Eedee ft. Geno - "My Last Song" [Single]

[Eedee]

MIXED BY MAT DEMAZ

Eedee ft. Geno - "My Last Song"
LoF

*Produced by Sinima Beats
*First single from my new mixtape, Phoenix, coming early 2013.
*Features Geno in his debut audio track! Thanks for hopping on this, buddy. You did great.

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[Intro - Eedee]
I don't know if you've heard, but the world is ending today...
Everything you love, know...
Everything you cherish is gone.
There's nowhere to go.
Everything's about to perish.

[Verse 1: Geno]
I'm a silhouette in the dust...
Comin' out the smoke fast, with a notepad...
I ain't gonna willow yet, never budge..
Thought this was a hoax man, now it's so bad, I ain't gonna hold back,
Got this whole planet on my hands, now I'm stuck too..
To my fans, understand that I love you..
To my best friend, penning's our investment,
Many steady writtens buildin' ego in our headset,
But take a look around, I don't know if we'll get out,
All this fire inside of me, someone put it out,
Now I'm gettin' weak, mumblin' in severed speech,
But it's music to my ears, it's a second beat,
The first one is gettin' dimmer at a wide pace,
I pulsate, my heart fails and I faint,
This is it, I'm fin-ished - I pass on,
I apologize, this-is my last song.

[Chorus: Eedee]
I look around and the world is gone,
I stand up and then I twirl my arms.
Before all this, kids swirled in awe,
I put a finger to my lips 'cuz the girl's alarmed...
This is my last song...
This is my last song...
This is my last song...
The world is gone...

[Verse 2: Eedee]
My big plans have dissolved away...
Everything I love will be gone today.
Nobody liked this man, I can stand
This desolation no longer, I tried with hands
in prayer, but where is your God now?
The world is dead, FUCK, I need to calm down.
I drift the tattered streets, hands in pockets,
This is the last time man will walk it.
I wonder if it knows the disaster near,
A chill breeze blows and it captures fear.
Will we go to a different place?
When we die in the ground until the space
that separates the brain from the hurtful dreams
Will bleed with the screams till the Earth will see
That our home is gone, and the smoulder song,
It really doesn't matter what is cold or hot...

[Verse 3: Eedee]
I don't know where to go from here
I'm used to ice but the coldest year has dawned upon us
and spawned an honest man of myself now we fall to start it.
A new era rises from the ashes old
a kid with a pen and his tattered clothes.
The world is dead, now a savage home
Is where the resides but his rapping grows.

[TripleNineThree]

Hey man you already know what I think of your style and everything - The concept for this song was really good IMO. I loved the imagery in the verses and I enjoyed the hook. The hook was simple but it worked for this song. The only thing that was lacking imo was the quality of Geno's verse. Geno, you just started doing audio didn't you? If so, you have a MUCH better flow and delivery than most people when they first start audio. I can tell that you're quality is quite a big step down from Eedee but he's also been doing audio for quite awhile. I understand that reverb is good on this track but I feel that Geno's verse has too much reverb. The quality of his mic makes the reverb sound bad, I think if it was lowered than his verse would have a higher quality sound.

Keep it up guys!

[Blu]

I...don't like it.

The intro was nice, but everything after that was "eh..."

The deepening voice effect was unnecessary and it doesn't fit on a track like this. The hook wasn't executed nicely either, it seemed like you were holding back a bit. It seemed like you wanted to shout, but you didn't.

The beat isn't bad, I mainly have a problem with the verses. They weren't impacting enough on a topic like this. You didn't make me go, "Damn...today's really my last day here" (even though it's obviously not lol), but you know what I mean.

[Atone]

would be cool if this had a DL link

[Eedee]

I'll get a download link up soon, Atone.

[mdemaz]

I love how you put like, mixed by Mat Demaz, like in your face, bitch!

