'm callibg major fucking bullshit, if you really do use such a shit mic, there is no fucking way you had a record label send you a letter (which I remember you making a thread talking anout something like that).

If you weren't lying, show us proof then. Show us proof from the letter, block out anything you don't want us to see, but give proof.

There is no way a company contacted you if you're using a fucking Rock Band 2 mic...From PS2.


As i said after that, it turned out not to be a record deal, it was a promotional thing where they would help promo me if i paid for packages, i don't have that file no more cuz idk who would keep a file you don't need after 2 weeks.

i even searched my recycle bin and it's not there but they sent me a long pdf file about the package deals they offer, and those package deals had a possibilty of being a record deal if i gained enough interest, so basically, they had me thinking i had something, so i would send them hundreds of dollars for promo packages that could have resulted in nothing, i was not about to take a gamble on something that stupid.

and the mic is not cheap and plastic, i just looked at it and was wrong, the rockband mic i used to have i gave to my sister when she bought some high school musical game, i am using a logitech.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby mdemaz » Mar 24th, '12, 06:13

Hey, I like this a lot more than your old shit dude.
I'll peep this album out when I get time.
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby Atone » Mar 24th, '12, 07:41

mdemaz wrote:Hey, I like this a lot more than your old shit dude.
I'll peep this album out when I get time.


Speaking of my old shit, i just made new plans, i'm going to re-record tracks from my 1st 5 tapes, cuz i feel like they could sound better than they are, songs from

1. The Future
2. Art Of Elevation
3. Art Of Elevation 2
4. Art Of Elevation 3
5. The Evolution Effect

they are going to be made into 2 different tapes

1. The Art Of Elevation: The Album

2. Evolution Of Music: Remixed & Unreleased Volume 2
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Re: Atone The Underdog - Stronger Than I've Ever Been (Previ

Postby mdemaz » Mar 24th, '12, 13:07

Yeah, re-record your stuff when you feel like you can actually make them sound better man.

I'm re-recording my tracks from the past now, the album is gonna be called Take Two.
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