Memory Dwellers Anonymous ft. CanadaPure

[J.R.]

beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3b_3dRbw20k
lofs: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=154515
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=154017

Canada Pure
J.R.


It's like I'm seeing friends spending sick nights and,
I look just like 'em, same type of prick hyphen,
asshole dick, I am not the grounded one that they think,
But I'm past waiting, watching them gassed, wasting,
Getting my ass pacing, while they detox hospitalized,
Its hard for the eyes, stuck, caught watching them die,
Lost, lock it inside, you need to be the strong one,
Emotionally I'm longin' but I'm not weak, I promise,
But I'm defeated on it and this was a fucking year ago,
I still fear it so badly and luck appears as though,
We are veering towards it killing me, sending me stellar,
I'm my worst enemy, hell yeah, a trapped memory dweller,
It's felled me I tell ya', shit even the girl I dated,
Her high chasing almost went and left her eyes vacant,
A weird life, ain't it? I gotta stop joggin' in circles,
Get off of this earth to move on from the hurt though,

God Produced your end, but I produced the stress,
Tyler your gone, you left, now I'm depressed.
you were short of breath, and I don't have any stored or kept,
we were best of friends, til the end, you know..you're the best.
Nothing can fill this hole in my chest, feel like I've been wronged,
swore I would never do beats for anyone else, you got two songs.
You know, that was a long time ago, four years..
every anniversary, look down on me cryin more tears.
I hear that name every once in a while, though
and only cause of you', my smile shows.
I think about that guy I used to know.
and he'd want me to refuse to slow.
So this, is to memory dwellers anonymous.
I'm feeling you, but you gotta start stopping this.
and dropping the past in the photos and the books,
you can't be excited bout the future if you don't ever look.

[J.R.]

Appreciate the feed Menzo.

[CanadaPure]

Cheers Menzo, glad you enjoyed it.

This dropped quick as fuck J.R. considering you just PMd me to get it going this morning.

[CanadaPure]

Tell me I'm beautiful.

[J.R.]

Tell me I'm sexy

[PAINKILLƎR]

Wow great drop you guys, very well written. CP your verse was beautiful, and J.R. your verse was sexy as fuck.

[Mr.DGAF]

This was really awesome. JR dropped the best verse I've seen from him in a while. You're verses are generally only taken at face value. Most times there isn't something deeper behind it or a lot of wit that comes out of it. But this was a really good verse in terms of actually making the words pop. You're rhyming is sometimes iffy but I can't complain too much, rhyming isn't everything. I didn't see any of that weird phrasing you have been critiqued on in the past, so I can tell you've definitely been listening to criticism. Good verse dude.

CP, damn. Really nice verse dude. You're pretty good already so it's nitpicking time. I feel like in a few instances you phrase things in an odd way to get the rhyme. The stellar part in this verse seemed a bit weird, but the next line is really well written. It seemed like a filler rhyme tbh, nothing too big though. Again, just nitpicking. This verse was actually one of the better ones I've seen from you.

[CanadaPure]

CP, damn. Really nice verse dude. You're pretty good already so it's nitpicking time. I feel like in a few instances you phrase things in an odd way to get the rhyme. The stellar part in this verse seemed a bit weird, but the next line is really well written. It seemed like a filler rhyme tbh, nothing too big though. Again, just nitpicking. This verse was actually one of the better ones I've seen from you.

If I recall correctly, I was having issues getting to 16 and I stole that line from another thing I had save. So it was pretty much a filler.