I had a really hard time mixing the verses because there was not much to work with and Eedee is a retard and doesn't sync his vocals with the beat in his DAW before he sends me 'pellas so I have to manually line the vocals up with the beat.

Also, Geno's vocals didn't line up with the beat at all at first like, when I put the whole 'pella with the beat and line it up, his voice goes off-beat.

Whatever he was recording with keep fucking out so I had to slice the shit outta it.
Plus, Eedee telling me to hurry up and drop this didn't really help.
As soon as I dropped it I noticed heaps of imperfections.

I'll probably remix this later.

The reverb' is the same output for the entire song so it couldn't of changed in intensity, but the vocals did.

Now for some fair critique; not a huge fan of Geno's verse, but, the lyrics are there and you can't walk past it.

Eedee didn't really have the right tone in his voice most of the time and I didn't really feel the despair one would feel when the earth is about to blow up.

In my honest opinion, for what it is, it's ok, but it's far from professional.

Even though I used the same methods I used when I remixed Lights Out tracks, I couldn't get a good sound out of the vocals; which was highly frustrating.

Not too happy with this track, but it's a great concept.

Possibly a perfect blueprint for a debut studio release.

[Eedee]

Yeah, there's some DAW problems when I export my acapella and when he imports to his... I dunno why but the vocals mismatch the slightest so it's off beat, but it's easily fixable if you just slide them over like you did.

Thanks for calling me a retard, btw. I really appreciate it.

I think you mixed this just fine, I love how it sounds; you had 5 days to mix. I didn't tell you to rush it at all... It just needed to be out on the 21st, to fit the song concept. And this was sitting alone since the 18th so you had time to go back and fix the imperfections you seem to notice when you were done. Notice I uploaded this the 18... you had more than enough time to fix what you wanted, so don't complain, if we're being honest.

With all that said, thank you for mixing this and my upcoming mixtape, it sounds fucking brilliant, you're doing a great job.

[Solace]

Good job Geno. Much better than I expected from a first time drop. Should edit in the descrip

"Many steady writtens building Ego's in our headset"

instead of

"Went from Two Faced to an Ego in our headset"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qr87EpvNpLc

Holy shit, this is how you look like. Dope beard.

[PAINKILLƎR]

^those comments on the studio update >>>

[Eedee]

Good job Geno. Much better than I expected from a first time drop. Should edit in the descrip

"Many steady writtens building Ego's in our headset"

instead of

"Went from Two Faced to an Ego in our headset"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qr87EpvNpLc

Holy shit, this is how you look like. Dope beard.

Ight, I'll fix it. Geno sent me wrong lyrics, like a tool.

And yeah, the beard keeps me warm in the winter.

[Eedee]

I swear I edited those lyrics the second I checked the thread lol. Thanks for the feed.

We have another song too on the tape. I actually like it better than this.

Yeah. This one just set the tone for the mixtape and whatnot. A good stepping stone.

I like the second one better too.

[mdemaz]

It's more than the 'pella being mismatched, like, I have to slice them up too because just like Geno's verse if you just put the whole 'pella block in your voice goes off beat, Eedee.

I think your software might have some sorta weird delay thing speeding the vocals up and down somehow.

Anyways fuck it.

I'm pumped to mix the rest of the tape because these songs I'm working on actually sound fucking epic.

I was only joking about the retard thing and oh, I pretty much didn't work on the song for like 3 days, lmao.

I'm a lazy cunt.

[Eedee]

I'm also too lazy to put Reaper onto my laptop, which I record with. It's slow as fuck anyway with just Audacity (which is good enough for recording audio if I'm not mixing it...) but it does seem to fuck with the timing. Shit fuck cunt face damn it... Meh.

And yeah, I appreciate you mixing, dude. It'll turn out great.

[mdemaz]

Audacity is a joke.

I stopped using that in 2006.

[Eedee]

I know, which is why I'm not using it anymore for mixing vocals; only for recording because I'm used to it and it's easy for me to just record/export.