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TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby CanadaPure » Feb 7th, '13, 21:08

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LoF:
Trex viewtopic.php?f=24&t=153723&p=2109508#p2109508
CanadaPure viewtopic.php?f=24&t=153831#p2109595
Geno: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=153716
Due to the large quantity of users in this cypher, Spyder said I could just post the ones I had an not worry about the rest right now. So I have TRex's and mine only posted. :y:

Beat: http://www.hulkshare.com/eu0amydh4utc
(Thanks for setting that up for all these people Trex)

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On the raps you have today's present, past, and future
Every single abused-sad-adolescent mad at tutors
Had troubleshooters give diagnostics on all of us
Said just another group of biologic bombs faulted up
Appalled at sluts because most of us are losers, fuck
Joking, we're all drug users with a sharp shooters luck
So if you get stuck between us or a quick speeding bus
I don't mean to cuss, but gosh darn it we'll beat ya' up
Shucks, I wonder why my hands are hairy and hard to hide
And I'm blind, I've crashed every chariot and car I drive
Sigh, I can't justify it I'm just a guy with a sharper knife,
No harder strife but how come when I cum I start to cry?
An antagonist with abandonment issues in my battle tent
And it shouldn't take a graduate to know how bad it went
I'm flatulent and I just pissed blood dude pass the Kleenex
Who comes after me next? Screw it, you can ask the T-Rex



[TREX]
SHUT THE FUCK UP! Why can't you assholes leave me alone?
If you're not Death then stop talking, don't creep in my home
It's no secret at all that I'd give the Grim Reaper my soul
And leave, since I was a kid, hatred's seeped to my bones
In kindergarten I was sent to the corner and fed Benadryl
My skin was chilled and pale, I was caught stickin' chil-dren
With pins I'd steal from my mother 'cause they went and spilled
The change out of my fucking piggy bank when the shit was filled
Since then I've built up the rage inside of me
Internal pain is botherin' me, I've always got rape and sodomy
On my mind, I try to keep to myself but often times
I'll feel like I've lost my mind, my brain is achin', stop it, PLEASE!
I've got to sleep! Fuck, I've tried beating off, my cock is bleedin'
Obviously then I need a new tactic, judging by all the semen
I've ejaculated, every sperm cell that was in my 'nads
Evacuated, I'll have no kids? Fuck it then I'll ask for Satan *gun shot*


[Bigray]
I’m a crook, I grew up where you were scared and shook
I took that Tony powder laced it, call me the head cook
Packed it to crack heads who look like that Wop Snook
This rap games made for me, you just learned your A B C’s
You listen to too much of that fiction rap, Young Money, crappy MC’s!
Call me a Boss, I’m like that real hustla Ricky Ross!
I’m the king of this cypher, is it you? Imma knife her
Sir? See me I’m hyper, I need me some pure liqueur
But I prefer a big fat reefer, shit those goes my beeper
Ur my pawn, my little bitch get on ur knees and suck my dick
He’s just confused with his emotions
That's why he’s throwing tantrums with commotions
Wants you just to notice he’s as crazy as his motions
So now he’s using a voice that you'll notice
Shakin' all atrocious lost all his focus talkin' all Ferocious
Tadpole over here we call that multiple sclerosis


[Tadpole]
TR '13, nice beat from CP, maybe I ain't the best
Just best at being me, maybe this is a test just to evidently see
An outlet of my aggression, when as stressed as can be
Maybe I don't need 10 multi's in my lines
Maybe message matters, maybe rap fans are blind
Maybe I'm not crude and vulgar all the time
maybe I'm just kiddin' when submittin' the rhymes
Maybe I love y'all, and just sayin' y'all wack
so y'all can show me love back and flub me the track
I take y'all diss as endearment , I love em when i hear it
Maybe words offensive, free speech i don't fear it
Maybe music can take us to a place so atmospheric
Beyond our greatest imagination, illuminatin' experience
If we open our ears and close our inhibitions it's clear
It's not about race or neighborhood, our growin' place
maybe its about the inner struggles we face


[PainKiller]
The underrated, and unappreciated
One who's degraded, the one affiliated
With poor rhyming and there's no silver lining
The timing poured going to waste like a liver dying
Dismiss my work and all the effort I put forth
On every line and rhyme, every single foot worth
I take this serious, but no one takes me likely
Don't understand my genius, all this rapes my mind see
I do what I can when I write my best and make hits
When I make this I do it for me not you fake tricks
See all the hate just don't mix have a breather then take six
Then come back and fix it, read it over again rerate this
I have more to gain to keep me sane in spite the pain
I keep my lane, the strength I retain to ignite the flame
To take my creative pen and shove up your damn highly critical asses
So show respect and appreciate these more than widely lyrical assets



[DGAF]
So much for burning this bridge -- I've extinguished the path
But I've learned to forgive, I always think it's the last
Until you bring in a pad, and suddenly it's my fault
Figured we would see past the other things I've strived for
Even though we tried hard the time falls again
In five bars I summa-rized our intent
Content with being glad if I didn't see you laugh
And then the ceiling crashed, too proud to piece it back
You found a decent match, who am I to compete?
The clouds release a path you and I couldn't see
We shouldn't be a figure though, our relationships strained
Yet a year ago we'd brag how it made us feel great
Or at least I did, you probably never noticed though
I'm open enough to know its just a broken hole
Everything I wrote's a joke, but the punch line's that
Between writing and women, shit, ima run right back


[Eedee]
A long time ago there was a man in his seat
Overlooking progress, he was managing me.
I was skinned to the bone like some cannibal meat,
But somehow I'm able still to stand on my feet.
The table will break if the dancin' is free,
I promised me a diet but I flatten the deed.
My forest of hope's gone, savagin' trees
So long to the wrong road, hand me the keys.
I'm just a normal guy that you stab and I bleed,
This life I seem to live I never had in my dreams.
I'm learning to ride on, I land with a scream
I'm wrong to think the help will come; bandage my knees.
My breath's still numb, I'm havin' a leave,
From the distraction we call life and the cancer in me
Seems to damage the weak, now I'm travellin' seas
And my problems outnumber all the sand on a beach.


