3 weeks left

[Ka0t1c]

i got rid of the old one, here's my new one, different beat:

mp3: http://hu.lk/fr6ch7577jd7
here you go bitch: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=69&t=144494

if i had 3 weeks left to live and i couldn't cheat death, i'd sleep less
and give myself a deep breath then express the realness to help me release stress
plus i'd seek a recess, oh yes, i'd flee this big mess, even if i can't relax
heck, i'd lead my best dream next since my ETS won't reset, i'd recheck my GPS
i just wouldn't let my feet rest til there's peace at last for me in the flesh
or my cd quest i'd trash and i don't wish to see that
yet, i'm free to BS instead of kiss ass and i bet i'd kick back
with at least a 6 pack with little regret of the impact of me leavin these tracks
PS, i don't need a kleenex to clean up my sick past thinking i am a reject
now i guess i must proceed the mass even when i'm seen as an outcast, what a genius
but you've asked for me back to broadcast my dreams to dispatch
and keeping them fresh seems to be a unique task
to test me against uneasy guests trespassing this map
now magazines have been attached, battle ready, i'm set to attack ASAP


tbh, i was gonna write a song about a bucket list, but this is what came out instead, so far at least

i know quality isn't great, i am practicing with basic setup, so no booth, straight from the bed, lulz

[Ticalrecords]

i THINK your flow needs work, but im not so sure cuz the beat was so low...fuck it. you need to work on your enunciation cuz sometimes it was hard to understand what you were saying but then again that cud also just be the bad quality. i liked the lyrics, you should invest in a mic or protools to get your game up.

mind returning the favor?

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=143967

[Ka0t1c]

thanx, i used to have a great mic, i just don't understand protools or anything like that, no one ever wants to help a brother out, so i ditched my awesome mic, i got connections with a studio, i'm just practicing on my built in laptop mic with youtube instrumentals, then converting em from wma to mp3

[Scrubz]

OK, to start off i just wanna say you are attempting the impossible. I can tell you green to the recording world and by jumping into the flames with that quick flow was just to much at this point of your rap career. I will say you held a nice fllow in some parts of the verse, but you did slip up quite a bit when ever u tried changing the flow up. Listen, you got potential wit that flow but you GOTTA work on you voice, delivery and actually recording. It sound like u recorded with the beat playin in the background. Get a real program, it does not have to be pro tools, there are cheaper and easier ones out there. When you record you gotta get into it, not wisper it. Every new artist goes threw this you just gotta break outta that shell. I se potential just keep practicing!

Can You please feed my mixtape? I want you opinion on it!

[Ka0t1c]

it is in the background, i am not looking for quality, i'm working on my voice, thanx for the feed and i will get to yours. also, i could rap it slow of course

[SajN]

You need to post a link of feedback.

Or I would have to close this.

[Ka0t1c]

i did post a link of feed back, i accidentally deleted it asshole, there you go bitch

[SajN]

I'd appreciate if you could refrain from cussing when I am asking you to do a simple thing.

[Ka0t1c]

and i'd appreciate you not being a fukktard and instead, pm me about an issue or add some criticism to my audio

ps you never asked me shit

[Instant Legend]

you've got a lot of potential, but to be completely honest - its hard to hear whats going on - for some reason this shit is CRAZY quiet - I can hear that you get into some solid multi's, but there are a few inconsistencies in the delivery, but i think you know that.

you're on the right path

and if you dont want to go through all the crazyness of learning protools, i'd recommend you look into adobe audition as a backup plan: very basic, with some quality effects and strong features.

return the favor please:

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=144497

[Ka0t1c]

thanx and i got you

[Slim Fiasco]

\no one ever wants to help a brother out, so i ditched my awesome mic,\

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yDViKqK53IQ - Download Cubase and use these presets. They're good enough. I think you ride the beat well (sure you can improve, but it sounded OK), and you need to work more on your intonation patterns. But the best advice I could give you, is to keep flowing as it comes natural to you, and not to try something you can't do i.e. something you think could sound better. You can't learn how to flow well overnight, and it's a long ass process so just take it one step at a time and have patience. That's how I've been advancing, and I'm pleased with the progress.

Here's one thread of mine where I wrote more about working on your delivery - viewtopic.php?f=29&t=142636

And this a blog I run into the other week, and it seems to be quite helpful - http://rappingmanual.com/?cat=74