Our House ft. Eminem

[Accor]

That part you quoted Accor, is probably my favourite part from the verse. It's not lazy at all. It's well written. Lemme guess, you're looking at the end rhymes only being a 2 syllable rhyme like "Go Taz" ? You think it's awful 'cause of that, right?

There's so much more to it than that, and if you actually seen it the way I seen it, I don't know how you could dislike it.

No, I really don't care about rhymes all that much. But there's nothing interesting about the lyrics to me. He doesn't even sound sincere. He isn't saying anything interesting and on top of that it sounds like he's rambling and it makes it impossible to listen to.

My favourite part is probably the window to the soul part, though. That was somewhat intriguing.

[Man1x]

Lazy isn't the right word. We get it, he rhymed a bunch of shit and it wasn't impossible to tell what he was saying, BUT his wording is fucked up along with the choppy flow. I don't care about the rhymes if he's spitting them out like a robot...he literally focussed more on rhyming than making sense in that verse. What ever happen to being able to rhyme, be clear, and be clever... ALL in one verse instead of just parts of that?

Edit: honestly, I don't expect him to become his old self any more. I know he can't, he's past his prime.

[Trimss]

I'm struggling to see how his verse doesn't make sense..

[Accor]

Well then...what exactly seems lazy to you? The writing on that particular part is relatively intricate.



So nothing stands out to you, which is fine. It's hard to listen to for you, which is fine...but I still don't see the part where he seems lazy and threw it together in five minutes? Just because YOU don't like it, doesn't automatically categorize it as lazy.

I don't know why someone always has to suggest something so stupid to make me look like a HUGE dick rider. If I like what I hear, then I like it - if I don't, then I move on and ignore it. People here just seem to LOVE hanging onto every piece of potential criticism.

I accept Em's shitty moments, but I don't give a fuck if someone else likes it.

I'm not going to decipher that whole image but I'm pretty sure you're being overly generous there.

"Nomad with the notepad" and "Spaz on these hoebags" doesn't rhyme. It would be mad/spaz and I guess you could argue about notepad/hoebags but that doesn't really rhyme either lol.

Rhyme schemes aren't hard to write.. People on rap forums who don't even rap write pretty technical stuff and I posted an example of that on here once, but that's beside the point.

This is a discussion forum and I like to discuss music lol.

[Man1x]

I'm struggling to see how his verse doesn't make sense..

you can tell what he wants to convey but he sounds awkward as fuck. He's literally doing his relapse writing style without the accent.

Edit: @Menzo, dude chill out. I never attacked you, I was expressing an opinion. Don't get anal cause I have one and don't conform to praising Eminem's multis. Besides, you missed the whole point I made in my last post.

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relapse writing style without the accent.

[Accor]

Everything makes SENSE, but it sounds like he`s rambling and struggling to get his point across.. I think that`s what Man1x is trying to say lol.

[Blu]

I'm not going to decipher that whole image but I'm pretty sure you're being over generous there.

"Nomad with the notepad" and "Spaz on these hoebags" doesn't rhyme. It would be mad/spaz and I guess you could argue about notepad/hoebags but that doesn't really rhyme either lol.

Rhyme schemes aren't hard to write.. People on rap forums who don't even rap write pretty technical stuff and I posted an example of that on here once, but that's beside the point.

This is a discussion forum and I like to discuss music lol.

Yeah, I think you guys are way over your heads when you try to point out the rhymes in Em's verses. "Petitor" and "regular" doesn't really rhyme...

And how does "Just don't act" rhyme with "one blows past"? I can see how act and past would rhyme, but...


Ah, fuck it. One-sided argument.

[Man1x]

Lazy isn't the right word. We get it, he rhymed a bunch of shit and it wasn't impossible to tell what he was saying, BUT his wording is fucked up along with the choppy flow. I don't care about the rhymes if he's spitting them out like a robot...he literally focussed more on rhyming than making sense in that verse.

I think YOU and the rest of the self-acclaimed Hip-Hop heads of TR are the lazy ones, because it's getting more and more apparent with each passing day that literary comprehension isn't a strong point.

How the fuck doesn't he make sense? Cuz he mentions Taz? Fuck! Are you guys THAT fuckin' anal? Taz works with the context of going CRAZY on the competition, and GONADS works with the context of him grabbin' his nuts like he did in every public appearance accompanied by a middle finger.

That's your response. It matches nothing I said once you said the word..."I."

Edit: If you need it clearer - I never said Eminem was lazy, and I never said the verse didn't make sense. Your statements were just out of place, not my argument.

[Accor]

Bullshit lmfao. Reading it over now and half of it isn't even close to rhyming and a lot of it probably wasn't intentional on Em's behalf.

[Blu]

Oh shit, inb4 war.

[Man1x]

Dude, I've never said Eminem was lazy. I wasn't rude how I said anything, I never attacked you, I said it made sense. All I did was say his wording was awkward, the flow was annoying, and it's basically his Relapse style of writing without the accent. He rhymes a shit load, I know. He does in every verse. It's the most important thing to him now, and I get that.

[Man1x]

Accor said lazy, and you said:

"he literally focussed more on rhyming than making sense in that verse."

You keep editing every post, it's really difficult to keep a coherent discussion when someone does that.

Yeah, sorry but I didn't edit that post. If you read above that part you cut out, it says it makes sense. So, whether I edited it or not you were wrong in your response.

Edit: Here it is "...it wasn't impossible to tell what he was saying..."

[Accor]

Bullshit lmfao. Reading it over now and half of it isn't even close to rhyming and a lot of it probably wasn't intentional on Em's behalf.

LOL are you serious?

He did the same thing back in his "prime"

And..? Did I say anything about the rhyming in his prime lol? All I said was that most of the stuff Menzo highlighted was stretched. Also I'm pretty sure his rhyming was better in his prime brah.

[Accor]

I guess you could argue about notepad/hoebags but that doesn't really rhyme either lol.

Are you fucking serious? I mean, I think Menzo was a bit generous too, but you're really trying to argue that Eminem wasn't intending to rhyme "notepad" with "hoebags"?

And how does "Just don't act" rhyme with "one blows past"? I can see how act and past would rhyme, but...

He's rhyming "don't act" with "blows past." If you can't see that he is, then you don't understand how rhyming works.

No, he definitely was. It doesn't rhyme, though.

Menzo's thing is a clusterfuck so I can see why Blu was confused lol.