Hammer (Fiasco Day 1)

[SG.]

Written to the Hammer Dance beat (you've heard it and I can't be bothered to find a link). This is random as hell, I can't work well without a topic, it seems.

I'm a producer-rapper, half bad, half amazing
Despite the amount of careers I'm derailing
I try to seek solace in my chaos theories
But I find it kinda hard to say this clearly
Fuck it, I'll Block out your X-ray beats with a single diss
Somehow I already know what you fuckin' think of this
You've upped your sensitivity but you're still inside your bounding box
I'm a living legend, like the guy who founded the Roc
Disrespect to Sajjad, because this is the fuckin' heist
You find it hard to move on from the way you stuck in life
Then there's another guy who thinks he's ballin' on his sofa
You might call him Block but I prefer to call him SOPA
People might not like me, I got the brand of Russell's comedy
I've got the fuckin' memories of past hustles codding me
In fact, I kinda feel sorry for these other lost believers
But Block and Sajjad, nah, you just some frauds, decievers

LOF: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146158&p=1924598#p1924598

[Slim Fiasco]

This is excellent man, awesome job! It had couple of great lines and I can't really pick a favorite one. As is the case with name's piece, your choice of words is the best thing about this. Let me point some out:

chaos theories
bounding box
X-ray beats
codding me

Those sound cool as hell to me. I also love your opening line, it was a great flip on the "half-man, half-amazing" saying with you mocking yourself i.e. your producing qualities, but in the same time promoting your MCing skills. The SOPA reference was great as well. And I'm assuming you were referring to Jay-Z with the Roc line. And last but not least I liked the wordplay in here:

You find it hard to move on from the way you stuck in life

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Damn I liked this dude it was pretty random though! First thing I noticed was the flow is on point the whole time with the beat which is great. Great use of vocabulary, I keep saying I'm going to read the dictionary more but never do! The rhyming was on point the whole time in this piece and it really helped the flow out. Anyway, I did like this a lot dude! keep it up!

[Mr.DGAF]

Cool man, haven't seen a Zabe piece around here in a while. Some nice name flips in there, clever stuff. Not much to say man. The rhymes are pretty good, I didn't find the beat but it flowed without it. Vocab was good. I liked the first line the most like Slim said, I thought that was a pretty cool line.

[CrashBand]

I stumbled occasionally on the flow. (was probably me not the piece though)

Do you have beef with half of TR? or just friendly name flips? Before my time. Regardless they were nice name flips

[SG.]

Thanks for the feed, everyone.

I stumbled occasionally on the flow. (was probably me not the piece though)

Do you have beef with half of TR? or just friendly name flips? Before my time. Regardless they were nice name flips

Just Block and Sajjad.