Beat - I was really feeling this beat. I liked how it started, nice slow and emotional. And then when it came in it just sounded good and professional - 9/10
Flow - Your flow was good for the most part. There were some spots that you fell off but for the most part you stayed on beat the entire song which is rare

9/10
Delivery - This is where you could be upped. I can hear your emotion behind the songs but the delivery just didn't sound right to me, I'm not entirely sure. It could just be that I'm not use to your voice - 7/10
Quality - This is where it could definitely be upped but I understand it's not the easiest thing to go out and buy a new microphone. I feel like there is either too much layering on the track and too much reverb; I'm not sure which. I love mixing music and I'd be up for messing around with your vocals and see what I can do with them - if you're interested PM me - 7/10
Chorus - This was good, I think it grows on me. The first time I heard it I hated it but after a couple more listens it had my head bobbing. Although, I still think you could have done something else or had another person singing it because you don't have a singing voice IMO - 7.5/10
Lyrics - These were good. I like the content of the track overall - I enjoy nice deep tracks that make you think instead of songs about how sick a the person's flow is. 9/10
Overall - 8/10 - This was a good song man and once again I loved the content in the track. Just experiment with the mixing.
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