[Track 2] Lack Focus Ft. Mr.DGAF

[J.R.]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sYvgig7wj8Q
LOF's:
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MR.DGAF
My mind wanders as the task at hand evades me
I try harder to attack it, damn I'm lazy
If I plan to fail then maybe I'd succeed in being wrong
Cause my lack of focus has me acting hopeless, to complete this song
Would be the bomb, attention span has switched again to random shit
One second busting raps and then a minute in I'm snagging chips
To snack on, quick, go grab a pen to write or I might lose interest
To do this shit sometimes it takes all night for my lines to finish
And you can sit outside your screen and roll your eyes at shit I wrote
But you don't know how long it took, it's no surprise that it is dope
At least in my eyes; shit it's happening again my mind has wandered
All the random times I talk contribute to denying problems
That I'm bothered with the fact that I will sit and work all night
To perfect rhymes when I know that I've got another verse to write
It's certain I will lose the drive finish every bar I've done
But look how far I've come you know that it was hard to...um

[Chorus]
Excuses all day long..
Singin songs..
Ping or Pong..
Which excuse will I hammer on?

J.R.
Sit here with a bag of ritz,
big fear that I'm laggin, shit,
To kick the habbits would be like to quit rappin',
I'd throw a fit, shun the mic? ain't happenin.
I start fasting. get lost in my instruments.
When rapping, I give a hundred and ten percent.
So then I lack focus on friends and health,
A friend lends a hand and says jack, man you smell.
Well I've been writing rhymes, ya know?
Still here's some shampoo, "Peach lime" to soak
Yo that shit's not cool I'm trying to be a master,
" yo shut up, you stupid little bastard,
mom if you could run your mouth any faster,
you spew more shit in an hour than a pastor.
Fuck now I forgot what this verse was about...
shit, bshady, nutz, the guy in the studio, out.

[Eedee]

Lol I loved the topic!

DGAF, your verse was tight. Great multis, great structure. Your last line made me laugh haha.

JR, there we go! I saw some multis! "bag of ritz / lagging, shit" "instruments / ten percent" "lime to soak / rhymes, you know".

Although the first two bars were insanely short compared to the rest of your verse, so the flow was incredibly awkward to try to figure out there.

Solid drop. I'd like to see you add more multis to your verses, JR. As I said in another feed, it honestly makes reading verses go smoother and it sounds better to rhyme multiples syllables/words rather than just one.

[Mr.DGAF]

No lie J.R., this is one of the best verses I've seen from you since you started dropping again. There's still some consistency to work on, but it's good to see that you're getting better with each drop. And thanks for letting me hop on this track man, definitely appreciate it.

[J.R.]

Appreciate having you on my ep DGAF.
Dope drop, as usual.

Also, now I gotta get geno and eedee and I'll have all 4 Beefers on it.

[J.R.]

Appreciate having you on my ep DGAF.
Dope drop, as usual.

Also, now I gotta get geno and eedee and I'll have all 4 Beefers on it.

Hit me up mole

[J.R.]

I think I'm more
Focused in the summer, due to
The fact schools
Out. Thanks homies. Menzo, special props.

[Eedee]

Appreciate having you on my ep DGAF.
Dope drop, as usual.

Also, now I gotta get geno and eedee and I'll have all 4 Beefers on it.

Yup, PM me if you want to collab. I'm always down!