[Spyder]
Starvin for a target, swarm with my sharpened sword
Your taken Past-L when I paint the ‘Art of War.’
More than L.A. give em ‘24 bullets’ like I told em
Before I met-a-world-peace I give em what I ‘owed-em’. (odom)
I’m a Boss with the style you bit your signature from
On my ‘depression’… so all my employees gettin Cut.
Treason’s what y’all committin, bout to see it my way
Everyone bout to see how my group’ll leave you “sideways.”


I flow hard, and I go like its no holds barred
A grown shark, ready to unleash his teeth, to ya whole arm.
I blow, you get the sudden urge to split your own heart
Then I give you a stitch, switch and re-rip both parts.
And when I do go, I’ll still be so hard
You’ll attend a show of my ghost spar with Mozart.
Throw so accurate like blown darts when I grow charge
You gonna need sonar to even retrieve the bone shards.



[Geno]
I'm emotionless, overdosed on lonliness,
The only lonely kid you know who's holdin' no regrets,
See I cope with stress by posin' like I don't regress,
But wake up in the morning solely hopin' that my soul has left,
Now how you feel about a man tryna kill himself?
He's losing footing so he hands in his bill of health,
The shit he's dealt wasn't planned, it don't fit him well,
So chances of gettin' out are cramped if you couldn't tell,
We've made it to the breakin' point where he's mad at life,
It makes him sad at night, thinkin' 'bout what's passed him by,
He tells himself "Yeah, a girl would be rather nice..."
He was a passive guy until he went and grabbed the knife,
He went out and found the first chick within his sights,
She was hesitant but never did get with the guy,
So he cut her up the stomach - let her bleed to death,
It's nice to be respected, you might be a demon next.
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby Just Silver » Feb 7th, '13, 21:16

can u make it more ? is it an audio liked tadpoles oddly enough lol
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby CanadaPure » Feb 7th, '13, 21:17

Just Silver wrote:can u make it more ? is it an audio liked tadpoles oddly enough lol


Wat? :laughing:
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby Just Silver » Feb 7th, '13, 21:23

CanadaPure wrote:
Just Silver wrote:can u make it more ? is it an audio liked tadpoles oddly enough lol


Wat? :laughing:

ehh whatever :smoking:...dick
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby CanadaPure » Feb 7th, '13, 22:46

Just Silver wrote:
CanadaPure wrote:
Just Silver wrote:can u make it more ? is it an audio liked tadpoles oddly enough lol


Wat? :laughing:

ehh whatever :smoking:...dick


What are you trying to say? :laughing:
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Feb 7th, '13, 22:51

I'll feed you all later, looks great tbh
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby Sam. » Feb 7th, '13, 23:03

Read the 1st 5 verses. CP and Trex nailed it, so many humorous lines! Good shit by you guys. bigray needs to work on his flow. Pain: Not bad, dude. But the rhyming was pretty basic.

Will feed rest later.
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby Mr.DGAF » Feb 7th, '13, 23:05

Sam. wrote:Read the 1st 5 verses. CP and Trex nailed it, so many humorous lines! Good shit by you guys. bigray needs to work on his flow. Pain: Not bad, dude. But the rhyming was pretty basic.

Will feed rest later.


Haha don't expect humor from my verse. For the rest, I'll feed you guys later tonight.
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby Sam. » Feb 7th, '13, 23:09

Feed now, not later, matherfuckers.
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby Sam. » Feb 7th, '13, 23:29

Because I've to board a van to go somewhere, peace.
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby tadpole25 » Feb 7th, '13, 23:31

Here is me doing my Cypher on audio over the beat
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0VYQrMVjCGs
Last edited by tadpole25 on Feb 7th, '13, 23:35, edited 2 times in total.
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Maybe words offensive - free speech I don't fear it
Maybe music can take us to a place so atmospheric
Beyond our greatest imagination, illuminatin' experience
If we open our ears and close our inhibitions, it's clear"
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby CanadaPure » Feb 7th, '13, 23:33

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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby tadpole25 » Feb 7th, '13, 23:34

Thanks, Stan
"I take yall diss as endearment - I love it when I hear it
Maybe words offensive - free speech I don't fear it
Maybe music can take us to a place so atmospheric
Beyond our greatest imagination, illuminatin' experience
If we open our ears and close our inhibitions, it's clear"
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby tadpole25 » Feb 7th, '13, 23:42

Oh, and everyone did a good job. Spyder's verse is my favorite.
"I take yall diss as endearment - I love it when I hear it
Maybe words offensive - free speech I don't fear it
Maybe music can take us to a place so atmospheric
Beyond our greatest imagination, illuminatin' experience
If we open our ears and close our inhibitions, it's clear"
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Re: TR Cypher Version 2.0 [9 People]

Postby Blu » Feb 8th, '13, 00:37

What does "flub me the track" mean?
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