Addicted - Steve Swisher ft. TripleNineThree

[TripleNineThree]

Hi everyone, this is a feature that I did for a local artist. He is on the hook and the first verse, I am on the second verse. I personally feel this is the best verse I've ever done, let me know what you guys think!

Oh and Steve also produced the instrumental.

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=152645
Song - http://youtu.be/RuCAiz59Exg

[The lyrics are in the video]


*Drop a link and I'll be sure to return the feed, thanks!

[Eedee]

Might as well feed this again, yo. I've listened to your tape (and this song) more now so I have a clear opinion on the songs.

Beat: This beat is awesome. I love how it starts and then when the hard kicks in come near the middle of the chorus is spine-tingling. Love it.

Hook: Less auto-tune would've been nice. But it sounds good regardless, I can tell he can sing at least, but I want to know what he sounds like without it, ya know? Addicting chorus.

First Verse: Steve had a nice flow going on. Simple rhyming but he got his message across. I did see a few multis here and there but not at a consistent pace. Delivery was sick too.

Your Verse: You had one of the sickest flows I've ever heard from you here. The way you rode the beat was pretty dang impressive. When it cut out around the part where you say:

Because of the fact that Jehovah knows me,
I'm addicted to bringing him glory

The way you rode the snares on every word on that part... I leaned back in my chair and appreciated that. Haha. Good stuff, dude.

Great song off a great tape, sad that people slept hard on the Game Over Mixtape. Probably because you're a Christian rapper, but that didn't stop a hardcore atheist like myself from enjoying the sound and appreciating good rapping when I hear it.

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man I appreciate the good looks! As for the mixtape, it did get slept hard online but it was pretty successful in my local area so I'm happy about that. I'm glad a "hardcore atheist" is able to enjoy my music haha

[Eedee]

Thanks man I appreciate the good looks! As for the mixtape, it did get slept hard online but it was pretty successful in my local area so I'm happy about that. I'm glad a "hardcore atheist" is able to enjoy my music haha

Well, just goes to show how music can brings different spectrums together.

[Eedee]

Why the hell are people sleeping on this?

What did you ever do to make people ignore you, Triple?

[TripleNineThree]

No idea lol

[Eedee]

No idea lol

We should riot.

[Dlovetv]

Nice energetic song, with a dark topic, I can hear this on the radio on z100 in the NY area because of the hook.

the autotune wasn't over done so I think it fit nicely. Like the lyrics, nice positive message, different from what we're used to hearing.

Not much to complain about here

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man!

[Willy]

You know how to rap dude, but I can't get into the subject matter at all. I think if you toned down the Jesus your music would be a lot more accessible, and you can still have a positive message without the perhaps unnecessary alienation.. but that's just my .02 , do whatever you see fit and best of luck to ya!

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man I appreciate the feedback! To be honest, I don't do music to get known or be successful. I do it so that people will come to know Jesus so I will keep Jesus front and center

[willymuff2]

i dont think i believe in god which is stopping me going to rehab... but this song is dope, the flow on the second verse is breathtaking, its really catchy it sums up how i feel about addicition good work!

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man I'm glad you enjoyed it! I've also struggled with addiction. If you want to talk about God or even just life in general, feel free to PM me

[Eedee]

Thanks man I'm glad you enjoyed it! I've also struggled with addiction. If you want to talk about God or even just life in general, feel free to PM me

Hey Triple. I just want you to know:

You'll win.

[TripleNineThree]

Eedee, you're such a scrub lol