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Rollinnn

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 22nd, '13, 22:29

Beat: Vybe Beatz- Rollinnn

Fuck it roll a couple up, call that shit a double dutch
Thinkin you can spit with me, man what the fuck is up
This is where trouble come so you better double up
I got it in the bag, its already duffled up
You gon be the first down, get ya team huddled up
You know that I rep my shit, I throw it up like bubble guts
You don’t wanna fuck with us, I suggest you shut it up
I got a good buzz, please don’t go and fuck it up
Im smoking on a loud pack, come and get a loud sack
Getting so high, Im sittin where the clouds at
Real recognize real, what you know about that
The truth in the booth, what you know about facts
I know all about that, shit cuz Im livin it
No it aint ingnorance, just don’t know what limits is
Don’t know what timid is, don’t know what quittin is
Basically Im tryin to say that Im fuckin limitless
You don’t wanna get with this, its far to vicious bitch
I scope out my target, the mission is finished quick
Or on some different shit, either way Im killin it
Im goin to the bank while you still dollar billin it
So think twice if ya ever wanna test me
I’ll have you sweatin bullets, wetter than a jet ski
Make you lose your drive like you never in the left seat
So you better have a stamp if you ever wanna address me





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Re: Rollinnn

Postby Just Silver » Feb 22nd, '13, 22:35

loved this one the flow and everything havent even checked the beat yet lol

i liked this better than a strictly conceptual story of course everythin has somewhat of a concept

>>than untitled good shit where u been BTW lol JW
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Re: Rollinnn

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 22nd, '13, 22:45

Ive been around..kinda stepped back from this to get my money right..but its all good now..got a bunch of new shit comin soon. especially if youre in south carolina, check the PMR mixtape comin out march 16th
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Re: Rollinnn

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 22nd, '13, 23:03

Is it really that difficult to check it? Gave you artist and the piece..
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Re: Rollinnn

Postby Just Silver » Feb 22nd, '13, 23:23

lol that got me aggravated too since its impossible for me to i have no copy n paste features :(
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Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 22nd, '13, 23:30

Yeh I mean I respect the principle of it, give feed to get feed..be different if I didnt reference anything at all
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Re: Rollinnn

Postby Spyder » Feb 23rd, '13, 00:15

battle me before you disapear again!
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Re: Rollinnn

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 23rd, '13, 00:20

Bet..I got some tracks to do for this mixtape comin up..but we can get somethin goin..PM me or set somethin up in the callouts
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Re: Rollinnn

Postby mdemaz » Feb 23rd, '13, 00:48

Raw as fuck, brah.

I like the constant multies and shit; you got a lot better at writing!
Maybe you should add more complex vocabulary and some more punchlines to your next piece to step it up.

KEEP IT UP!
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