Basketball (Fiasco Day 7)

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

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eh i should have worked harder on this but I'm getting tired and have a blood blister on my toe so this will have to do!

I'm at the park just playing that basketball
its in my heart and staying I cant withdrawl
guarding a big fat dude with massive arms
I start trying man foul? thats a faggot call
I just grabbed his back and this basterd falls
and if the other team wins I'm stabbing yall!
So man pass the rock lets do a pick n roll
or a give and go shit I'm quick to throw
to the center yo so he can be lifting those
legs to the ten foot goal and dunk on em
Fuck balling they quit sobbing and shit
they lost so I'm sprinting robbing theyre kicks
all shots were just bricks your not the best
get off the court and bitch, whos got it next!

[Slim Fiasco]

Haha, that was dope man. I liked that little story you told, nice way to mix your love for basketball and some psycho ish. The rhyming was great as always. Good job!

[Mr.DGAF]

Love basketball, so this is a cool piece especially to read. I actually struggled a bit with the flow, but the others here seem to have picked it up fine so that isn't a concern. The rhyming is always good, I liked how it went from kinda normal to stabbing y'all.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Thanks guys, I wasnt happy with this tbh. hopefully tonights verse will be better!