Set Me Free [Lyrics]

[TripleNineThree]

Hey guys, I posted the hook to this song a week ago and here is the finished product!

I think you guys will enjoy this song, this is the deepest song that I've ever written.

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=147550
Set Me Free - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ORiPrnJ-A5A

Drop a link and I'll be sure to RTF!

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Damn man this was awesome I liked it a lot!! You put a lot of emotion into this one and it turned out to be probably your best yet IMO, The delivery was awesome, mixing great as usual, flow stayed on point throughout the whole thing, and lyrics were amazing! way to go man your improving keep it up

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks bro I appreciate it! And yeah, this is my favorite song that I've done in the past four years.

[Eedee]

First off, loved the beat.

As always, not liking the subject matter personally - you know why. But that's not knocking this song in any way. I just feel it's a moral negative to think we're fundamentally wrong and guilty that we need forgiveness/saving from an invisible entity; even though that's how he made us in the first place... but anyhow... lol

Your hook was awesome, as I said in the other thread.

Lyrics were good. The rhyming wasn't that amazing but it still worked. Solid yet simple.

Flow... The first two bars had a slight flow problem for me. It felt like you should've have paused in between "... He's risen *pause* flippin' a Bible page". Might just be me, but it felt off.
"The pain that I gain whenever these kids shout my name" had a slight rush to it, felt like.

Mixing was amazing as always. So clean and polished and had that depth to it that made it sound great. I think that's what my songs are lacking. I feel my flow/lyrics are down but that mixing... meh lol.

Great song, keep making them! I even liked it on YouTube and I basically never like a song on there haha.

[Blu]

Whoa... this is pretty awesome.

The beat is pretty cool, but your voice is what really made me go :O

You have a good rocker voice, I could really imagine you being a lead singer with a hardcore rock band. But please, don't take it offensive, the song still kicks ass. The chorus really reminded me of what a rock song would sound like.

This was one of the best songs I've heard on the site, great job man!

EDIT: I just listened to some of your other songs, BECOME A ROCK STAR. NOW.

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks everyone for the feedback!!!

@me being a rockstar - that made seriously lol haha, the problem is I can rap with an aggressive voice but I can't sing at all lol

[mdemaz]

Holy shit.

First off:
This song is a lot darker than your other stuff, which is awesome; I love that shit.

Second:
The mixing and layering is PERFECT; I'm guessing you have a decent effect chain there.

Third:
Your flow is on point, awesome lyrical structures and hidden ryhmes, great delivery; aggressive, but clear.
I felt like you could of really exploded on this song, but you kept a consistent level of aggression through the whole song; thus, there isn't any parts of this song where you peak.

It's just a constant barrage of aggression, which is awesome and very original.
Most people just scream in parts of the song.

Lastly:
I did find it a bit hard to understand some of the words, but then again, I find it hard to understand all rappers completely.

I guess that's why lyrics were invented.

Overall:
Solid song, consistent, no noticeable laziness with the lyrics and mixing, original vocal delivery, cool voice and the beat is cool.

9.5/10

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man I really appreciate your support and encouragement, it means a lot to me!!

Also, thanks for liking my page on Facebook! I sent you a friend request - my name is Tyler Ramsbey

[Trimss]

No real feed here, just giving my thoughts.

I like this a lot man, like really. Lot of energy, damn.. Very deep. Amazing

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks Trimss, I appreciate the encouragement!

[Le Tunisien]

you have this rocker voice on the hoook it sounded good....the song was cool even though the rhymes werent that amazing ... a great song i liked it keep it up

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks bro I appreciate it!

[mdemaz]

Thanks man I really appreciate your support and encouragement, it means a lot to me!!

Also, thanks for liking my page on Facebook! I sent you a friend request - my name is Tyler Ramsbey

Oh, so that was you?
Cool!
Don't be a stranger, man.
We should collaborate sometime; just email me or inbox me on Facebook or something.

Btw, don't worry about some of my lyrics I've wrote and performed in hip-hop/non-hip-hop songs that bash religion; it's just for shock value, lol.
You should like my page, man; I'll send you an invite!
I'm getting ready to blow it up.

[TripleNineThree]

Yessir! And for sure man, I'm working on getting a collab put together with Trimss at the moment and then I'll hit you up!

[Spyder]

basically what eedee said

i would really like to see you write about something else man, not just cause i dont believe but with anyone the same topic no matter how heart felt gets stagnant. id like to see what other topics, or just rhyming you can do. see if you can be crazy lyrical.

flow is nice man, on point fits with the beat, hook verses everything is sharp you dont really need to hear more on that.

delivery, you have the emotion but idk, the voice is weird for me. especially on the chorus where you said. "the old me" and "holy" just sounds a little awkward, other than that your deff comfortable on the mic.

lyrics were basic, nothing new, no crazy schemes or huge vocab or anything, but their nice and what id expect from this type of track. id like to see what you can do on more lyrical terms though.

mixing, obv great, beat was nice too