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just as I predicted
Are you retarded? Read my initial post on this subject: I was saying that one rhymes better with on than just. So don't try and twist my argument to say I suggested it can't rhyme with just. You're clutching at straws Menzo. Stop embarrassing yourself. If you read all my posts, especially the last one, you will see you are seriously coming across as pretty retarded which is unusual. 'Just' requires more twisting than on to rhyme with one, hence why em hasn't done it often.
Yes, in the SSLP era he rhymed a lot of things which you may have thought couldn't rhyme, but in all those cases he used words which followed the rhyme pattern: having a similar sound, and an ending that can sound almost the same (as in the example you posted). he didn't twist the words a lot though. Not as much as he currently does now! So the SSLP example stands. If I had posted from Relapse then that would have undermined my argument somewhat, although I'm not sure how! EM's word on rhyming is not gold.
One does rhyme better with on than just which was the only argument I was presenting across these last few pages. If you improve your reading skills, maybe you would have realised that, instead of trying to insult me with facepalms and childish insults.
At least you finally admitted I was right in this sense though. Thank you.
ETHERED.
Holy shit, look in a dictionary and learn how to pronounce the words. THEY DON'T FUCKING RHYME, SHUT THE FUCK UP ABOUT THIS. One and on definitely do not rhyme, you must be smoking crack or something. One rhymes better with just, just take your L and let it go. You're acting like a child trying SO hard not to be wrong.
You are a fucking dipshit who can barely string a sentence together, let alone understand the complexities of rhyming or the levels of basic English. (really this is enough to end this argument altogether but I will continue).
The main part of a rhyme is the
ENDING. Get that? I am not commenting on the rhyme Eminem uses in this track. It works. It is fairly easy within a multi rhyme to make 'one' and 'just' rhyme. He does a good job.
Get that?
As a single rhyme it is harder. Going back to what I said, the ending of a rhyme is extremely important. This is proven FACT. It underpins the very nature of a rhyme. In this case, 'Aw' and 'uh' have a similar sound. I said similar. I didn't say exact. Consequently, one and on rhyme a lot better than just and on. I don't understand why you can't get your head around this. Please get your head out of Manzo's arsehole, all of you above, and realise that he is wrong.
Rhyming dictionaries prove me right.
The very nature of the rhyme itself proves me right :
Correspondence of sound between words or the endings of words, esp. when these are used at the ends of lines of poetry.Also:
Have or end with a sound that corresponds to another.It is written here in plain text. Your opinion is centred around the conception that words which sound the same phonically always rhyme. They don't. The ENDING of a rhyme matters much more!
Menzo gave the 'homie you're on one' example. What other rhymes are there in this song?
wait, he doesn't rhyme an 'uh' sounding word with on does he?!!!!
Oh wait, he does!
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You try to turn your charm on. Cuz you just think your bishop, the Don Juan.
But if you think that your fucken with me, homie your on one.Juan and on both have the dreaded 'ah' sound, yet they rhyme very well with one (hence why RHYMING DICTIONARIES constitute it as a close rhyme).
Now going back to why on is a better rhyme than just (which has already been proven) let's fit it into this rhyme:
because you just think you're bishop the Don Just
but if you think that your fucken with me, homie your on one.
See? It HAS to really have the same
ending to work as a good rhyme! Just doesn't even fit! SO COME BACK TO THAT RETARD.
Why is this so difficult to understand?
Now please, as I said above, stop sucking up to regular posters on this forum who you think are your friend and realise when basic logic and a smart understanding of the English language defeats childish statements of 'it's just right'.
Are any of you even cut out for university? I really think you are out of your depth in assessing how the English language and rhyme structure works (although I have written this in simple English, so it should be easy to comprehend).
There, I've
ended it now
(worthy of Em himself).
I understand why you might be misunderstanding me, but please don't. Just can rhyme with one. It takes tweaking but it works within a multi. But it doesn't rhyme better than on!
I've proven that multiple times. You haven't proven anything.
*note on 'ending': this refers to the sound at the end of the word. For a rhyme to work well the rhyming words have to have a similar sound to the end. One and on share an 'un/on' sound respectively[on and un are easy to make sound the same] (it dos require slight mispronouncing to work as an absolute rhyme) however just and one have an 'us(t)' and 'un' sound which requires a lot of distortion to work together as a rhyme. No poet would pick 'just' over 'on' to rhyme with one if he had only those two to choose from.
