MarshalBlaze wrote:as if i could expect to hear a valid opinion about music ( anything other than eminem) from a bunch of stans lol .. noty
the real slim shady wrote:MarshalBlaze wrote:as if i could expect to hear a valid opinion about music ( anything other than eminem) from a bunch of stans lol .. noty
Did you fucking listen to it? The beat doesnt match the lyrics. Its a good idea but the way its done it doesnt work
MarshalBlaze wrote:the real slim shady wrote:MarshalBlaze wrote:as if i could expect to hear a valid opinion about music ( anything other than eminem) from a bunch of stans lol .. noty
Did you fucking listen to it? The beat doesnt match the lyrics. Its a good idea but the way its done it doesnt work
I didn't LISTEN to it.. I MADE IT
Did you fucking analyse it? the bpm's match i made sure of that the tempo is identical, the snares are similar... I think i know my shit better than you so kthx lol, it's fine if people don't like it, everyone is entitled to an opinion but don't go on telling me that it's offbeat or some shit i quadruple checked every song on that EP along with like 5 other people who do audio editing and mixing and mastering,so.. bitch.. PLEASE
MarshalBlaze wrote:I appreciate feedback at all times, especially negative feedback
MarshalBlaze wrote:as if i could expect to hear a valid opinion about music ( anything other than eminem) from a bunch of stans lol .. noty
MarshalBlaze wrote: but all you did was find reason to slam something you didn't like hearing for all the wrong reasons, you could go on about how this song doesn't make sense or their styles don't match but don't go for something you know nothing about please..
MarshalBlaze wrote: you could go on about how this song doesn't make sense or their styles don't match
MarshalBlaze wrote:but don't go for something you know nothing about please..
InsaneTRex94 wrote:Actually no, I don't have very many friends, and my parents would rather I was dead, they've attempted to murder me four times over my winter break. The first attempt was when I first got in, they thought the perfect idea would be to blind me by spraying pepperspray then stabbing me. They were able to tag me with the pepperspray, but when I heard them pick up the knife (cutlery always makes a distict sound when it's picked up off the counter), I started flailing my limbs. I hit my father in the nuts and my mother fell back trying not to get hit. Then I got up and ran blindly out of the house, running and running until I reached my old high school, which is about 0.8 miles away from my house. Once I got there, the police officers guarding the building sent me away, so I had no choice but to go back home. My parents told me "Don't worry, we won't try it again tonight" after I was able to outsmart them.
The second time, they snuck up on me when I was sleeping. Ordinarily, I'm not one to fall asleep very easily, but when it happens, I'm a very deep sleeper. They had a meat cleaver and plastic wrap. However, as they were about to hack my stomach open, I turned, so I only got a bad gash in my left rib and my spine. I woke up and chased them out, whacking them with my hardcover copy of Harry Potter And The Order Of The Phoenix. Unfortunately, the book was torn up, and I was rushed to the ER, but I was able to live another day.
The third time was a little more sophisticated. As I was sitting to eat my dinner, they tried to slip me some roofies and dump me out on the side in a garbage can so someone would hit me and I would die. They slipped it in my Coca-Cola. Just before I was about to drink it, I decided that I wanted root beer instead, so I gave my brother the Coca-Cola and poured myself root beer. My brother passed out instead, so my parents were too busy caring for him to kill me that night. He saved my life, inadvertently.
The fourth time was when I was leaving. My parents were so furious that I was still alive. My dad decided to sacrifice his own well being so that my mother could live a wonderous life without me. He was driving me back to my University, and saw the perfect opportunity to run into a police car that was investigating a fender bender that had happened. When I noticed what he was trying to do, I grabbed my ID card and began to scratch him with it, until he instead flipped to the side of the road. I then grabbed my shit and ran for it to college. He was unconscious, but I think he's back at home now, most likely plotting my demise for any future visits.
Now, as for my friends, they've done all they can to get rid of me. But I'm like a leech, once you let me on, I'm never coming off. Three of my former friends have committed suicide to get away from me. Two others have become male prostitutes and have changed their government names so that I cannot track them down. I have four remaining, one of which has hope for me to become a normal boy, one of which is praying to Jesus or Allah or whoever to fix me, one who resents me and has not found away to get rid of me, and one who uses me to make herself look like a better human being.
I actually also hate myself. You can ask anyone on this forum. I've attempted to commit suicide 15 times by now. None of them have worked. I'm literally a failure at everything that I do and say.
I'm not going to grow up and have a wife and children. I'm not going to have a good paying job. I'm probably gonna end up living in an apartment with a whatever-paying job and a Rottweiler. I will die a lonely man who's dog attempted to bite his ballsack off because he tried spending time at a therapist and made the dog jealous.
Speaking of a therapist, I've had three psychiatrists who have all blamed me in their resignition letters, and one who blamed me and only me in the suicide note.
You sir, are an insensitive fucking fuck. You don't know how a person is feeling when you use language like that. Never speak to me again, or I will be forced to tell an admin about the psychological damage and scarring that you are causing to me. You don't know for how long I cried after you wrote what you wrote. Never speak to me again. Not even if you want to try to make things better between us, because I know for a fact that you'll only be doing that to make yourself look like a better human being who didn't drive a suicidal, homocidal pedophile to his early demise, and just left him alone and let him commit suicide at his own pace.
Asshole.
InsaneTRex94 wrote:I'll be back to put you in your place, fuckface (yes, I'm only doing this so this useless topic is locked).
InsaneTRex94 wrote:MarshalBlaze wrote:InsaneTRex94 wrote:I'll be back to put you in your place, fuckface (yes, I'm only doing this so this useless topic is locked).
lol like i care, i didn't start this topic lol, i never forced anybody to listen to my mixtape/ep you fucking tard..
Okay, no jokes now, you are unbelievably sensitive! Why, is it because you're insecure about yourself or something?
the real slim shady wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0RV5dY-es64&list=PLxawRnt5unIDilGf2_6PVZHxRvUOsglyh
This one works well, the beat isnt changing and distracting from the lyrics too much and it all flows a bit better. The intro is a bit long for my liking but this one i likethe ones posted in the thread earlier though not too keen on. Its like watching a movie on a tv that is moving, there is just too much going on to enjoy them. Thats why i prefer the beats that rappers normally use, therye good but dont take over the song. Listening through your stuff i would say that about half of the songs are very good (the Cocaine one is probably best) but there are some that i dont think fit together, despite the tempo being the same etc the beats are too lively for the track.
Hope that is constructive enough for you.
MarshalBlaze wrote:I might be sensitive when people bash my work for all the wrong reasons, i appreciate feedback when they actually can back their opinion up with some knowledge they have of this particular subject ..i don't think you would know that, since you don't spend a month or two making projects like these.. i have for a very long time now and i can't stand people slamming my work when they don't know what they're talking about.. i'm not gonna go on about how much effort and time i put into my work or anything but i actually do .. There's some people who like my work and some who hate it, i can live with that .. but i get irritated when they go on saying shit like 'this ep makes me want to punch a baby in the dick' and 'this sounds like total shit and it doesn't go together' and similar pointless slander..
like bitch please.. you spend your time on a forum talking a whole lot of shit and never do anything productive what would you even know about creativity and what a good mix would sound like lol
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