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Re: Desperadoes - Celebrity

Postby Eedee » Jan 17th, '13, 05:23

This was funny and had nice rhyming. Felt like Slim Shady referencing so many peeps.

Pain, your rhyming caught me off guard. That was pretty cool!
CP, you rhyme better on these types of tracks but I feel as if I like you more on introspective shit. I dunno...

Cool shit, Desperadoes.
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Re: Desperadoes - Celebrity

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 17th, '13, 05:30

My rhyming has always been tight, whatchu talkin' bout? Thanks anyway for the feed bru
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Re: Desperadoes - Celebrity

Postby Eedee » Jan 17th, '13, 05:31

More than usual, then. :angry:
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Re: Desperadoes - Celebrity

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 17th, '13, 05:32

Eedee wrote:CP, you rhyme better on these types of tracks but I feel as if I like you more on introspective shit. I dunno...


I like doing introspective stuff better too, but you know how when you do one thing too much you start to get bored and you need a break from it? This was just some messing around stuff to take a break from that, and it was a lot of fun to do.
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Re: Desperadoes - Celebrity

Postby Eedee » Jan 17th, '13, 05:36

CanadaPure wrote:
Eedee wrote:CP, you rhyme better on these types of tracks but I feel as if I like you more on introspective shit. I dunno...


I like doing introspective stuff better too, but you know how when you do one thing too much you start to get bored and you need a break from it? This was just some messing around stuff to take a break from that, and it was a lot of fun to do.


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Re: Desperadoes - Celebrity

Postby ImANoob » Jan 17th, '13, 05:41

the desperadoes should do a track over this beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4alHlwkHFU
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Re: Desperadoes - Celebrity

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 17th, '13, 05:42

So who ethered who :shifty:

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Re: Desperadoes - Celebrity

Postby ImANoob » Jan 17th, '13, 05:50

the jenny craig/ plenty eggs part reminded me of eminem. dont be a dick rider. CP wins :shifty:
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Re: Desperadoes - Celebrity

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 17th, '13, 05:51

Inb4 pain quits rap again.
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Re: Desperadoes - Celebrity

Postby Eedee » Jan 17th, '13, 05:53

Inb4 I BUTTFUCK ALL OF YOU FOR BEING SO ANAL ABOUT GIVING ANAL TO CHIMPANZEES. JESUS CHRIST JUST DO IT.

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