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Re: Solace - Contemplation

Postby Rollimeo » Sep 10th, '12, 03:55

I like the song man

just downloaded the mixtape
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Re: Solace - Contemplation

Postby Solace » Sep 10th, '12, 03:57

Yeah? Damn, I love you haha, thanks for downloading it.
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Re: Solace - Contemplation

Postby Kez » Sep 10th, '12, 14:21

Very enjoyable! Your flow pretty much can't be criticised. I liked how you ended the verses. The sample sounds nice. I have no real bad things to say I just enjoyed listening to it. You really have improved a lot.

I'd possibly download the mixtape it's from, but we will see. Is there a thread for it? But good shit man.
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Re: Solace - Contemplation

Postby Solace » Sep 10th, '12, 22:25

Yay, Kez has returned for the time being. Thanks, real glad someone of your standards thinks it's a good track. And about the tape, no, there's not a thread for it (yet). I just wanted to get this out first to TRians as it's basically my contribution to the mixtape lol bar 1 subpar verse and a chorus from years back. Again, thanks.
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Re: Solace - Contemplation

Postby Spyder » Sep 11th, '12, 02:54

pretty nice track man

little more upbeat than alot of what ive heard from you so it was nice for a little change.
beat and hook are sick

the only critique is it sounds a little distorted for you vocals, like the bass is overpowering.
idk if that was in the mixing or what happened but i turned my shit down and it didnt really help
so i know its not that

flow and everything is nice, not really too much i can say
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Re: Solace - Contemplation

Postby Solace » Sep 13th, '12, 00:07

Spyder wrote:little more upbeat than alot of what ive heard from you so it was nice for a little change.

Exactly what I had in mind :y:

Spyder wrote:the only critique is it sounds a little distorted for you vocals, like the bass is overpowering.
idk if that was in the mixing or what happened but i turned my shit down and it didnt really help
so i know its not that

Possibly just the Youtube quality, I've played the mp3 several times loud and it just sounds nice to me. Youtube really makes it bassy, yeah.

Thank you Spyder. :)
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Re: Solace - Contemplation

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Sep 15th, '12, 14:13

Wow this was awesome dude, great flow and rhyming, the mixing was awesome and delivery was perfect, One of my favorite tracks in audio stage so far! nice job
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Re: Solace - Contemplation

Postby Solace » Sep 16th, '12, 03:06

Thanks man, I'm real glad you dig this.
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Re: Solace - Contemplation

Postby RainMan44 » Sep 16th, '12, 06:58

You're very fucking talented. I love the fact that I can hear the REAL emotion in your voice, it's not forced...at least that's what it sounds to me. The rhymes are on point, the beat is dope, the sample is dope. One thing I'd suggest is playing around with your flow a bit, it's definitely not a basic flow...but something to capture people every couple bars would be dope. Your voice is cool, everything is straight. Nice job man, keep it up :y:

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Re: Solace - Contemplation

Postby Solace » Sep 18th, '12, 03:56

Thanks man, I'll hit up your song when I get a chance. If I don't in the next few days, PM me. You resolve that issue with your friend taking his equip from you (something like that lol)?
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Re: Solace - Contemplation

Postby RainMan44 » Sep 18th, '12, 04:06

Solace wrote:Thanks man, I'll hit up your song when I get a chance. If I don't in the next few days, PM me. You resolve that issue with your friend taking his equip from you (something like that lol)?

haha, he charged me for using his shit. But no, still don't talk to him. What I actually did was met a dude at the bball courts I ball at, who became my bud dealer..then became my friend..now I use his shit. Lower quality than before, but still better than nothing.
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Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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