Flexin'

[Mr.DGAF]

I liked this dude. The complexity in your verses is always one of your strong points. You're writing in general reminds me a lot of a Kanye type style, which may just be because I know you like him and whatnot, so that picture is always in my head haha. But I felt like the schemes could've been a little better in terms of complexity. I thought you had a nice opening line, really clever and I liked the analogy. The "fiction" scheme left something to be desired though, because it was essentially just that for about four bars. Which isn't bad or anything, I was just thinking some different, more drastice type schemes in the middle would've sounded cool. Something that would separate itself from the main scheme. But I know that crazy rhmyes isn't really your way of going at it, and I respect that. There were definitely some clever lines in here, something you're really good at, especially from past pieces. Good stuff man.

[Eedee]

Basically what DGAF said haha. This was a fun read. I'm still trying to make sure I got all the punches there... the opening line was pretty cool. Had some good rhymes in there as well... Hmm hmm hmm. Interesting.

[Slim Fiasco]

It's that food and liquor flow, haha. I love the complexity, you know that "rappity rap" songs are the dopest thing in the world. Now you're busting my balls because I can't find this shit on RapGenius and my lazy ass needs to read dictionary entries and try to figure shit out. I did that for half the stuff, and shit is lovely, plus I'm excited to analyze lines. Now the other half will wait a little so I may put further feedback in the near future. It's the least I could do.

[Atone]

you twisted words to get em to rhyme at some parts which is cool at times, but some of this made me stumble as i was readin it lol, trippy, but this was nice.

Good wordplay, although

Farther, father, than, and of the son, only in an envelope
Also the father of your son, that means I'm hella dope

i didn't really get this line and wasn't feelin it as much

other than that this was good.

[Slim Fiasco]

Fuck you name, why did you have to blow my mind like that?

Btw, check this - viewtopic.php?f=29&t=149016

[J.R.]

Holy shit. great word play, nice flow. I liked your rhyme schemes. I think you've gotten a lot better man, not saying you were bad, but your always improving and its nice to read something fresh and different.

[Tiersinecrary]

Today we are so busy in facebook, any many other social networks or in the internet. We have not much more time to spend in books however I like to read books. What about you? Do you enjoy reading books..?