Seen It All (Fiasco Day 3)

[Slim Fiasco]

Great work man, I liked the change in tone from your previous pieces. I definitely liked the Big L line and there some cool rhymes like atrocity and generosity. The rhyming was good in general as well, and that 3rd line sounded awesome. The bitterness of the point of view you presented was perfectly conveyed. Nicely done.

[Mr.DGAF]

Oooh, this is the most serious thing I've seen form you since you came back to the CW. Good stuff too, the rhymes were really nice, but that last line. I loved that man, the best thing about this piece in my opinion. The tone switch was cool man, it's refreshing to see something with a serious tone since you started dropping again. Good stuff dude.

[SG.]

Nice to see you handle something serious for a change. Nice piece, my favourite lines were the last two. You handled this challenge well, well done.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Definitely cool to see a serious one from you man, I liked last line, It really was a perfect way to end this one. Good rhyming and pretty good flow from what I can tell!! awesome man. keep it up.