Geno - I (Fiasco Day 7)

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha, glad you bumped because I really didn't notice this. Stand out from this piece was the die once line. That was really cool haha. Rhymes were always nice, I liked the rhyme scheme to end it. I had fun finding some of the rhymes, some of them aren't as obviously placed which is cool.

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha, was it the inner tubes line?

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha I agree, that's pretty creative. And that it happened accidentally is pretty cool. I think that when stuff that intricate happens and it's accidental, it's a sign of a pretty good writer.

[Emadyville]

The rhyme schemes and overall rhymes were intense and dope. The flow maybe i didnt catch as much but seemed like some syllables were off, but I could def be wrong there. Either way the overall lyricism and rhymes stood out a lot, the content was good but the die once line reminded me of em on bad influence lol overall dope tho

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Solid piece as usual dude keep it up, I liked the rhyming there seemed to be a lot of different rhyme schemes going on with great multis! awesome!!

[Slim Fiasco]

The 2nd line was dope. And I'll only say that because I'm getting really repetitive with the feedback I give you.