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Desperadoes - Apocalypse

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Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 29th, '13, 23:22

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This is my joy I planned to assume the place of many
Eager to destroy the planet if the human race is ready
Royalty dies, titanic sinking of the regal throne
New deities with a santanic link to the people though
There's spirits in here now owning half of the house
You'd fear it if they had rabies foaming up at the mouth
Consuming eight hearts, feeding so now we're performing
Assuming they start bleeding and die so bow before me
Collect up your men and warn Jesus, I am coming down
And when I sprout horns, believe his life is running out
People are crying asking where is their faceless god
Steeples collapsing, they're dying in their wasted thoughts
Standing over bodies plotting and inhaling the rotting
Flesh then it gets naughty, I'm impaling and flogging
The living and a new race is born, an alien-like sinister
priminister, take a hit of herb, murder five villagers


[Chorus] x2
Better pray to your god, get on your knee's (on your knee's)
It's not that we're evil, we just have our needs (have our needs)
So at least (so at least) you'll go at peace (go at peace)
Life released (life released), we are at ease (are at ease)


I'm the root of all evil, a no face demon
Consumed by darkness no one can free them
No one to help the screams and aid the flood
Screams of torture in the land of raining blood
Sacrificing but not to higher forces I'm the ruler
Dead arising with walking corpses, nothing crueler
That span I messed with the power and possessed it
This world I ruled with the evil I've manifested
Taking your life then your soul and ingest it
This throne forever mine until I'm tested
Wont be bested by a demon highly oppressive
I'm feeling aggressive, just might be obsessive
Standing in the ruins I once claimed in my name
And in vain when all of earth knew who became
In power an alienated savage taking my place
But my army ready to wreak havoc pace by pace


[Chorus] x2

I will obtain my throne, I suddenly sense a disturbance
An emmergance of an unknown, felt within hell's furnace
A ressurgance of resistance which stands in the distance
The sound of a thousand pistons comes into existence

Shrouded the vicinity with pestilence ready for war
Confronted the enemy this residence his no more

"I could leave right now and you'd never see me again,
I don't wish to fight you, we'd be better thieving as friends"

"This world is mine, and you come here to tell me you want to share it?
You must be joking, what more can I gain? all this on my own I can bare with"

"We could reap more fortune to adorn if we force in
Two more forces and ride in like the four horsemen"

Pondered the thought of a team with the damage as cataclysmic
I've never met anyone as maniacal, egotistic, as radical, this sick

We thought It's be best if we both collected a single fiend each
I brought a T-Rex, and he brought some crazy seed named Eedee


[Chorus] x2
Last edited by CanadaPure on Jan 29th, '13, 23:38, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 29th, '13, 23:25

We need to find Pains missing two bars, lol

Edit: Thanks Pain for re-sending them to me, I forgot to copy them into my notepad file when I was doing the rest.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 29th, '13, 23:42

This was dope :flutter:

One half of the Desperadoes regime
One quarter of the Sanatorium machine
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby Eedee » Jan 30th, '13, 02:11

Man fak u for PMing me this right now. I gotta go eat and then go hit the gym for my basketball game. GOD DAMN IT.

I'll feed this when I get home, boy(z).

Pain, drop our one song, damn it.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 03:15

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I brought a T-Rex, and he brought some crazy seed named Eedee
Eedee wrote:Man fak u for PMing me this right now. I gotta go eat and then go hit the gym for my basketball game. GOD DAMN IT.

I'll feed this when I get home, boy(z).

Pain, drop our one song, damn it.

Honestly the song we are doing is the hardest thing I've ever written, I don't know what to say at times and every time I do have something, I read it, then read your verse and feel like shit because my writing is simplistic as shit.

:(

Believe me I work on it everyday, but little success.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 30th, '13, 04:50

PAINKILLƎR wrote:Image


TRex does let me be on top sometimes. it checks out.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 04:59

And it's a cowboy on it too, I'm trying to do a Sanatorium logo or cover art. I'm probably going to draw myself as a bandit/cowboy wild west type shit... I don't know about Eedee though.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 30th, '13, 05:02

PAINKILLƎR wrote:And it's a cowboy on it too, I'm trying to do a Sanatorium logo or cover art. I'm probably going to draw myself as a bandit/cowboy wild west type shit... I don't know about Eedee though.


Draw him as a giant penis in a top-hat.

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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 05:05

CanadaPure wrote:
PAINKILLƎR wrote:And it's a cowboy on it too, I'm trying to do a Sanatorium logo or cover art. I'm probably going to draw myself as a bandit/cowboy wild west type shit... I don't know about Eedee though.


Draw him as a giant penis in a top-hat.

Trust me

A giant dick as in our super group? Sounds dope. Don't know if Eedee would approve tho...

Where the fuck is our feedback? This song is significantly important. :angry:
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 30th, '13, 05:08

Id PM Trex to come in here but im busy eating some pizza
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 05:10

I'll PM him... and I'm eating McDonalds, no big deal :crossed:
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 30th, '13, 05:12

Pizza>>>>>McD
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 05:16

True, but you're missing the point.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 30th, '13, 05:38

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This is me and CP? Perfect.

I've seen CP's first verse and helped him with the last 4 bars so he knows what I think about it...although he didn't use any of the shit that I freestyled for him. He gets the tazer in the anus tonight.

Pain...bro, that and possessed it/manifested rhyme got me horny for some reason, I loved that. Flow was a little hard to catch in some spots, although I read it acapella so that could be a reason why.

The back and forth you two do is amazing, it's seamless. I have no complaints with it, the vocabulary you two used was pretty nice. I think one thing that could have been done would have been Pain saying the very last bit...so it would be

I brought a T-Rex, and I brought a crazy seed named Eedee

I dunno. Great job guys, you two made me feel good about myself :y:


D'oh! That would have been a beautiful last line. Thank you T-Rex I love you.
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Re: Desperadoes - Apocalypse

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 30th, '13, 05:40

Yes you're the TRex and CP is the Desperado riding you, I agree about the last line, and thanks for the feed :wub:
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