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Postby TripleNineThree » May 1st, '12, 03:43

Lyrics are in the video so you can follow along with it. - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ja1LQOlQ ... e=youtu.be

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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby Ticalrecords » May 1st, '12, 17:05

the christian rap turn in the second verse was odd but its w/e to each is his own. this is actually really good tho i loved the sample and your flow was on point. cool stuff man

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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby TripleNineThree » May 1st, '12, 18:43

Thanks bro!! And the whole thing was Christian ha, I wouldn't call me a "Christian rapper" but the point of rap is to display the rapper's perspective on the world. You wouldn't call Lil Wayne a "Drug rapper" when he talks about drugs or a "sex rapper" but the purpose of my music is to share my faith and show the world from my perspective.

Checking your track now!
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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby TripleNineThree » May 3rd, '12, 18:47

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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby Le Tunisien » May 4th, '12, 19:31

okay so the delivery and flow are cool but man try using some multi's here and there it will definetly make your song more intresting to hear trust me try doin that, anyways the content is good i mean your concept with the hook and everything it was a nice song i wanna here some emotional song of yours to judge better im more into emo songs so uhh keep it up the quality is good also , nice work :)))
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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » May 4th, '12, 19:36

pretty good, you had a few good multis in there, like the guy above said, just put some more multis in there and it will help a lot. Good track, keep up teh good work1
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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby TripleNineThree » May 4th, '12, 21:54

Thanks guys! And @Le Tunisen, I think you'll enjoy this track. It's basically my story, very emotional track - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o2X-WdLfpQY

(Don't pay attention to the quality of the video haha, I did it just to see how it would turn out)
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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby _Ironic_ » May 6th, '12, 06:22

I like the beat hahaha


wow, someone who actually believes in what they're rapping about

I wasn't feelin very much on the track....however your confidence was immediately evident...

one suggestion I can give you is use more difficult rhyme schemes...the same predictable schemes make it tiring by the end...

even though I didn't like the screamish delivery...it was still done well...you conveyed the message and that's the point...just keep at it man u got alot of potential
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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby TripleNineThree » May 6th, '12, 06:52

@Ironic

Thanks for the feed fam I appreciate it!! I'll work on some multis in my next track.
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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby Solace » May 6th, '12, 15:11

Really?! Really?! Hahaha I loved that. Definitely a enjoyable track. You seem to have a lot of things on lock. Your writing COULD be improved with multies, as others have mentioned, but what you're going with right now is alright. I like your take on this beat, no one else would have thought to do something like this over a beat with a sample saying "All I care about is big rims and dollar bills!".
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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby TripleNineThree » May 6th, '12, 15:53

Solace wrote:Really?! Really?! Hahaha I loved that. Definitely a enjoyable track. You seem to have a lot of things on lock. Your writing COULD be improved with multies, as others have mentioned, but what you're going with right now is alright. I like your take on this beat, no one else would have thought to do something like this over a beat with a sample saying "All I care about is big rims and dollar bills!".


Thanks man I appreciate it, I'm glad you enjoyed the track!!
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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby Instant Legend » May 7th, '12, 07:36

this shit held my interest - picked a slick beat and came with a gang of energy, like it when you switch up the scheme - yeah, this works, your presence alone commands attention

for the record, i dont know whats up with all the multi talk in here - multis are ill, but if youre droppin multis in every cut, then what exactly are you doin thats different you know what i mean? this is the type of cut that didnt need multis, imo


good work homie

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Re: Dolla Bills

Postby TripleNineThree » May 7th, '12, 15:55

Instant Legend wrote:this shit held my interest - picked a slick beat and came with a gang of energy, like it when you switch up the scheme - yeah, this works, your presence alone commands attention

for the record, i dont know whats up with all the multi talk in here - multis are ill, but if youre droppin multis in every cut, then what exactly are you doin thats different you know what i mean? this is the type of cut that didnt need multis, imo


good work homie

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Thanks bro I appreciate it! I'm at school right now but I'll feed your track tonight when I get home!
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