babyjane wrote:Did anyone hear Kanye's verse on Rihanna's Diamonds remix? That's how you do a feature.
Amadeo wrote:babyjane wrote:Did anyone hear Kanye's verse on Rihanna's Diamonds remix? That's how you do a feature.
Are you joking? Let me preface the post I'm about to write by saying none of this is necessarily directed at you; it's addressing some general behaviour I've observed on this message board. Anyway, back to the Kanye verse:
We the cause of all commotion
Your mouth running, but where is you going?
What is you smoking, man? That ain't potent
What is you talking, man? That ain't important
Get it? Because there's the phrase "to run one's mouth" and he took it literally. "Potent" doesn't rhyme with "important" unless you force it to, as he does.
On the radio, man I miss myself
I need to just step back and kiss myself
Baby, just step up and kiss the belt
A little lower.. that's what's up
Somebody pour her another cup
Is it too much to ask you keep your diamonds up?
I swear until my time is up
My style is sex in the shower, fresh as fuck
Nobody would let Eminem get away with the last shit punchline at the end.
I like how he rhymes miss with kiss. Cup with up.
And blahblahblahblahblah...the rest of the verse is some of the most generic, boring shit ever. "I get hot women! I have good cars!" Monosyllabic rhyme after monosyllabic rhyme.
Which leads me to the real issue: the same people scrutinizing Eminem's lyrics harshly refuse to examine Kanye West's lyrics with the same level of scrutiny. This is mainly a result of white internet rap fans trying to be hip by showering the black guy with undeserved praise and the white guy with disproportionate amounts of criticism.
It's the only theory that makes sense, if someone as bad as Kanye is actually getting praised for his lyrics.
It's why you get a bunch of contrary losers running around on this forum who wanna be the kewl internet kids so they bash Eminem every chance they get. Yes, Eminem sucks now, but so does the mainstream rapper whose dick you're sucking. Well, more often than not, anyway.
Amadeo wrote:babyjane wrote:Did anyone hear Kanye's verse on Rihanna's Diamonds remix? That's how you do a feature.
Are you joking? Let me preface the post I'm about to write by saying none of this is necessarily directed at you; it's addressing some general behaviour I've observed on this message board. Anyway, back to the Kanye verse:
We the cause of all commotion
Your mouth running, but where is you going?
What is you smoking, man? That ain't potent
What is you talking, man? That ain't important
Get it? Because there's the phrase "to run one's mouth" and he took it literally. "Potent" doesn't rhyme with "important" unless you force it to, as he does.
On the radio, man I miss myself
I need to just step back and kiss myself
Baby, just step up and kiss the belt
A little lower.. that's what's up
Somebody pour her another cup
Is it too much to ask you keep your diamonds up?
I swear until my time is up
My style is sex in the shower, fresh as fuck
Nobody would let Eminem get away with the last shit punchline at the end.
I like how he rhymes miss with kiss. Cup with up.
And blahblahblahblahblah...the rest of the verse is some of the most generic, boring shit ever. "I get hot women! I have good cars!" Monosyllabic rhyme after monosyllabic rhyme.
Which leads me to the real issue: the same people scrutinizing Eminem's lyrics harshly refuse to examine Kanye West's lyrics with the same level of scrutiny. This is mainly a result of white internet rap fans trying to be hip by showering the black guy with undeserved praise and the white guy with disproportionate amounts of criticism.
It's the only theory that makes sense, if someone as bad as Kanye is actually getting praised for his lyrics.
It's why you get a bunch of contrary losers running around on this forum who wanna be the kewl internet kids so they bash Eminem every chance they get. Yes, Eminem sucks now, but so does the mainstream rapper whose dick you're sucking. Well, more often than not, anyway.
cheeseburger wrote:I know this. However I hate it when comparissons come to the surface, people tend to put more into mind when they put Ems lyrics under the magnifing glass. But when they start to look at someone like Kanyes work its all suddenly so easy to write something godly.
Made up Kanye lyrics that would be considered godly:
Why you so sleasy, Yeesy?
Why outside it be so breezy, Weezy?
Just a random lyric by Eminem that problably is considered complete shit by some of you:
You better hope you can handle the heat
or stay the fuck outta hell's kitchen
I came to cock block like a square fuckin male chicken
Took a line from Despicable freestyle cause i just listened to it.
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